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H2 - 26








KM

Dadi made Maan to lye on te bed and cover him with duvet



Maan got irritated : Dadi pls im not pt

Dadi : yes till ur not cure u have to listen to me

Geet who was standing near te door giggled , Maan glared at her, she turn her face



Maan : no way

Dadi became sad : ok Maan as ur wish, who im to say

Maan : oh god, ok Dadi

Dadi : hmm wait let me bring Soup for u

Anni brought te soup : Dadi I brought soup for bhai

Dadi : hmm let me fed him


Geet was watching all tis, she want to go near him , but scared wat will be his reaction after all she hurt him, so she standing near te door watching him




Maan too saw her standing , but he didt give glance to her, he wants her to cum to him, already once he have open up to her thinking she too have same feelings for him, but she only push him saying he don't have any place in her life




Tis time too he is thinking coz he saved her. She got pity on him, but he don't need any pity nor love or anything from her. He went to his hell again.

Anni got a call and went out ,

Dadi : hmm I will bring ur medicine


Maan try to lye down, he had a bandage on his shoulder, so he is struggling, Geet saw him but hesitate to go near, suddenly Maan finch in pain, Geet at once hold him to make him lye properly, Maan look at geet , both look at each other.




Maan was staring at her eyes searching something, Geet too drowning in his eyes, softly caressing his shoulder like soothing his pain, both didt know wen they came so close each other, they forehead touched , they breath was fanning at each other



Dadi suddenly enters : Maan

Suddenly Maaneet came to sense wat they were doing, Maan at once snap her hand , Geet felt hurt and saw him , tears were shedding from her eyes

Geet made him lye , but he snap her , again, Geet stood up,

Dadi : wat happen beta

Geet : no Dadi he was struggling to get up so im helpin, before she finish

Maan : I don't need any help from others in rude tone

Dadi : Maan she is not others , she is ur wife

Maan look at her with smirk : wife

Geet know wat he is saying and she tilt her head down, in guilty



Dadi : then wat from te time u were in hospital bechari worried so much, she didt have anything still

Maan : I didt asked her to starve for me

Dadi : Maan tis is te way to talk with her

Maan took his medicine and closed his eyes

Dadi : Geet beta cum eat some thing

Geet : no Dadi im not hungry

Dadi in stern voice : now u r cuming wat u all think , no one listen to me, now chup chap cum with me and eat something




Geet went dadi before glancing once at Maan, after she went Maan open his eyes and saw


Dadi, Anni, Geet having they dinner, Geet was eating for name sake, she was thinking abt Maan


Dadi : Geet beta eat nicely, see if u too fallen ill who will look after Maan

Geet : hmm Dadi

Suddenly they heard coughing sound from Maan ki room, Geet at once washed her hands and rush to his room

Dadi : hare Geet beta

Dadi and anni was shock to see her , but happy one side, thinking abt them


Maan ki room, Maan was coughing and trying to take te water, but eh cant and try to fall , but Geet holds him , patting his back, give him water,


Geet : r u ok Maanji, u can call me naa

Maan at once snap her and avoid te water, still coughing



Geet : pls Maanji have some water pls




Maan still snapping her hand, Geet got irritated , she holds his cheeks and forcefully fed te water, Maan drank te water , glaring at her, after he drank te water, he snap her hand again, Geet got irritated te way he is snapping her again and again


Geet : Maanji u wont became ashes if I touch u

Maan look at her : hmm not me, u te one who will feel leech sulking u wen I touch , remember Geet u only said tat




Geet at once stood , closing her mouth, she run to her room. Maan got frustrated thinking te way she affecting her. Her tears prick him but he didt care , like tat he is thinking




Dadi enter te room: Maan wat happen

Maan : nothing Dadi , I need water so

Dadi sat beside him , caressing his head, soo Maan slept


Geet run to her room, lye on her bed and started to cry, te way Maan said , yes she is te one said tat words to him, but now wen he repeat it she felt some one prickling her heart with needles,



Geet : how im going to say u Maanji wat u meant to me, how im going to correct my mistake, wen I saw u in te pool of blood wat went through me, how im going to say tat , te way ur lying unconscious on me,wat I went through how im going to say to u, but pls give one chance Maanji , pls once, don't hate me, don't hate me, I cant bear it




Geet : im sory Maanji im sory,


Suddenly she got from te bed : yes why im feeling all tis she asked herself,. Why I feel te pain wen he say those words, why I feel his pain , why I died wen I see him with blood, yes im in love with him, yes I love him, she wipes her tears and smile at her




Geet : hmm I love him ,yes i love him





Geet went to Maan room and sat beside him, caressing him, watching hi te way he sleeping, she smile, she kiss him on his forehead and closed her face due to shy







Te whole night she was watching him without blinking her eyes, like drinking his feature,




Early morning, she saw Maan , kiss him on his forehead , got ready ,went to near by temple, to prayed for Maan


Geet standing in front of god : thanku god for giving another life, tis time I wont lose it. Thanku for sending Maanji in my life thanku


She return Km, before any one wake up


Geet enter Maan room and saw him sleeping, Dadi was not there, she sat beside him, took his head and place near her chest caressing his hair, she kept te Prasad on his forehead and kiss him, tears flowing from her eyes, she caress him for some time, Maan stirs in his sleep, at once Geet place him on te bed and went out to call Dadi




Dadi was helping Maan in eating and taking medicine , Geet was still standing on te door watching all tis, but she had a new glow in her face which was notice by Maan. Maan to know she was there but didt look at her , which hurt Geet more, but she is happy tat she atleast near to him



Adi came to met Maan, they both were decision abt the business and Maan ask abt Rahul case

He left after some time


After some time, his lunch time, Dadi was so tired so she took nap, Geet don't want to disturb her , and Ani too was not there, so she decided to take te lunch for him,


Maan was sitting and seeing his files, Geet cleared her throat , Maan didt respond, Geet place te food tray on et table,


Geet : Maanji ur lunch

Maan : hmm

Geet took te files from his hand

Maan got angry : wat te hell u think of urself ,


Geet didt say anything, took te tray and started to fed him, BUT Maan didt have it and turn his face, Geet again hold his face and try to fed him,





Maan : u don't need to so all tis and act in front of dadi, I know how to eat

Geet : psl Maanji

Maan : who are u to force me

Geet : im nothing to u, but pls consider me as ur caretaker pls,


Maan (st) : atleast she can say wat relation we have hmm caretaker


Geet (st) : how can I say wen I hurt u so much Maanji, did I have tat right again





She fed him, he stare at her all te while, after he finish , she give him medicine and he slept


Days went still Maan avoids her, but Geet know she deserve his ignorance but didt say anything


After 1 week, Maan ki room


Maan was getting ready for office, he was struggling with his tie as still his bandage was there on his shoulder, Geet saw him




Geet : Maanji were u going

Maan didt say anything, he try to tie his tie, but atlast he throwed it, he took his files and sat on te bed to put his shoes


Geet : r u going to office ,

Maan didt say, he is again struggling to put te shoes


Geet holds him : Maanji u cant wear ur shoes too properly , pls don't go u r straining urself




Maan didt listen to her throw his shoes, put his slippers , and try to leave, Geet holds her hand

Geet : psl Maanji don't go for me

Maan : I wont listen to care taker

Geet shock to hear her words cuming to her again


Geet : the listen to ur wife , im ur wife Maanji, I know we don't ahev proper rituals, but u have tied tis chain to me


Maan look at her : hmm u only said tis chain does't tie us In any relation, tis mere chain wont make us husband wife, hmm




She got shock and her hold on Maan losened, she start at him, Maan look at and left te room


Geet : go do wat ever u want wat bothers me, who im to u, always do wat u think , don't listen to others dust dhanav




Geet : oh god Geet wat u said, he is already not well, u idiot, go and stop him

Geet rush down caling : Dadi Dadi

Dadi came hearing her scream, before Maan reach te door, Geet close te door and stood in between him and Door,



Maan : Geet move

Geet : no

Dadi : wat happen

Geet : Dadi he is going to office see him he cant wear his tie too

Dadi : Maan wat is tis

Maan : pls Dadi Im having a imp meeting




Dadi : I have informed Adi to cancel it now go and take rest

Geet smirk at him

Maan : Geet I said move

Geet : no

Maan try to punch te door, but Geet stood in front, Maan stop his fist a inch away from her face,

Maan : dammit, he look at fearful face and left to his room , before seeing Geet ki smirk


Dadi smile at his grandson ki antics

Geet was happy tat she stopped him


Maan was fuming in his room, Geet came ,

Geet : Maanji have ur medicine, if not I wil call Dadi




Maan was fuming , at once Maan hold her hand and twisted ,


Maan : how dare u stop me , ahan how dare, wat u think of urself ahan, wen u feel u will cum near me or if u don't want u wile lave me, im not ur puppet to obey ur orders




Geet hand was paining due to Maan tight hold, tears were flowing from here eyes: Maanji


Maan : don't cal my name, wat u think if I confess my feelings to u im ur slave, no im hell, a real hell, tat was a big mistake I did in my life, wat to do seeing ur body I got carried away



Geet closed her eyes hearing tis words she know Maan was not in sense , he is pouring his frustration , Maan too didt know wat he is talking but eh want to get ride of his gussa ,


Maan : dare u cum close again to me, u were right u wont deserve me, MSK, who get wat he want, but not u

Geet : pls Maanji, tears were flowing


Maan : don't show ur tears to me


Geet was shivering , Maan was looking at her eyes and her shivering lips, he brought her close to him, Geet was scare to see Maan ki fuming eyes.they both can hear each other heart beta which was beating so fast,




Maan look at her shivering lips, he at once close te distance placing his lips on her shivering lips, he just placed it, Geet was shock , a current pas through her whole body feeling his lips o her, her struggle stoped , she was staring at him , Maan suddenly saw te stiffeness and left her at once, like pushing her


Maan : dare u cum close to me, stay away from me , he left te room



Geet close her mouth with hand and sat on te floor holding her heart which was spacing heavily, she look at her hand which has a mark due to his tight hold ,


Maan (st) : oh god wat I have down, he was hitting te bed rimp again and again, wat I did , why is should feel , she did mistake she have too face it




Dinner time, all were having dinner , Geet was looking at him but he avoid her , Geet stood to leave


Dadi : Geet beta u didt have ur dinner

Geet looking at Maan : no Dadi im not hungry I will have later




She went to her room, MAAN too left his dinner


At night Maan came to Geet ki room and saw her sleeping with tears in her eyes, holding her hand




Maan wipe her tears , kiss her cheeks, took her hand and kiss te mark , he caress her hair and softy kiss her lips and went to his room



After tat day Maan avoid Geet, Geet to watch him by standing near his door, but now she feel him and she know she loves him, so wat ever he says or do she decide to face it

























PRECAP :DADI GIVING IDEA TO GEET

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update👏
Maaneet moments are so passionate😳
Both of the MU each other..Geet was in guilt and maan mu her
Waiting for their confession
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
le ajj maan in full dd form
enta gussa a re bapre .
poor geet ajj srif crying crying😭.
geet taking caring of maan but maan avoid geet 😲😲.
maan knw what geet feel but he cant do anything now
chalo finally geet ko ehsassa hua apne pyare ka 😳😳.
but now maan nahi hay uske sath😕😕.

maan going to office geet tries to stop him but who listens 😆😆.
finally geet say she is maan wife 😉😉.
maan ne geet ko geet ki bat yaad dila dia

maaneet kiss hayeee😳😳.
geet knw she do wrong but now she what do ???

maan leaving india forever😲😲😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
he turned the plate to her
her every words came to her piercing her soul..
she can feel she is in love..
maan confused with her love n pity..
first kiss..
even in anger too he claimed her..
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Posted: 12 years ago
both are having pain in their hearts

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