Chaahat Ya Ibbadat..kr ss pg 34[DC]

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Story starts from the current track with little changes''

kr breakup'.let tht b a secret.šŸ˜‰...

Taani hd entered st.louis šŸ˜” bt nt rey's lifešŸ‘šŸ¼'

There is viha's breakup n again weaklings n dazzlers drama🤢'

Rey still loves kria ā¤ļøn nt at all attracted to taani infact way to rude to her bcoz she tried 2 take place of kria😔'

Sharon had recently left st.louis reason badh mainšŸ¤”'

Rey n swayum r nthng less thn dead souls missing their lady luv n bbf'sšŸ’”'.

Thou they all r officially louians bt still the divide hd cm btw their friendship'

well i dnt wanna hurt any1 with my work nt evn t_ fans..thats y she will nt b a part of this ss for long hardly 1 r 2 chappy..

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'..Prat 1'.

Dazzlers r in canteen (except rey) when weaklings enter..

Simmi:guys look the weaklings r here..

Vish: dude watch it.

Nil: oh plz tum log pata nahi samjte kya ho khud ko.har bar har baath pe hum se competation guys dnt forget u level..

Bharat: abbey zaban sambhal ke.

Vicky: kyu kya karlega ha nil sahi hi tho bol raha hai.u guys can never match our's level'

Neha: oh plz weaklings kya hai our humare kya value hai ye sabko patha hai' humne apne mehnat our apne talent par sab achieve kia hai'

Rinni: oh plz u guys n talent..

Simmi: exactly rinni tum logo n kuch achieve nahi kia hai balki achieve karke tumhe dia gaya it.wht ever u guys r 2day its only coz of kria orelse tum logo ko koi puchne wala bhi nahi tha. Aur tum logo use itni ashani se bhool bhi gayešŸ¤”..

Swayum: kisne kaha ki hum kria ko bhool gaye😔.v can never foget her aur main tho kabhi nahi after all she was nah she is my bff😭'

Neha: correct ur saying kria bff humare v forget her never😭.

Vish:u talking abt us n wht abt ur captain rey man badha kehtata na I luv her I can't live without her n 2day he hd completely forgotten her seems like kria never ever existed in his life'

Simmi: oh plz rey is nt tht devdas type n kria is the 1 who left him n ha rey used to luv her nt nw.he had move on k'

': who said I dnt luv her to u simmi n I hd moved on😔..

Everboby turned towards the sound n shocked s it is our rey..

Eb: rey😲

Rey: ha bolo simmi kisne kaha tumhe tht I dnt luv her I hd move on bolo😔..

Vicky:bt rey tut tho uske bare main baath tak nahi kartašŸ˜•..

Vish: ya man I m shocked tht I m agreeing bt ya. Tum tho uske bare main baath tak nahi kate aur tumhare llife🤢 main already koi aa bhi chukka hai isn't it?😔

Sw: wht r u saying vish.šŸ˜•

Vh: oh come on sw rey ka taani ke liye concern wht do u it is use ags banna dia jab ki hum sab jante he she doesn't deserve tht postšŸ˜’ use kria ki jagah dedi'

..woh kria ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakte😔😔.

Evb was shocked yet again it was rey n this tym his eyes were red due to anger'

Rey: mind ur tongue vish no 1 can take kria's place keep this in ur mind😔'

'.kyu nahi le sakte for god sake admit it tht u hv moved on'

Again eb turned towards voice n this tym it is naani sorry taanišŸ˜†'

T: baathaye rey kyu nahi agar aap mere liye feel nahi karte tho kyu mujhe ags banaye aur kyu jab bhi mujhe shivam ke saath dehte ho tho u get jealousšŸ˜†'.

Rey: I think u hv lost it t..😔n for ur kind information maine tum ags nahi bannaya infact it was mine n sw decision for keeping u away frm shivamšŸ˜† n regarding u n shivam let me shw u something..

Saying this he started a video of shivam with his gang'

'''''''''..video starts'''''''''

Boy: dude tera plan kya hai un louisans ko sabag shika ne ka n wht abt tht chic wht's her name'

Shv: taani wht abt her?

By: dude do u luv her?

Shv: dude hv u lost it me n tht earthlover oh plz.she is nt my type..

By: tho phir vo pyaar vyaar wht's it.wht is cooking in ur mind??

Shiv: dude tht chic she is an easy girl man just imagine koi ladki all the way fm jodhpur to Mumbai sirf ek boy ke liye aayee tho uske standard kya hoga.(his friends were watching him with confused exp.)confused they just nodded.let me clear'u knw she proposed rey n as all v knw he is a g boy like 1 women man n he rejected her tht tym she needed a shoulder tht was me I'll use her n then kick her out frm my life.us rey n sw ke wajah se I hv lost many things n this is the tym to take revenge n this chic is the way out😈..

By: whao dude wht a plan n they all started laughing'

'''''''''''.video khatam'''''''''


luv...ā¤ļø

Pooja n Alisha...


end of chappy 1..


INDEX 😳

part 1: page 1..

part 2: page 4...

part 3: page 9..

promo:page 14...

part 4 n part 5:page 20...

part 6: page 26...

Note+promo: page 30

Note:page 32


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello people😃...
i knw i hd started 1 work already n rather thn updating tht i m here with new šŸ˜†bt as i informed i hv my exams n this 1 is nt new..i hd already written it yesterday i found it n thought of just posting it😊...so evn its update will b after my exams😳...plz leave ur feedback...thought it is on d3 their will b still some changesšŸ˜‰...u ll get to knw after the story start proceeding...


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Awesum... šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Sahi jawab diya rey ne taani ko huh
nice concept
continu soon n pm me
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thnak u.😃...
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum... šŸ‘šŸ¼
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thanks alot n surely will pm u ..
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Originally posted by: zina.92

Superb n interesting
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Originally posted by: kriapatel

Sahi jawab diya rey ne taani ko huh
nice concept
continu soon n pm me


jawab tho dega ri8..kria ka rey jo haišŸ˜‰...btw thanks alot for comment😊...n sure..will pm u..
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ye sahi kaha kria ka rey he
haayyy ye sun. ne ko kitna acha lagta he
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Originally posted by: kriapatel

ye sahi kaha kria ka rey he
haayyy ye sun. ne ko kitna acha lagta he


yep...patha nahi ye rey kaha kho gaya...the new rey is not ours.😔..missing our rey so much.😭

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