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muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

woh nasha hai mere pyaar main ,

ke tumhe aana padega !
maana ke galat kiya hai main,
par phir bhi ,
tumhe mujhe apnana padega !


gaya woh zamaana ,
jab bin galti kiye bhi ,
rota tha deewana!
hum to woh aashiq hai tere ,
ke bin tere hue ,
sang tere jeena bhi mujhe sazza hai lage !


tujhe apna banaana hai
teri ruh main bas janaa hai
janta hu ,
kuch der lagagi !
par tab tak
sirf tujhe chu kar hi kaam chalaana hai!😉😆
zaalim tu kya jaane😡
yeh sazza hai
ke amrit paas hai ,phir bas paani se kaam chalana hai


stilll more...

wow that was just brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 44
maan ' ask me, tumharen itne pass hoten huen bhi.. he sat down close to her in the bed, he softly took her hand in his & kissed the back of her hand. Only he knows how much he has to clear his mind every now & then.
She snapped her hand back & turned her face.
Pari, Rahul & Niti came to visit her in the hospital. It was little different & odd for them.
Maan had told them earlier they were together now & he needed some time to sort things between them. He requested them some space until then. He would do the explanation latter. But last night he was so worried he called Rahul & Niti. Niti informed Pari since she was very close to Geet. Pari had just come back from her almost a month long honeymoon.

Rahul was with him all night. Pari & Niti joined him in the morning. Pari came & hugged geet & whispered in her ears tumhe yeh khadus hi mila
geet muffled her smile
maan glared at pari ' I heard that
pari giggled
Niti was little short of words. They have been seeing Maan with Sam & now this change in relation, they had to handle it carefully.
Pari settled herself next to geet ' kya huwa tumhe? Kuch good news hain kya?
Geet looked at maan
Niti & Rahul looked at each other in shock & then gave a questioning look to Maan
maan rolled his eyes in disbelieve.
Geet gave him a fuming mean look. Maan made a innocent look pouting cutely.
Maan informed them before every one start assuming ' she had a upset stomach
pari laughed ' zaroor tumne iska dal chawal kaya hoga
maan snapped - its all because of her ghass - phuss
Geet smiled again.
Oh Maan was just falling for her all over again.
Rahul could so see those emotions in his eyes. They had never seen him like this before. Especially after hearing the whole story from him last night.. Rahul hated Maan totally & won't be wrong to say.. he saw Geet as some angel now. He couldn't tell Niti anything yet & was just hoping Niti shouldn't land up saying anything that would complicate their already sore relationship. but thank god everything went on smooth.

Pari helped geet with changing while Maan took care of the discharge work. He met up with the dr again & took the list of food she could start with & how she could slowly be introduced to normal food.
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A month had passed after Geet was back home. Initial few days she was on very bland diet, that maan was forced to have too. Every time he drank that plain tasteless soup his mind felt it would just explode imagining some one living on these kind of diet. After 3 days he made her simple khichadi. After seeing her stomach settling well with it he insisted on other food. Which she only had to cook. She had began to spend most of the evening now days cooking. She would try new new recipes. All her favorite dishes. Even now sometimes she would get uncomfortable had it been spicy. It all made him feel so sinful.
All this becoming too much for him.. he so desperately needed to break down, vent out his emotions. He could so easily find peace in her arms. But now he couldn't even hug her like before. She would stiffen & that hurt him even more. Earlier he knew she was no one.. but now his heart ached. It slit his throbbing heart further.

The only other person he could think was Sam. He just called her & broke down. He cried like a baby to her.
Sam ' shoo.. shoo.. baby!! plz don't
tears welled up in her eyes. Plz maan aisen mat karo
They met up at a restaurant that afternoon. They had their lunch. He had so much of making up to do with her. So much to explain
Sam ' I needed u so much Mk she complained
He just hugged her & pleaded sorry. Sam kissed his cheeks .. that's exactly how Geet saw them.
Oh sh*t is all Maan could say
his heart feared her reaction. Wat will he tell her now he thought.
To his dismay Geet smiled sweetly at Sam. There was not a tinge of jealousy or hurt in her face. She looked genuinely confused.
Her composure scared the hell out of Maan.

He was no where near her heart was so evident. But the feel of her husband with another women was also not there, not out of love but at least, for the sake of their relation. Like she didn't care.. she was still that cold self. He stood exactly where he was far away from her. It was like she was away from all the emotions. Nothing bothered her ever. His caring, his affection, the time they spent together. The little bit of fun they had together.. all those dinner, breakfast together.. nights of sleep in his arms, nothing.. it meant nothing to her. Above all his sincere effort of all this days just fell flat. It failed to even reach the cold wall she had build around herself forget breaking it.
Thanks for the likes & comments
lots of love
muskan
- PART 43 PREV NEXT PART 45 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy Me 1st ⭐️

Awesome Part 😊
Loved whole Hospital scene 😉
What does She n He want yr
Continue Soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates👏
i hope their misunderstanding gets cleared soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow, we are in for another round of misunderstandings...
Well that will hopefully bring them closer... Something Maan couldn't do despite his endless efforts and care. Sometimes jealousy works wonders... If at all Geet is feeling that right now. Please don't leave us at this point. Continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
phir se gadbad kardiya na maan baabu...
now how will he clarify this to geet...
waiting for geet reaction...
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful, emotional update.. te wya geet in hospital and te way my maan ki friends cuming to see her and te way they teasing my maan was so lovely cute.. te way my maan taking care of his geet and feeling guilty thinking bat her past and drowning in guilty and wants to break down and te way calling sam and breaking own was so emotional.. te way geet seeing them with cold reaction which pierce my maan thinking he didt meant anything to her was so painful..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hello dear<div></div>


Hi
Loved t lines u wrote
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nyc part
but lolz sam ko v kiss karne ki jarrorat thi kya
woh kisi or ke sath hai na ab?
waiting for next

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