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Chapter 1

A pleasant morning. A small princess is peacefully sleeping cuddling herself in her royal soft bed. She is apple of her mother's eye. The Little princess is draped in white cute night suit. Her small palms are closed and resting near her beautiful cute face. he first sun ray made her way inside her room through white curtains of that big room . As the sun rays passed through the big room and clashed with mirror create seven colours in the room like a rainbow . she slowly opens her eyes. sensing no one around her she starts crying..

P: mumma...*cries* mumma. .

on the other hand

In same house a girl is standing in the kitchen preparing something . She is wearing a simple white tank top with sneaker . Her hairs tied in high ponytail . Simple yet looking beautiful . When , she heared cries of her little angel . She left all works and hurriedly walked toward her princess room .

She gathered her little doll in her arms and kissed her . "Aww my baby . See muma is here ." she opened the curtains and allow tha sun ray to enter in room .

The small girl cuddle herself in her mom's arms . Because she know it is safest places in this whole world . "Good morning , Tamanna" But that little princess is busy some where else . she was playing with her mom's necklace .

When her mom notices it she says

M: accha..to uthte hi khelna shuru…n kisses her on her check

She looked at her mom innocently "mom bukhi" She said in her cute childish tone . "Aww my baby is hungry " and she shook her head in yes "okay but first face wash kar ley " and she walked toward bathroom .

Back In India

St. louis college

A guy was pacing two n fro in the locker room when suddenly he bumps into someone

G 2: dude tujhe kya hua..

G 1: yaar I'm confused

G 2: Yeh kaise ho gya..Swayam shekhawat aur confused… (A/N tumhe kya laga rey tha.. :P)

Sw: yrr rey..plz mazak mat kar…ek to main already tension mein hun n tu meri koi help nahi kar raha hai.. (yes that guy was none other than our rey..oops sorry kriya ka rey..:P )

R: arrey but hua kya….wait let me guess SHARON..!!

Hearing her name swayam becomes hyper..sharon kaha hai sharon

seeing his state rey starts laughing..

sw galres at him

R: dude *laughs* chill..wo *laughs* nahi hai yahan..*still laughing*

Sw: "you are again laughing ."

"I am not laughing yaar" Rey caught his tummy "okay fine agar wo care kar rahi hai to it's good na"

"Care to theek hey but yab b wo itna care karti hey na to hum dono mey distance or badh jata hey ' Swayam said sadly .

"There is nothing like that ,so relax"

"I hope so"

Both become silent for some time . "Missing , Vish" both spoke together .

"mera to theek hey why are you missing her' Swayam looked toward Rey .

"Pta nahi kyu but i miss her. '"

"Tum dono yahan ho" Niky bro entered in locker room

"tum dono ek doosre se chipke kyu rehte ho tum dono ko beech kuch chal raha ye kya" Nil said curiously .

"is waqt to tum dono chipkey huye hoo' Rey said .

On Rey's statment nIkt pushed each other .

"Esa kuj nahi hey . hum to bolney ay they Vish ney invite kiya hey "

"Invite"reyma questioned them

"ha uskey dance institue ki success mey shamil honey k liye "

"Really , great news' Swayam exclaimed in happiness .

"Dude you are coming okay" Vishu from last 30 min. She is begging . "I am telling you Kriya side sey maan ya " *pause* "kitna time ho gya tujey dekhey huye" She was sad

"Okay , fine i will " Finally Kriya accept her defeat . "muma bhukhi" Vishu smiled "go she is hungry feed her . I am waiting for you okay " both hung up the call .

In india

"where is Swayam" sharon from last one hour searching for him .

Swayam heard her voice "Oh no , sharon " Swayam change his direction but sharon already saw him "Swayam , stop' Sharon raised hr eyebrow "Mujey esa kyu lag rha hey ki tum mujey ignore kar rhey ho"

"no sharon main to bus ' swaym for help looked around "Rey" Sharon turned around "kha hey Rey" but swayam he was gone .

"Haww , Swayam" sharon pouted .


pheww..!!

finally completed..!!

hope u liked it..!!...😳😳

do hit like and comment..

Edited by esha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reswa
Unres..

Awesome start...

Vry diff concept...!!!!

Conti soon...

Thnx 4 de pm...
Edited by kanchi01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do cont soon...
Nice start..👍🏼

Do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay now this is pretty much confusing. How did Kria turned into a mother. Ek saal mein bachha bhi ho gaya aur bolne bhi laga. Thats something impossible. (at least I dont find it possible.) How does Vishakha now about her (kria's) whereabouts. And most importantly how on earth could Rey miss Vishakha, as far as I know he always went against her to defend Tani.


On the contrary I liked Swaron. Swayam being scared and Sharon caring. Thats a cute combination.


So firstly clear all my confusions and I just hope this piece of work turns out to be good.
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeh kya hoing???
This was my reaction , upar naam bhi esa hai "Who is she??" ...

Starting was Cute , with the baby girl 'Tammana'...
Kria her mother *Shock laging*...
St. Louis mein toh sab kuch inna ajeeb hoing...
Swayam Sharon se dar raha tha 😆...
ReYam missing Vish , strange..
Jo nai badla that is Nicky bros N their 'One-Track-Mind' 🤣...

This story seems really very interesting 😃...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Choco...bhut confusing h bt interesting ..😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
The start was great ...
Interesting indeed ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee start👏
continue soon and pm me plsss😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NYCcC concept thnxxx fr pm

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