Chaahat Ya Ibbadat..kr ss pg 34[DC]

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

update soon and do PM me

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payal sood

@love_arsha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome updates...
Just read all the parts and its a amazing...
Update soon and do pm me plsss...
Get well soon alisha

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesome updates..
just read al d parts together..
loved d CS of d ss...
rey stil in memeory of kria n now determined to find her after shivam said abt d truth..
loved d dance sequence d way kria n rey were attracted towards each other..
swayam lost in sharon..
loved d way u wrote everything.. waiting for wat ll happen next to KR n SS...

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Hey!! Dis is awesome!!!
1st part mein hi shita ki band baja di!!! 😆 😆
Solid hai!!!
Rey ka anger!!! Gang itna lad kyu rahe hai??!!! Dat too widout ny VALID reason!! 😡
Itna gussa rey to angry young man ban gaya hai!!!
N finally reyam ne gang ko thoda piece of mind diya!!
N khud ko bhi thoda peace of mind mila!! 😃 😆
Unka monolgue in d bus was awesome!!
Enter hote hi krisha ki feel aa gayi reyam ko!!! Connection hai boss!!! 😃 😆
N mask k hote hue bhi eyetalk kar li!!
Dono ko pata chal gaya tha k dusra hai kon!
Unka dance!!! Mai to vo video yaad kar rahi thi!!!
Unka last dance!!! D 1 b4 footloose!!!
N kriya bhaag gayi!! Use chod k chali gai!!
Swaron ka bhi eyetalk ho gaya wid d mask on!!
Sharon supported rey. Swayam was missing kriya!!
Obviously karega! Jab do bff ko dekhte ho aur tumhara bbff tunhare saath na ho to ek emptiness...ek void create ho jata hai!! Jo sirf vo bff ke aane se hi fill ho sakta hai!!
Promo se ku6 ku6 samaj aaya!! Bt sab ku6 nahi!!
Plz jab aap log fit hi jao to update kardena!! Plz!!
N jab update karoge to mujhe plz pm kardena plz!!
Plz update soon!!!

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

love the storyline and the little twist that both of you have added ...!

amazingly written and i love the song choices ...!

please PM me when you have started to work on this again and updated, would love to read further on, thanks

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Hey guys...

idk wht to say exactly but still thnx alot for all the luv n support...thnx for being there..i hd never thought tht i would b able to write anything but here i had a great experience..stepping into the shoes of writer was purely a bliss reading all those reviews everything...loved it...it meant alot to me..thnx for all the appreciation but may b tht period hv to end...really sorry..so sorry i m discontinuing this story as well as giving up on writing.reason i dnt knw i guess aly was my support system n without her i dnt think i could gv my 100% i wouldn't b able to write...really sorry i knw i m being selfish bt cant help it...i knw i cant so i m giving up bt thank u all for always being great support...luv u all...

luv

Pooja & Alisha(cant stop my self frm writing it)

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: love_arsha
Awesome updates...
Just read all the parts and its a amazing...
Update soon and do pm me plsss...
Get well soon alisha

Thank u so much...😊

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome updates..
just read al d parts together..
loved d CS of d ss...
rey stil in memeory of kria n now determined to find her after shivam said abt d truth..
loved d dance sequence d way kria n rey were attracted towards each other..
swayam lost in sharon..
loved d way u wrote everything.. waiting for wat ll happen next to KR n SS...

thank u so much..😊..really means alot...bt it is dc...sorry😭

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil
awesome update...
finally all are togethr but still waya from each other...
dance was amazing...
wanna read more...
thnx fr d pm...

thanks alot...😊

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: zona_malik
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Loved it

infact loving all ur works

u r in my buddy list already so just PM me ur works

UPDATE SOON :)

thank u so much..😊

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