VM FF : IS THIS AN ILLEGAL LOVE STORY?? pt 10, 11pg22

kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
This FF is written by one of the best writer i have known from TVC or IF she is none other Mahuya Jaiswal am sure most of you here know her very well...she has written this story on TVC am just posting it here...hope you guyzz enjoy reading and plzz do hit the like button plus give ur feedbacks i will surely reply to all of them ...😊
and if you guys want pm plzz do mention it in ur comments 😊
and also her other story
tu mujh mein kahin baki hai will be also updated soon ...
soo have fun reading 😊


First impression always is the last impression...yeh kahawat suni thi kahi,,par mere liye yeh kabhi sahi sabit nahi hui. Jaisa mai sochti thi koi bhi chiz ke bareme use milneke pahle ,,ultimately mujhe waisa kabhi nahi mila .Pata nahi kyu hamesha ek shart sa rakhneka aadat par gayitha ke jisse mai abhi milungi woh esa hoga or esa nahi hua to miss manvi choudhry tumhe paregi ek dhamakedar slap kyuk jab tumhe tumhari mann ke mutabik chiz nahin milti too tum emotional ho jati ho or agar wo lakh galti se sahi ho jaye to tum khushi se ajeeb pagalpanti me utar ati ho.

Mujhse mera home town chut raha tha .Mai apna city se dur ek nayi city me ja rahi thi ,,apne grandpa ko chor apni cousin sister Nilisha di ke ghar ja rahi thi.HA USSSKe GHAR JAHAN MUJHE JANEKA MAN BILKULLL NAHI THA PAR dadaji ko mana bhi nahi kar pa rahi thi or na unhe samjha pa rahi thi ke mai ek third person hun husband wife ke bichh kabab me haddi bank kaise rahungi?? Kuch zada tension tha unhe mujhe leke ke mai akele ek anjan seher me kaise rahungi hostel mai or wo bhi DELHI jaise seher mai jo seher bohot famous hai acchai se zada burai ke liye. Mai DELHI ja rahi thi apni dance training puri karne k liye apni M.A pura karne ke lye ,,workshop attend karne ke liye jo aksar waha hota rahta hai .Meri cousin sister NILISHA VADHERA apne husband VIRAT VADHERA ke sath DELHI me rahti thi CHITTARANJAN PARK mein . Meri didi ek professional dancer thi ,,wo BHARATNATYAM or mai KATHAK. Par mai koi professional dancer nai thi, tabhi meri training period hi khatam nahi huyi thi. Jitna mai upne didi ko bachpan se janti thi wo koi kaam bina usme uska faida rahe nahi karti thi par mujhe uha apne ghar me rakhne me or mere dadaji ko convince karneke piche unka kya maksad tha ye mai nahi samajh payi. Mere papa mummy ka mere zindegi se nata tabhi chut gayatha jab mai just 7 standard me thi. Isliye mere life ka har decisions mere dadaji hi lete thee. ohoo sab kee bareme boli par jink bareme bolna mujhe chaiye ,,jo shayad aaj mere life me sabse important hai woh hai VIRAT VADHERA. Chahe koi kuch bhi soche ,,chahe koi kuch bhi bole par mai janti hu unke bareme sochneka ,unke bareme bolneka mujhe pura pura haq hai or sirf ye mai nahi kah rahi hu itna bada baat mai akele sabke samne kahneki himmat kabhi nahi kar pati agar woh har kadam pe mere sath nahi hote to. Haaa ye sahi hai ke unke sath mera relation jija or Sali ka tha ,,par use kahi zada shayad kuch or thaaa,,par yeh kuch or ki kahani kaise thi,,kaise hum is rishte ko bhulaye,,kyun bhulaye or kyu apna relation ko ek naya naam deneka socha ye aapko hum dono se pata chalega .Ek sawal humne shuru me kiya hai ,,humdonoko uska answer chahiye par abhi nahi ,pahle hum hamari kahani apko batayenge phir decision aapka.

Is kahani me mai MANVI,VIRAT,NILISHA,VIRAT 'S ELDER BROTHER'S daughter KHYATI jise hum pyar se kittu bulate hae bas itne jan hai .or bhi kahi koi hai jink bareme hum kahani k dauran batayenge.Hamari story me hum ek dujhe k liye honeka kab soche..kon pahle izhar kia .kon pahle kisk pas aya ,ye sabkuch hum apse aj batane ja rahe hai.or hum isliye batana chate hai kyuk,suna hai pyar andha hota hai,,love is blind,,to jab filhal hum pyar me hai ,,humdonoko isk ilaba kuch nahi dikhai de raha hai ,,to sayad hum galat hai ya phir sayad nahi isliye hum is story k zarie koi galat msg convey karna nahi chahte hai or faisla aap story sunk khud le sakte hai or humdonoko bata sakte hai .Ab hum apni kahani apke hawale karte hue ihase chalte hai or humdonoko apka jabab ka intazar rahega.

Kuch is tarah hai hamari kahani...

Man se mai Nilisha di k ghar me rukne k liye bilkul bhi tayar nahi thi.Mujhe pata nahi kyu asa lag raha tha k wo log k bichh mujhe apne apko adjust karneme bohot problem face karni paregi.Hamare ghar ka jaisa to wo bilkul bhi nahi hoga .Mera har subha mere dadaji k sath morning walk k sath hota,,kuch round hum park k chakkar katte. Waise ye Dehradun sahar tha to kafi sundar bhale hi chota ho,,mujhe har subha ihaka nazara bohott pyara lagta tha .Ab mai ye sab miss karnewali hu ,,apne frnds,,apna har wo jana pahchana galli jaha hum dhum machaye rahte thee bina byk k bhi!!offf sab piche chorte huee bohot sare luggage k sath mai sayad khud bhi ek luggage bank pahach gayi mera aj ka manchaha par us time ka unchaha city DELHI.

Mera taxi ake ruka ek ghar k samne.mai utri .saman leke ,,fare deke mai ghar k address dekhi .Ha unfortunately sahi ghar hi tha wo .Meri nazar jaisehi ghar k 1st floor pe gayi uha ek ladki mujhe dekhte huee nazar ayi.Mujhe dekhte hi andar bhag gayi.just bell bajane ja rahi thi k andar se gate kholte hue eek old lady nikli.Amma thi wo ,,servant thi ghar ki par pata nahi kyu dekhtehi man me unko asa laga jaise une servant na hi samjhu to sahi hai.Badi pyari lagi mujhe .Mujhe ghar me leke gayi.Asa nahi k ghar me kuch tha nahi par sabkuch k bichh bhi pata nahi kyu jaise bohot kuch missing thi.Ghar jaise ghar jaisa nahi tha.sab kuch bohot maintainkark rakhata hai asa to samajh araha tha par kisk liye ?? Ghar sirf saman se to nahi banta hai na!Ye mai uswoqt isliye soch rahi thi kyuk aneke pahle dadaji se suni thi k meri NILISHA DI jink sath mera pyari nyari diiiwala relation to bilkul bhi nahi hai ,wo month me adha din to out of station hoti hai.Aj iha ,,kal uha,,to ye inka ghar ,,unka ek husband bhi hai wo jabk yahi rahte hai ,,or ek 6 yrs ki ladki sayad mai abhi jisko dekhithi wo KHYATI,,IN SABKO EKSATH bina rahe kaise manage karti hogi??Mera dimag jab sara ghar ghumte huee insab bato se ulajh raha tha tab achanak mera dhyan ek room me lagi badi si sketch pe jake ruk gayi.Beautifulll,,,,mere muse bas nikal gaya.'MERE CHACHU NE BANAYE HAI',,Ye sunk mai jab piche dekhi wohi bacchii khari thi.'HIII am KHYATI,,mere chachu bolk gaye hai k aap anewali hai or kyuk abhi ghar me koi nahi hai to mai apko entertain karu'.ye expectation nahi thi meri k mujhe mere type ki koi milegi ,,ha thori choti hai actually bohot choti hai par so what dosti kabhi umar dekhk thori ki jati hai!!Mai apna hath usk tadaf bada di haste hue.

m>>hmmm mai MANVI,,,

K>>I KNOW,,,,,,will you be my friend?? I have no friends here.Aunty to always busy rahti hai ,,chachu will come in evening so if you want ,,we can spend our afternoon some tufani way.

m>>ooo tufani way,,that will b gr88888888888 ,,am wid u bt b4 doing something i have something for you wait

Mai usk liye pahlesehi ek Barbie doll set leke ayithi dadajik kahnepe.wo itna khush hui k mujhe laga mai jaise usk liye kya na kya la di.Ek bright smile k sath wo mujhe hug ki or hamari dosti is tarah hui.

k>>>can i call u aunty??

m>>> or naito kya ?? bt tumara yahi naam hai ya kuch or

k>>ha hai na,,mommy mujhe KITTU bulati thi

her eyes was teary,,,or pata tha kyu

m>> okkk then kittu

k>>mujhe chachu bhi yahi bulate hai,,par aunty

m>>hmm aunty matlab NILISHA DI

K>>> HA,,aunty ko ye kittu naam pasand nahi ata hai sayad une lagta hai khyati zada accha hai.une sabkuch bohot exactly chis type pasand ati hai,,jabk,,

Mujhe laga kittu k bato se wo bhi meri tara kahi na kahi NILISHA di ko utna like nahi kar pati hai,,kuch jaise kami si lagti hai.jitni dosti hui use pata chal gaya k ghar me meri di k rahne se jaise ek ajeeb sa mahal tyar ho jata hai ,,jaha saans lena mushkil lagta ho.Pata nahi ab ye anewale or ek character kaise honge??kon yug pahle ek din shadi me dekhithi jijaji ko .khusat tpe honge??mere jaise talkative honge?? Soch rahi thi to bohot kuch par tabhi laga har insaan ka man unk kiye kaam se jhalakta hai,,jaise ye ghar ka wo har chis,,jo ek bohot pyare hai,,ghar k bahar ek chota sa water fountain,,thik entrance pe unk mommy papa ka ek bada sa photo ,,unk apne bedroom me unk hath se banaya hua painting jise dekhk asa laga wo apne dil k sare jasbado ko bas rang me bhigo diye hai.

Sach me har ghar kuch na kuch kahta hai par ye ghar andar se kuch or bahar se kuch or kahta hai ,jo mai time k sath or samajhti rahi.Ek bin mummy papa ki bacchii KITTU jise dekhk mujhe mera bachpan ka din yad agaya ,,ek MERI DIDI jo tab tak ghar me nahi ayithi jab raat ka dus nahi bajatha.Mai apna pahla din sirf KITTU OR AMMA k sath me rahi or us insaan ka tab tak intazzar ki jo aj mere sabse kareeb hai.VIRAT,,,IS andekha ,,nahi andekha nai par utna khas yaad tab nahi tha unk bareme bohot kuch soch rahithi ,,mera soch kya rang layga ye tab pata nahi tha. raat ke aath baje ek car aneki awaz ayi jab KITTU daurke gayithi .

ignore if any mistakes and any suggestions do let me know... thanx alott for reading 😊



Edited by kulsum_virman - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

163

Views

18.4k

Users

32

Likes

330

Frequent Posters

Jannat94 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow kulsum
Writen so well
Loved it
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Hey...
Its same with tvc naa?
I liked it...
Thanks for updating here also...
Hope i m not wrong...
Awesome one...
Waiting for more parts...
Viratmanvifan31 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesum story , evry emotion is beautifully written.! ! i already read it in T.V.C... Mahuya di is a grt writer.. n thnx kulsum fo sharing it hr:)
kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: jannat89

wow kulsum
Writen so well
Loved it


thanx alott for reading jannat 😃
its written by mahuya di 😊
PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
kulsum u take her permission warna issue hojayega
kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Hey...
Its same with tvc naa?
I liked it...
Thanks for updating here also...
Hope i m not wrong...
Awesome one...
Waiting for more parts...


yup khushi its the same😊
will be updating weekly and thanx alott for reading 😊
kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: copypaste

kulsum u take her permission warna issue hojayega


arrey di ne hi bola tha yahan post karne ko 😊
kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: surovita

awesum story , evry emotion is beautifully written.! ! i already read it in T.V.C... Mahuya di is a grt writer.. n thnx kulsum fo sharing it hr:)


i know surovita i just love this FF and di writes it perfectly 😊
kulsum_virman thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

thanx alott for reading jesmy 😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 5 months ago

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · a month ago

A "What-If" Rumya Continuation Story — imagining what could’ve happened if Soumya never left Ishqbaaz and her relationship with Rudra was...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".