Virika SS:I'll stand by you! ~Thd II|Part 24 pg 67|11 Dec - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: vbasdeo

So finally my exams are done n i get to catch up on your story 😳 my god i missed out on so much 😭 but never the less well done darling superb updates 👍🏼 you should start a novel on virika now 😃😉 well done loveeeddd all the updates i missed 👏🤗


thanks a lot dear..its okay dear..i understand exams time!
i am sooo happy you liked it
novel hahaha 😆😆
thank you very much!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kryanfan1

awesome awesome awesome madhu...!!!!👏

sorry for posting so late...😭
Firstly, a big big congratulations for your new thread...u totally deserve it...😉
but this part was seriously superb..
viren is soo cute and barun as well...😊
I just cant wait for the next part...precap-only virika...so plz plz update soon dear...😊
thanx for the pm...



thank you very much <3
aww its okay dear
im super glad you liked it..thanks for the comment!
i will update soon!
love ya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Kays94

still no update 😭


no one loves me 😭 😭

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭



oye karina sorry yaar...was down with fever! thats why became soo late 😭😭
will try updating soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Thanks to all those who have liked the story


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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Hey guys I am back with the update.. Sorry for the late update! 😭 I was really sick and had marriages to attend.. This update is for Karina,Charu,Nishu,Love-Family! Thanks for the support guys! Love you all 😊😊
This is the 15th part! 😊😊
Note 1: There is a scene i took from IPKKND,.felt it was apt here
Note 2: I cant write romance well so forgive me for this crap
Enough of my bak bak..here is the update


Part 15

Jeevika and viren moved to the bedroom. Jeevika was shocked and she was staring at the bed with an o shaped face.

Viren was amused at the look and said "god jeevika close your mouth else an aero plane can fit into it" jeevika was shocked and wanted to play with him. "Chodiye virenji I thought you were romantic enough but no...you are so buddhu"

viren was astonished and asked "acha jeevikaji so can you tell me what does romance mean?"

Jeevika spoke "virenji when your beautiful wife opens her mouth don't you know how to close it?"

Viren was spell bound seeing jeevika's this side!

He hugged her tightly "jeevikaji this is the first day. I will show you how can I silence you"

jeevika was extremely shy and she tried to move but viren was reluctant to leave.

Jeevika-"chodiye na virenji I will go and prepare dinner"

Viren-"arey jeevikaji don't you know we have to go to barun's house for dinner, so now we have loads of time for ourselves"

Jeevika was shy and she ran to the bed. Viren gave his naughty smirk and went and sat beside her. Jeevika spoke "this bed reminds me of suhag raat virenji"

viren was guilty for ruining their suhag raat so he spoke "well jeevika I know its too late but im very sorry for ruining our suhaag raat. That is one of the reasons I decorated the bed this way and wanted to make up for that day" jeevika smiled and hugged him tightly and said "I love you virenji. You are the best husband" Viren hugged her back.

After a while jeevika said "virenji I want to look at the house please?"

Viren said "as you say my Queen. Lets go"

Jeevika was stunned at the arrangements made by viren and she asked him "virenji when did you do all this?"

Viren-" jeevika when I started to work in every month salary I used to give a portion to dadaji bua n maa. Some of it to virat and kept some in my personal account and the account. I never wanted to make them feel that whatever I earn is for myself but I wanted to keep some aside for my wife and children. I wanted to buy you a house. So I brought it. Jeevika I want to make our future secure so that even if something happens to me you will have. ..."

Jeevika stopped him "shut up virenji. Don't speak a word. I can't live without you. I am so happy you thought so much for me and our child"

Viren spoke "child nahi children "

Jeevika blushed virenji you are becoming naughty day by day.. "What to do jeevika. Dil tho bacha hai ji!"

Jeevika and viren spoke about various things and got ready to go to barun's house.

Barun and manorama made all the preparations for the dinner. Viren and jeevika reached their place and barun gave a bouquet jeevika. Both viren and jeevika were shocked and barun laughed looking at their shocked face.

He spoke "oh cmon I am not proposing her viren! Neither did I give the boquet to jeevika. I gave it to her baby. Wow I am soo excited. "

Manorama laughed at barun and said "don't mind viren beta barun has really gone mad. He is so excited. Maybe because he never got a chance to see a baby" barun face dropped, only he knew how difficult it was to lead such lonely life with no father or sibling.

Viren understood the pain and to lighten the moment he spoke "barun I'll give you an idea. Get married soon and definitely you can have babies" barun and viren laughed and the whole evening continued in this way. They had dinner and were about to leave when viren spoke " Barun and aunty thanks for the lovely dinner. Leaving the family was not an easy thing but having you both it seems like we are with family"

Barun and manorama smiled and jeevika spoke "ha virenji aunty and barun are no less than my mayka"

Manorama hugged her and both of them gave them gifts and jeevika said " what is the need aunty! "

Manorama-"jeevika beta what is this. You said we are your mayka then what is this?"

Jeevika-"ha ma...I mean aunty"

Manorama-"I would love it if you call me ma"

Jeevika-"I would love to call you ma too"

Barun said "wow officially you are my di"

jeevika manorama and barun hugged and viren ckicked a pic before barun pulled him into the hug.

Viren and jeevika left for their house. Jeevika asked if they could go for a drive.

Long drive :)

Viren and jeevika went out for a long drive. That drive was very refreshing. Especially after the tensions for so many days.

Viren spoke " Jeevika I cant thank you enough for the things you have done."

Jeevika " ab yeh thank you chodhijiye na…"

Viren left the matter and they were enjoying the ride. Jeevika wanted to have samosas and she was pestering viren to find them! It was getting late and all shops were being closed. So viren had a tough time in finding them. Finally about an hour of roaming here and there they got the shop and viren brought samosas for jeevika. They wanted to go home as jeevika was really sleepy. She dozed off in the car and viren carried her into the house.

Jeevika was feeling very tired and viren was worried thinking about what the doctor said! But since jeevika slept in the car she wasn't really sleepy now. She cuddled up in virens arms and started to speak," virenji I am so happy I am experiencing these moments with you alone. First time, everything turned out to be different and now I want everything to be perfect." Viren was feeling a little apprehensive about the doctors words, so he said,"jeevika, Dr. Joshi told me that there can be complications.." "kya!" jeevika squealed and tears formed in her eyes,"virenji..kya hoga? " Viren hugged her back and said,"kuch nahi hoga,main hoon na,kuch nahi hone doonga! The reason I am telling you is we would be careful that's why" jeevika was scared but she knew viren will never let anything happen to her! Viren spoke "jeevika,god will gift us for the sacrifice we did. Don't be afraid. Just be careful. And take care of yourself. " jeevika slept in virens arms and viren was staring at the angel who literally fell on the ground only for him. He thanked god and even he dozed off!

Precap :Jeevika Blood vomitings

So how is it? I know its crap..will make it better in the next one..please do leave your likes and comments!

Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
yippeee...i m the first one!!!!
the update is superamazing...
luved what viren did fr jeevika... 😊
cant believe jeevika become so outspoken!!!!!!

luved tht side of her 😛

aawww...jeevika calling manorma as maaa...
luved tht

sooo cute 😆

awww viren told abt the complications...
awww!!!!! 😭

last but not the least...
the long drive was awsome blossom!!!!! 😳
viren brought samosa fr jeevika

sooo sweeett!!!!

cont soon...
nd by the way i read ur update before ur pm...
but inspite of thxxx alot fr pmmm
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Oh FINALLY I got an update.. pheww... I only know how much I missed it 😭 Welcome back Madhu Ji or my James Bond! 😆 The update was beautiful as always ❤️ But ek shikayat hai, I wanted a SUHAG RAAT! ☺️ Please make that happen soon too.. OMG! Barun is so cute ❤️ He's such a caring brother ❤️ and he's so excited for the baby too, like I am! 😃 I loved their longgg drive Can't really get over the update ❤️ Thanks You Bond Ji 😳 OMG OMG! Viren told Jeevika about the complications I hope Jeevika would be fine..
And the Precap is threatening me 😭
Please continue Soon ❤️
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Amazing update. Hope the complications go away soon and loving Viren . Old Viren is back woohooo. Continue soon. Hope we get more virika romance. Loved the whole update espicially the somoasas bit that was funny. Update quickly cannot wait too read ur updates. Precap is scaryyy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
i don't watch EHMMBH but like the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
woww dis wa s fabulous
ho plzz dnt call it crap
luved it
i luv dis barun so much h e z my fvrte
gosh blood vomitings
update soon


Edited by rocksravya11 - 12 years ago

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