AsYa fun-fic:From slap to kiss || Part-6 pg-40 ||

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I READ IT AND ITS SO GOOD TEDDY..I LOVE ALL THE FUN AND JOKE..N M MISSING MY FRENDS NOW AND COLLEGE TOO...

from the start this story is so catchy..its more like a film m watchin..you have written so beautifully..and the one liners..well jawab nai..whats with that chata hai stuff..hu??? corrupt minded teddy..still love you,,,

hey zoya ne thappad mara😲

kameena immy..😆..sorry i love him more than asad now..he is so much like me...😆

i loved this ff to the core and now dont waste more time kal update zaroor kari.!!

love u deaar!!!!!😳.

MILLI😃

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wat a first meeting ...

immy got poor AAK slapped...

shaheen i hope becomes a catalyst in the story ...

pls dnt make her negative ...grey is ok

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Nice part..luvd it..thnks 4 pm..

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Zara

@ilovebieber

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

dude!!! 😲

ur story is Epic!!!!!! 👏i loved it!! im a big fan of urz now!!😳 plz pm me when u do the nxt part!!! ugh the dialogues were amaizin n i love immy! ⭐️ the story is really different!! n i really want the nxt part! plz continue soon!

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

interesting dear👍🏼..nice start..loved asad & immy's phone conversation, it was so funny, immy calling herself as mohini😆..something definately embarassing from asad's past for sure😆..do mention it in the upcoming updates..it was so much fun reding the whole part...friends bickering, leg- pulling are the the best memories one can have in whole life..😃..BUT WHAT WAS THAT AT THE END????😲..haww, omg..i am literally screaming..why did zoya slapped asad though thinking of him as imtiaaz rehmaan..poor asad..but the main question is still the same, immy doesn't look like a person who would hurt someone deliberately, then why??..😕.but oh my!!! he pointed towards asad and phatak!!..badi zor ki padi humare asad miya ko...now it would be more exciting to see how thw story progress, my mind is still stuck at the end.."Dobara aisi harkat karne se pehle ye naam yaad kar lena, Zoya, Zoya Farooqie"..WAH!👏👏 WHAT A STARTING..dil khush kar ditta...😛

enough of my nonsence..do update soon..will wait and thax for the pm and not to forget gifting us this dhamakedar piece of writing...

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Slaaap OMG!! poor Asad!!

Dude awsm update

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asyakiideewani

@asyakiideewani

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

bechara asad.first meeting par hii slap🤣

it was awesome totally love it.and thanks 4 the pm😊

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

I just LOVED it...you r such an amazing n fabulous writer i must say...so asya war is on...the story will be quite interesting when it unfolds...i just can't wait...i m so very eager...plz plz plz update very very soon...this is really a cool story...thanks for pm...update asap...kudos to you...

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

EPIC..i mst say..first tht chota...i mean chota dimag...😉..thn TAMACHA...waoo..love it...pls continue & update soon...thnks 4 d pm buddy..love ur story...

pari

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Well,Zoya actually slapped Imtiaz,according to Zoya..😆 Poor Asad..😆

I can already sense a heated chemistry between AsYa!!!😉 Damn I'm loving it!!😃 Continue soon!!