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chalo hee ka fast to tutta
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waiting for todays quota...😉
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Originally posted by: muskanp


This means a lot to me

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 43
They both cleared the kitchen & went to the bedroom. Before going into the washroom, maan pecked her cheek.. thanks for the lovely dinner. Her hand instantly raised to, but then stopped mid air as the realization sunk in!! he was her husband.

His clenched his fist controlling his hurt. He was instantly raged but he looked away in disappointment. His eyes had a mixed emotion.. anger, frustration, hurt, disappointment. It was only a peck for god sake Geet he muttered under his breath walking into the washroom. She lowered her lashes & hugged herself. She wondered if she made a mistake having that lunch.. making that dinner. Did she give him any wrong signals. She was lost in her own agony & confusion when he came out the washroom & scooped her in arms & laid her in the bed.

Maan - Geet I want .. his gaze scanned her face.. longingly looked at fearing lips & anxiously questioning eyes
he cleared his throat.. I want to make love to u, but I know u r not comfortable
I don't think I really can always hold myself back
mujhe yeh sab nahi aata
he settled next to her, nuzzling into her hair hugging her closer u mad or not mad.. I long for u.. he paused very different from u can imagine.. his breath fell uneven on her skin
she could feel him close.. all over her. Her back was plastered to him.
His hands slid around her waist desperately.

She turned to face him.. main aapko nahi rokungi..she spoke nervously. Her eyes were closed tight shut a tear forming aapka haaq hain.. she turned cold completely
his heart ached to see her give in like this. He smiled sadly & spoke wittily
nahi baba tumhara kya bharosa.. tum tho baat baat pe haat uta dethi ho
placed a soft peck on her nose.
She was still stiff. He slowly caressed her back resting his chin on her head.
She was still not comfortable near him & today her tummy seemed to stress her unusually. A sever ache increasing her discomfort made her toss around. She was panting.. sweating even though it was not that warm inside the room. She didn't want to disturb him, she slowly tried to slip. He got up at once.. kya huwa.. tumhari meditation time hogaya kya? itni jaldi!
geet - nahi she spoke in irritation
mujhe wash room jana hain
maan ' main challon
she was at peek of irritation.. she just left from there
maan ' I was only trying to help he said dipping his head back into the pillow
she held her stomach & walked up & down. The pain was getting worse. It was a weird pain. So bad she began to cry.. she coughed & threw up all of a sudden. Her stomach was painfully churning. She had not felt this much of pain in her stomach. Even after non stop bowl moments she was still feeling infuriated pain. She called out Maan in screeching voice as she collapsed
he rushed to her, she looked exhausted
geet - mujhe bahut stomach pain ho raha hain
maan ' methi lavoon
she screamed at him in irritation. Its not wat u think it is
he made a cute baby face. Nahi mama used to give us methi with dhai
he rushed to the kitchen & got her methi & dhai
she refused to eat anything. Try karo shayad u will better
she gritted her teeth mujhe bahut dard ho raha hain maan
he got really worried & rushed her to the hospital.
She was admitted at once & her stomach was flushed. They ran few tests & put her on drips. The whole night Maan spend pacing restlessly, he called Rahul & requested to be with him.
She slept with the effect of medicines.
Next day dr visited her in the ICU. Dr Shanti was Geets regular dr too.
Dr. - how r u feeling now Ms khurana?
Maan stood rooted. She was Geet Khurana .. her id .. her insurance card, every where. She not once hesitated to tag his name all this years. his heart welled up. all his name gave her was pain.
Geet could manage to nod
dr ' wat did u eat yesterday? Any change in diet? Reports main food poisoning jaisen kuch nahi hain.
Seems like upset stomach.
Geet ' spoke meekly ghar ka khana
dr went through records & reports ' u r used to a light meal. That could have triggered all this. Just take it easy. Keep it light for few days.
Maan ' wo normal khana nahi kha sakti kya?
Dr smiled & looked at geet. Dr had known her as widow & always suggested her to move on. Seeing maan she gave an understanding look
geet ' he is my husband Maan Singh Khurana
dr was bit taken a back, but then she couldn't get into her personal life
dr looked at Maan replied ' she could have normal diet, but not all at once. Her body is not used to such foods for years now. Dheren introduce karna padega. One at a time.

after dr left he screamed at her bahut shauk tha na salad khane ka.. aur khawo salad.
She looked at him in annoyance ' mujhe koi shauk nahi tha ghass phuss kane ka..she snapped back
he lifted his brows.. hearing her address salad as ghass ' phuss
she held her stomach in pain ' I had to have discipline in life
its not easy to keep ur mind clear

maan ' ask me, tumharen itne pass hoten huen bhi.. he sat down close to her in the bed, he softly took her hand in his & kissed the back of her hand. Only he knows how much he has to clear his mind every now & then.

She snapped her hand back & turned her face.

Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
Muskan
-PART 42 PREV NEXT PART 44 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳

Yay me first


Welcome to the Maaneet roller-coaster world!

One moment when u think now all is fine and the next moment
It goes boom😲


After such a lovely dinner things again take a different turn
Can't even blame Geet as its an act of impulse
Maan loosing his cool
and Geet feeling guilty


Maan earnestly puts forward his desires and she mechanically gives in
hurting Maan yet again
They really have a Dard ka Rishta
No matter how much they try the end up hurting each other😒


Geet not well
so true she hadn't eaten anything except salads for years and suddenly heavy masalawala khana
We were so happy with the turn in events that even we failed to realize it takes time for your body to get immune to sudden changes in your diet.


Aw! Maan was so cute The Methi and dahi😳
Poor Geet was in so much pain aur Maan ki bajaai😆


Doctor shocked meeting MSK
wonder how will Rahul and gang react🤔


Maan angry on Geet yet again but Geet's outburst proved that she had accept this life to keep a check on her desires😒


Hope these two shattered souls overcome all the pain of past and move towards a better
tomorrow
😊


Fabulous update Muski
just loved it
Thanks for updating
🤗
How are we wait after such updates😳

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
r

now maan's condition is like this

not funny...i was just trying to find similarity
like he tries to move one step ahead but sumthing or the other hits him and he is stumbled 2 steps back!!!!

he does have an effect on her!!! but she is no whr ear accepting it and is probably unaware of it
as i say only love and time can heal her wounds.
she has shut herself sooo tightly

itna pyaara dinner ke baad she is so sick... maan has to take it real real real slow..
and its clear that she never liked her deciplined life...she wanted to live but she forced herself and it became her habit!!!!

for maan...he really has to hold himself back...
am so eagerly waiting to know what hap
pens next because its like the hi-point of the story...
ahhh one more pleashhh😳
Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...👏

these are 2 confused souls...

one takes 1 step ahead... but the bitterness of her past drags her 2 steps back...

while the other keeps controlling himself... but still out of no where its slips a lil...

therez still a lot for Maan to bear...
Edited by its_me - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Awesome update!

Poor Geet got an upset stomach after eating all those spicy foods! 😒
Edited by memyselfndI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god geet food poisining
di pls give the precap na
and yes once again amazing
he said he wann to make love to her ossum

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Posted: 12 years ago
ask me, tumharen itne pass hoten huen bhi.😆😆

This line of Maan cracked me up, he is too adorable & blunt too but years of self discipline not only had controlled her mind but body too...poor Geet can't eat even to her heart's content. The positive thing is they have started to fight like husband & wife now😊

Loved it

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