AsYaOS:Aaya Dilli Wali Girlfriend Chorchar ke

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Charecter Sketch:


Asad Ahmed Khan
Ayan Ahmed Khan
Farhan Qureshi

Female Leads:

Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan
Humaera Ayaan Ahmed Khan
Nahida Sayeed...


Prologue:
Asad,Ayaan,Zoya and Humaera at Farhan and Nahida's Sangeet.

A game,Truth and Dare being played...

The bottle turns to Asad,and,he chooses to accept dare.

Farhan asks him to dance.

What will happen?
Will Jahapanah dance?

To know,wait for the first part.
Index:
Charecter Sketch: Pg1
Chapter 1: Pg1


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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My first OS on Qubool Hai forum and on AsYa.
Please forgive me if there is any mistake.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh this is interesting. Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Socha ki kal update karu,par,mujhse raha nahi jaraha hai.
15 mins ke andar first chapter hazir hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch1.

"Allah Miyaan...What's wrong with Mr.Khan? Bhala itna der koi karta hai kya? Agar main taiyaar ho rahi hoti itni der tak,toh,jahapanah mujhe kaccha kha lete.", Zoya,said to Ayaan and Humaera,in an irritated tone.

"Zoya,sabar karo.Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai," Humaera teased Zoya.

"Humaera begum,hum toh kabse sabar kar rahe hai,lekin,aap hai ki mujhe koi importance hi nahi dete?", Ayaan said and pouted.

"Ayaan,zara sharam toh kariye.",Humaera said,while she blushed.

"Aye haaye,Humaera.Ma Sha Allah.Sharmate huye acchi lagti ho.Sab Ayaan ke pyaar ka natija hai.Kyun,Raabert?" Zoya asked.

"Of course,Mona Darling." Ayaan said.

Fifteen minutes passed.

Zoya(getting angry): Allah Miyaan.What's wrong with Mr.Khan? Nahida mujhe phone kar rahi hai,aur,yahaan,jahapanah taiyaar horahe hai.Ya Allah,inka kya hoga?

"Mera kya hoga,Mrs.Khan?", Asad,asked from behind.

The trio of Zoya,Ayaan and Humaera turned behind to see Asad,who was looking devilishly handsome in that creamish golden coloured kurta pyjama.

Ayaan: Ma Sha Allah,Bhaijaan.Ekdum handsome lagrahe ho.
Humaera: Bhaijaan,you look so dashing.
Asad: Thank you,Ayaan and Humaera.

Zoya kept on looking at him.actually,she was drooling at him.

Zoya's POV:
"Mr.Khan,kya aap mujhe marna chahte hai aapke adaao se? Haaye...
Ma Sha Allah.Kitne handsome lagrahe hai aap."

Asad's POV:
"Ma Sha Allah... Zoya... Aap bohut hi haseen lag rahi hai.Bilkul chaudvi ki chaand ki tarha.Humesha aise hi muskuraate rahiyega.I love you."

Asad went upto Zoya and clicked his fingers infront of Zoya.
She came back out of her reverie.

Asad: Chale,Mrs.Khan?
Zoya blushed at that.

Asad signalled Ayaaan to take out the car.Humaera followed Ayaan.

Asad leaned down near to her ear and whispered,"Bohut khubsurat lagrahi hai aap,Zoya."

Zoya blushed at that and hugged him tightly.
He smiled at her lovely antics.

Asad broke the hug and placed a kiss on her forehead.

Zoya: Chale,Asad?
Asad: Haan,chaliye.

Zoya and Asad reached the parking lot,where Ayaan and Humaera were waiting for them.

Both the ladies' sat in the passenge seat,while,the men,sat in front.

Soon,they zoomed off to Farhan and Nahida's sangeet.

Precap: Zoya,Asad,Ayaan and Humaera at Farhan and Nahida's sangeet.

Sorry,ch1 is a bit short,but next time,i promise,the update will be long.

Wiaitng for the reviews.
Thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting! Absolutely loved it!! Please continue soonnn! :))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope it is upto the mark.
Coz,this is very first time I am writing an OS on AsYa pair.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! Please continue soon! Interesting OS! Seems like fun! I wonder what song it'll be ;) xD lolll
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: irock321

Loved it! Please continue soon! Interesting OS! Seems like fun! I wonder what song it'll be ;) xD lolll


the title is the song.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start..continue soon..if possible pm me.

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