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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

blush blush ☺️ ☺️

arohi stutters when she sees arjun 😳 loved the way he affects her so much! and rains... the most romantic factor added to the suppressed passion 👏 WOW

superbly romantic... loved it completely!!!

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KaranKittu4eva

@KaranKittu4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

☺️☺️Woaahh Maddy this is the 2nd work I'm reading by you and it's in English and I am Very...Impressed!!!!!👏🤗The writing is terrific I didn't know u wrote so well yaaar well only 2nd one I'm reading😳 like u always write in slang but this was almost unbelievable! Great Job!! Great writing is such a treat for me!

But your hindi wala SS was amaazingg tooo yaar I really loved it❤️❤️ do update sooon!😃 do tell me others u hv written! My Fav and only hindi writer😉

Coming back to this one I LOVE RAIN! It was sooo Romantic!! OMG Like wow so well developed for an OS..!! Amazing story and the chemisry between the two is sizzling!!! Omg that one paragraph where he took her own in the rain and practically attacked her with kisses! Lolzz, awwwieee!!😳I was totally blushing there!

When he picked her up and the clouds, the lines were very well developed!👏

Thanks for this awesome OS! Hope to read more soon!

Love yaa,

Meera❤️

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9090

@9090

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

madhuuu...i am sooo gladdd dat u wrote dis OS ..pls dont mind my extra alphabets in the words..!! Its just dat, i am so glad u wrote dis story and dat too so marvellously..yes, dats d word i have for dis - simply marvellous..!! love this change in characters..wid arjun being the very outspoken, talkative one and arohi being d sincere, in love wid her work person..but, wat shall always remain constant is the amazing chemistry dey have..chahe serial ho, ya ye story ho, d sparks between dem never cease..:)) and after all d recent incidents and articles and picts of theirs, i am just happy by d fact that u have outgrown it all and are back to loving these people..just like u say, "it shall always be arjun-arohi dat i'd love d most.."... super awesome choice of words..the scenes very well described and above all, very beautifully written wid each emotion so well described dat one can not help from being mesmerized by arjuhi all over again...<3 :))))