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Hello pretty ladies😊am here to present my first ever os😃
tis is my first time haan so plz bear wid my writing😳
here u go😉


~ ~***BIN TERE***~ ~
The room was filled wid an enchanting fragrance,the sparks frm the litted candles wre providing glooming effect to the already enlighted room,heart shapped balloons n rose petals strewed over the floor was making difficult to view the floor beneath it,romantic combo of white n red rose petals were spread all over the king sized bed.And there sitted the breathtakingly beautiful bride at the centre of the bed.

She ws wearing a heavy maroon coloured lengha golden beads wer scattered here n there all over the heavy lengha,her choli ws short fish cut at the end wid baby sleeves,her ears wer dangling wid heavy jhumkas,combo of traditional n antic jewellery ws adorning her swan like neck and hands giving her traditional yet modern look,her both hands were filled wid dark coloured henna till her elbow,the little makeup tat she did to her already beautiful face ws beyond eternity.The moonlight tat ws peeping through the window ws adding extra charm to her beauty.

But little tat she know her khold eyes hs missing its original sparks...her heart ws pounding heavily she ws continuously asking the same question to her own heart'jab mein s shaddi se khush nai hoon toh mein s shaddi kiliye haan q kaha' tears were on its verge in coming out from her big brown eyes.

The foot steps tat ws approaching her made her to come out frm her chain of thoughts..she had an sudden urge to kick his ass n push him out of her sight she heared the turning of the door knob n find the tall figure entering into the room,her heart ws going dhak dhak wid his each step.

He sat on the bed and got a good view of his beautiful bride for sometime n finally unable to control his desire he begin to pull the kungat over her head,she clenched her fist to control her sob.Once he pulled up the kungat fully the sudden act by her made him to shut his ears tightly to escape from the ear perzing sound frm his hot wife.On getting the clear view of the man sitting in frnt of her nothing escaped frm her mouth rather she ended up wid screaming TUM!!!!!!!!!!

Flashback starts

Arohi ws walking disoriented on the road tears were continuously flowing frm her ever so expressive eyes she clenched her shawl tightly to control her outburst she cudnt gt clear vision of her surroundings everything ws getting blurred fr her bcoz of her heavy tears,arjun-jay convo tat she hd heard few minutes ago ws getting fogged in her mind once again.

Jay: yaar arjun tu kab tak tere dil ki baat use chupa lungi its high time yaar spit it out...
Arjun: i know yaar par mein kya krun jab b woh mere samne wohthi hai muje kuch dekai nei deta propose karna toh dhoor ki baat hai...
Jay:abey tu konsa century me reh rahiho ye toh facebook aur twitter ka jamana hai!
Arjun:chup kar kuch b badle par pyar toh pyar haina...kabi kisi ladkiko sacha pyar karo tab samajme aayega...
Jay:mein tere jaise nhi hongi jab muje kisi ladki se pyar hoga me us din hi usko propose karungi aur agle din shaddi aur wahi saal mera bache b mere godhme hongi utna potential hai muje he said n winked at him
Arjun let out a small laugh at his pagal frnd n said dekthen hai!!!

Arohi's head started to spin who had overheard ter convo...arjun hw cud u do tis to me???par isme uska koi kasur nai hai mene kabi apne dil ki baat use kaha b nai mein toh pagal hoon ye soch kar betihen ki woh b mujse pyar karthi hai but i ws wrong he loves someone else so deeply and so madly.

Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me and i can't be
without you

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri lagne lagi har saans bhi
khaali(lost and lonely)

Bin tere,bin tere,bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawoyon main bin tere

Raah main roshini ni hai kyun haath chora
Iss taraf sham ne kyun hain apna muh mora
Yun ke har subah ik bercham si baat bangayi

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri lagne lagi har saans bhi
Khaali(lost and lonely)

Bin tere,bin tere,bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawoyon main bin tere

She dono wat makes her to accept the marriage proposal which came all of a sudden,the thought tat arjun ws no more in her life made her so depressed tat she showed least interest in her marriage celebrations.Finally the day hs cme wre she hs to tie tis pure bonding wid the man whom she nt even hd a single glimpse, she thought tat destiny ws playing some cruel games wid her.

But little tat she know the man sitting next to her on the mandab ws none other than her love who has readily accepted the proposal without any second thoughts wen his mom ws asking abt his permission.So it ws all of a love come arranged marriage.

Flashback ends

Once arohi cme out of her thoughts she started hitting him kyun nai bataya kyun nai bola u pagal gandhe aadmi pataye muje kitna dard hua jab muje pata chala ki u love someone else she started hitting him continuously widout any break...arjun who ws completely unaware of the fact ws simply staring at her wen the hits started to get hard on him he held her hands and smashed his lips on her,arohi ws hell shocked at first but soon she started to respond his soulful kiss the kiss ws so long n passionate arjun started to nipple her lower lip and licked her upper lip to get her permission she intently gve the path by opening her mouth slightly his tongue started to play with hers she started to moan against his lips finally he showed some mercy on her, pulling apart he started to nuzzle her neck and bite his fav spot,a sharp gasp escaped frm her mouth.

After tis lambe waala make out session he cupped her face said arohi muje zara sa b idea nai hai ki tum q mujh par gussa ho but see ab karne kiliye aur b bahut kaam baaki hai dek ye bichara bed toh humare liye kabse intezaar kar rahihe bura maan jaaiga chalo n winked at her.She giggled and hugged him tightly to ensure that its not a dream but her blissful reality.

Thanx for reading😳
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Arjuhi_kk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy!!!! 1st
res!!!
congo deepika⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjuhi_kk


yayyy!!!! 1st

res!!!
congo deepika⭐️

thanx re nw read n do let me know hw it is 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayee...awsm hun...
dhasu wala story...
haha are arohi ko puchna to caiye tha na..hadd hai..hw can she assume?
aww mere arjun ko kuch bhi pata nai hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So..it was a love cum arrange marriage fr arjuhi...hmmm..short simple n cute os..n yes thoda hot bhi:* loved it! Next os kab de rhi ho????;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's just awsomeee n list line were superb hahaha bichara bed goddd I just live this type of story
Jay aha Wht a bold man love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo deepika on your first work
nice OS dear - please do write more of OSs - would love to read them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one really u should write more os and if you want can continue this also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats deepika for ur 1st os :-). Very lovely and sweet os. Its a love com arrange marriage for arjuhi and destiny want to be them together and they finaly together. Love jay and arjun's conversation. Arjun is very naughty usko bichare bed ki bohot chinta hai :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oya hoya ..deeps sweet heart writer ban gayi 🥳

such a cute update!! n thori hot vi 😉

hahha arjun was very tans about their bed 😆

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