SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a short but nice update. wonder what happened to T. Good luck for exam
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

that was a short but nice update. wonder what happened to T. Good luck for exam

Thanks
Wld wrk to make these short updates into long ones:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey buddy don't pay attention towards them just live them , when you start with some thing there are two types of thing which happen with every one n that's positive n negative some likes it n some don't , so as a writer u should not get bothered about such stupid peoples, instead be happy that he had actually studied ur work here think positive yaar 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
n i need few days time to read ur work cause due to my exams i had my inbox kinda full n have lots of thing in my plate so please don't be hurt i need just few days to clear my inbox n will read all the parts n give my views to u till than take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Newton123

n i need few days time to read ur work cause due to my exams i had my inbox kinda full n have lots of thing in my plate so please don't be hurt i need just few days to clear my inbox n will read all the parts n give my views to u till than take care 😃

thanks yar n dnt wry take ur tym:D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys I'm back with another update. Before you read I want to warn you all, its very badly written and is pathetic. I have no clue right now as to how I'll proceed with the story :p so if you fail to understand anything, feel free to ask me (related to the update). You suggestions and comments rare warmly welcome. And yeah I know I'd told earlier about my exams getting over by 3rd june, but no they are not. I still have 3 more to give(thanks to my dad filling new forms J), so no regular updates.

Plus just wanted to share this with you guys, I recently had a breakup, and I'm not very happy about it, so if you find any of the future updates stupid, irrelevant please don't mind.

Don't forget to comment and for pms please send me buddy request. Please ignore the mistakes, typed through mobile:D

CHAPTER 7

Piya winced and fought hard to maintain her composure. The man she wanted to avoid like hell, was here, standing in front of her, asking questions in his ever-demanding voice.

She could easily remember the last time they had been together, it was as the those things had happened seconds ago and not like they had taken place years back. She knew, whatever Abhay did and the game he wanted to play with her emotions, the way he wanted to break her image in front of the entire world had all gone in vain in past and was sure he would try to do the same again. But no, she would not let him play with her yet again. She knew, he was madly absorbed in his revenge, but had never thought in her wildest dreams that the Abhay, she had once loved could stoop so low to make her repay for her misdeed.

Thinking about all this, Piya composed herself, not giving any chance to Abhay to put her down. 'That's none of your business Mr. Raichand.' Fire flashed in her eyes as she spoke.

Abhay folded his arms across his chest. 'What's my business and what's not, should not be on your concern-list, Ms. Jaiswal. But what you're doing here is my top-most priority.' He arched a brow and his face tighten. ' As you can see, the party has been organized for the rare rich class of the country, and I don't think you're a part of us.' He spoke bitterly, eyeing her attire.

Yet again the girl was not dressed in her own clothes, he could guess by the ill-fit clothing and shoes, but still managed to look beautiful and sexy. The other woman in the hall, were nothing compared this magnificence.

Was she here, yet again, to try her old methods, to get hold-off some rich brat, with her innocent look, who could look after her expenses?

Abhay's fists tighten at the thought.

Piya felt sick. This was so much worse than she's feared. Firstly she'd never imagined another encounter with Abhay Raichand, and if somehow, their paths would have crossed, she'd naively imagined it to be so bad.

Suddenly Abhay cast a quick glance around them and took Piya's arm in one big hand and dragged her to the other side of the room before she knew and could respond to his act. His face was lean and stark with displeasure and anger.

Piya yanked herself free and rubbed her arm, where the pressure by his fingers was clearly visible as red patches. 'How dare you misbehave with me?'

'I've asked you once already- what are you doing here, Jaiswal? You're not welcome.' The mere thought of her with somebody else, even after the game she'd played with him, was enough to drive Abhay mad.

Piya felt her anger surge up at his sheer arrogance and remembered why she was there and what was at stake- somebody's livelihood. She took a step forward to answer Abhay's question. But before she could open her mouth, her ears caught the familiar sound, which pushed her anger to some remote place.

'Is there a problem here?'

Piya and Abahy herd a deep masculine voice. Before Abhay could even turn and wrath that person for interrupting them, Piya spoke, 'No. Nothing Kabeer.' She stepped towards Kabeer and took hold of his hand, which didn't go unnoticed by Abhay. 'I was about to slip and this gentleman here just helped me out.' She spoke smilingly. The last thing she wanted was Kabeer to fight with the rich- brat Raichand and spoiling his image in front of the people they were here to meet.

Kabeer smiled at her and was assured by her response. He forwarded his hand to Abhay in order to greet and thank him for his act.

'Thankyou so much Sir, for your help. You see, the ladyt standing beside me, has a very important place in my life and it would be disheartening to see her in any kind of pain.' He spoke politely and shook his hands with Abhay. 'By the way I'm Kabeer Rathode.' He smiled introducing himself. 'And you have already met Piya.'

Anhay's jaw clenched at the scene in front of him. So this was her new toy. By now, Abhay knew very well that what kind of a person Piya had turned into. She was a shameless-bi*** and he hated her. Hated her for playing with his emotions and now she was doing the same with someone else.

But seeing her with Kabeer, had some other effect on him too, other than pure hatred. He was jealous. Yes, he envied Kabeer for being so close to her. His anger started boiling and he badly wanted to punch that Rathode.

But who the hell was this Kabeer Rathode? It was not a name he'd heard before, but it sounded familiar. Abhay was sure that Kabeer was no rich business man, or else he would have remembered him. Then what were the two doing here?

Ignoring the turmoil of thoughts in his head, Abhay bit out savagely. 'I'm Abhay Raichand. I think I've heard your name before, but sorry can't place you. Have we met before?' He asked Kabeer and noticed the color from his face fading.

Abhay's sheer arrogance during the time of his introduction didn't go unnoticed by Kabeer, and upon hearing his name, Kabeer felt a red tide of rage rise within him. He had never thought that the person whom he'd been thanking a minute ago could ever be the person he loathed with his entire heart. He gave a quick look to Piya, then turned back to Abhay and spoke in a bitter tone. ' No, we have never met before Mr. Raichand.' He said with lot of emphasis on Raichand. 'But we definitely know eachother.' He eyed Abhay with anger, who just stood there wondering the sudden change in Kabeer's behavior.

Kabeer turned to Piya, who was shocked to hell upon learning that Kabeer and Abhay knew each other. Why on the Earth had things suddenly turned so devastating for her?

'Piya, you know Mr Raichand'.sorry the great Mr. Raichand, biggest businessman in the entire country, is the one who's been sending those messages.' Kabeer spoke chillingly.

Piya shook her head in disbelief and tried hard to swallow down what she had learned. Had Abhay really lost his humanity and turned into a heartless monster? She looked upto to meet Abhay's eyes, which were anything but revealing about the truth.

'He's not coming today Piya. It's time for us to leave' Kabeer growled and pulled Piya with him.

Abhay saw the two departing and he's not missed Piya stumble slightly in her shoes, it made her look vulnerable at a moment. He just wanted to grab her in his arms and protect her from the entire world. But that was just for a moment.

Abhay's anger had reached to its peak due to Kabeer's behavior and accusation on him regarding some messages, about which Abhay had no clue. He was also furious about the was Kabeer had handled Piya.

He took out his mobile and after dialing a number spoke in a demanding voice. ' I want to know the in and out of Kabeer Rathode by tomorrow.' He smiled mockingly, cutting down the call.

Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was not pathetic at all!!it was awsome!👏
best of luck for your xam!
Edited by ifians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, my sympathies. It must be difficult for you yet you still updated, so thanks for that..
As for the update- it was really intriguing.

Kabir seems a nice guy.
What are these messages that Kabir is speaking of? And how I love a jealous Abhay 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update .
Awww...Abhay's jealous . 😳😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Kabir, new entry, something has happened in d past or all this is abt those messages😲. Plz update asap.

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