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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
that was such a lovely update :) loved it
awww shaleen was seeing his pics with sana :)
flashback was awesome
love the way he was praising her :)
Mr. Delhi 😆
wow shaleen is planning a surprise for sana
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon




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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
This was so cute!!!
Hayee Shaa looking at that pic <3<3
the flash back part was super cutee!!!
Ahem Ahem Mr. Delhi roz unki tarif karta hain :P😉😆
so everyone feeling they have feeling for each othe ...sahi kaha, umeed par he toh duniya kayam hai :P😆
aahaa toh they are planing something for here...
lovely update, contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
socha tha thoda late update karungi par dimaag mein bas shana


hi ghumte rehte hai so update jaldi ban gaya ...ab kaise hai yeh


aap log decide karo...

Part2

Nw it was just 1 more day remaining before sana's bday..bt that also went up in work.. nw just 3hours. Remaining..

Shaleen's pack up was dne bt he was still in his vanity thinking of smething'or should I say sme1'

Shaleen: this is the same vanity jahan we did so much fun..

All those joyful memories were falling in front of his eyes'.he took out his lapi and started seeing the old episodes of arjun the one he did with sana'and then the episode whn riya died'.its was sana last day of shoot'he remembered very well''

FLASHBACK:

All wished her luck and asked her to take care of her health'.she met each and every person of crew nw her cast cum friends were waiting in the green room to bid her goodbye..

Even on that day all were watching shana scenes together' and discussing abt the off 'screen moments'

Sana: the most wonderful days of my life... I will miss them so much'

Shaleen: ab roegi dekhna.. my water tank..

Sana: shut up.. mein nahi roungi..

Sid: pakka nahi roegi na..??

(n slowly the time came when Sana had to finally leave'she

collected her belongings, her gifts from fans'. Hugged everyone n

gave a side-hug to Shaleenn realized a drop of tear on her hand

which rolled off from Shaleen's eye'.).. bt she made him hold her

stuff..


(others also walking behind them_)


sana: hold my stuff... otherwise i vl be tired and follow me..

shaleen: ha madam aur kuch juice lao apke ya coffee.. ya.

Sana: bas bas aajke liye itna hi kafi hai...(reaching to her car, she

turns around and hold his face in her hands, looking into his

eyes)shaa U r ok naa.

Shaleen(smiling): Ya m fine'.bt u take care.. and call me if u need

help...

(n finally she went to Sidi ' n whispered in his years')

Sana: Shaaa ko kehna ki mera toh pata nahi'but vo zaroor roya

hai'.aur agar mai thodi der aur ruki toh shayad mai bhi'.

Everyone in chorus: we miss u sana//

Sana: I vl miss u too guys.. mein sirf show se ja rahi hoon duniye

se.. so mera phone aur mera ghar dono ki paas mein hai mujhse\

milne ana hi padega aur call bhi karna padega..

Ketan: dhamki wooh bhi openly..

Sana: ha de rahi kya kar lega..

Sid: kuch nahi tujhse milne ayenge bas..warna yahan koi hai jo

tere bhi pehle hame mar dega

Sana: that's like my good boys.. bye guys' love u all

Everyone was missing their best buddy their chirpy and dimpled smile sana..

Bt shaleen he was missing his first co-star, friend, companion in

every prank, the only person he could share anything with, and

his'''..(first love may be)'he has always felt different with her.. he

has a lot of female friends.. bt this feeling only came with her...


Bt Life always moves on'.and everyone has flow with it...

Aftr few days.. it was lunch time,

Sid: yaar sana ke khane ki badi yaad aa rahi hai mujhe'

ketan: ha panner ki sabzi wooh birayni hay pane aa raha hai

Shee: call karte usee ' shaleen call her nw..

Shaleen called her ..put the phone on speaker..

Sana: mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai ki mein busy tha, time nahi ,

falana dimka'hw dare u didn't call me shaa.. haa ab kyon karega

nai partner jo milne wali hai tujhe..sana ko miss nahi karte kam se

kam riya ko toh karo..ha wooh bhi kyon karoge.. arjun ko kya fark

padta.. bas 2 min dhuki face se khada raha bahar..

Shaleen: baby saans toh le lo..

Sana took a deep breadth.

shaleen: round 2 ab aur suna, kya keh rahi thi ..

Sana: le li ab bolo kyon phone kiya?

Shaleen: bas tujhe miss kar raha tha..

Sana:Kaise ho tum??? Aur baki sabb kaise hain abhi shoot chal

raha hai ya lunch break hai???aur kuch zyada dangeorus stunts

pull nahi kar raha na.. tujhe fikar hai nahi apni par kuch garib

logon ka khayal kar jo teri chinta mein mare rehte kal hi aunty ne

phone kiya ki teri tabiyat kharab hai ... hum toh mar hi gai hai na

bata nahi sakta

Shaleen:ok time out...Mai theek hoon aur baki sabb bhi achche

hain ,tujhe bohot mss krr rhe hain'!!!aur maa ka kya hai mujhe sirf

sardi hue thi,

sana: aur?

shaleen: thodi khassi bhi.

sana: aur ?

shaleen: bhukar bhi par thoda sa.. aur thoda sar dard bhi..kuch

bolo bhi


sana: kya bolu wooh my brave man i m proud of u.. yahi naa ....

shaleen: thik hai sorry ab agee chik aai na to bhi

bataunga...actually ek suprise hai par Bass kuch kami hai'

Sana: Kya'

Everyone: Tu'.Sana!!!

Sana(xcited): Wao!!! Tum sabb'kaise ho sabb???

Sid: waise jaise tu hame rota hua chodke chali gai..shaleen ki fikar

aur hume toh poocha bhi nahi.. mujhe bhi pimple hua tha..

Sana: yeh shikayat kar kaun raha hai sid ya shree... tujhe toh

superman hai yar

Bez: shikayat koi bhi kare but we miss u yaar.

Sana: I miss u guys too,.

Gorky called so phone disconnected'.

FB ENDS'


BAS AB MEIN THAK GAI..KAISA THA LIKH KAR BATANA


PLEASE MAT KEHNE KI CHOTA HAI.. I KNW JAB SHANA


AUR ARIYA HOTE HAI TOH PURI NOVEL BHI CHOTI LAGEGI


BT PROMISE NEXT PARTS WILL BE VERY EXCITING...


sorry story update karke i have to make sme changes bt it is for

better reading...

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
superb
Shaleen is so excited to give sana birthday surprise
shaleen calling her baby and complimenting her was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Loved it...
whole fb scene is awesome...luking fwd for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Loved the update...
Wow...
Shaleen is planning to give Sana a surprise party.
Aww...
Shaleen is missing Sana...
He is watching the pics which they took with each other.
Loved the flashback..
Good job,Pinku.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Oh so swttt fb is awesome
Shaa plan 4 gift something to her?
It is awesome,grt,fantastic dr
Thanx 4 pm me
Love it
Update soon
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
tune SANA ky yaad dylake fyrshe rula diya 2days se sana ki bahot yaad aaty hye upar se ye story jesme sana ka last scene ke bare mei tune jo lykha hye n jo shaleen sab yaad karta hye . mei agar gory sir ki jagah hoty to sana ko kishybhy tarah vapash laty show mei because sana aka riya ko mei hy nahy bahot log miss kartehe 😭 thanks again for this story .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Read this os.
Its amazing.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Amazing update dr.

Awww Shaleen missed her. Me too miss her.

FB of Shana is so lovely n little bit emotional.

Thanks for pm.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Continue soon.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago

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