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The Last Night


K- rey aap aur main hum nhi ho sakte

She said in the most roughest tone she could ever imagine.

R ha kyunki main aur tum to pehle se hi hum hai

A husky voice came from the bed facing her back which was till now resting on the bed in utter innocence.

He came near her making her face him.

She took a back step and blinked her eyes in order to hide her emotions.

K nhi rey main aur aap kabhi hum nhi ban sakte.

She projected a smirk as if teasing him and telling that he stands nowhere around her superiority.

K aap aesa soch bhi kaise sakte ho ki aap aur main aur saath.huhnever

She turned around facing the wall as she can't see his always happy deep eyes, hurt and teary and that too because of her...never can she dream of this too. Her hands forced in a tight fist as if prisoning her feelings in the grip. She said anything and everything that would hurt him. All this while not facing him. She compared him with her bestie no correction their bestie. Oh how she hated herself for doing that. She said she ditched him, used him and threw him.

Now she was so frustrated with herself that she could seriously commit suicide. Ahwill she ever be able to forgive her for what she is doing with the person who LOVED her the most, oh correction LOVES her the most, the person who taught her the real meaning of love. Yes, she love rey and she know it but she still have to say all this or he would never be able to move on. Actually in a deep dark corner of her heart she didn't wanted him to move on. She WANTED him to be with her. Actually she NEEDED him to be with her. But here she is not concerned. Its him who is the most important.

Now coming back to the task in her hand she continued those harsh rough heartless sayings of her still not facing him while rey was quite.

After around 10 to 15 minutes of her continuous blabbering s**t, she became quite waiting for him to scold her, blame her or at least say something.

R are you done?

His sweet voice came from behind making her face him with wide open eyes.

K what.???

This was only she could utter.

R I asked are you done?

K huh..?

She was hell confused. Why is he not scolding her or reacting to her harsh words and there he is standing with a stone face not expressing an inch of any emotion.

R I repeatare you done?

K yeyes

R hmm. Kriya do you think I am a fool.

He said politely.

K umm..yes you are.

She said with a stern face coming back to arrogant avtaar.

R wo to mujhe ab samajh aa gya hai

"Yes I thought so his harsh words are coming. How on the earth would I able to hear them from his mouth" thought she.

He continued

R- u really thought ki main yeh bakwas maan lunga.

She definitely didn't expected this. Her fist was already loosening the grip on her feelings but she controlled.

K main koi bakwas nhi kar rhi. Yeh sab sach hai. I ditched you, used you.

This was enough for rey to loose his temper. How can someone say that his baatcutter betrayed himnot even if that someone is his battcuter herself.

R stop it baatcutter

He shouted and pulled her into him crushing her into his chest looking straight in her deep beautiful black eyes.

Oh why is he doing thisshe could not resist that deep brown ocean in his eyes but she has to resist.

She gulped hard and again opened her mouth.

K rey main sach khe rhi hu. Aap to mere pyaar me itne andhe ho gye ho ki sach dekh hi nhi pa rhe. How stupid! Now leave me.

She said while looking here and there. If anyone else would be standing there he must have thought that she is the worst girl in the world but it was not anyone standing there. It was reyaansh singhania who stood in front of her. Is it so easy to lie to him...no off course not.

R no I wont leave you baatcuter. Its my and only mine birthright to hold you.

This was enough for kriya to look into his oceanic eyes. A lone tear unknowingly made its way to her cheek bone which then sensed the touch of rey's thumb making the tear rub off.

R I can read your eyes battcutter. Tum duniya me kisi se bhi jhooth bol sakti ho par apne dil se nhi aur main tumhara dil hu. Main nhi janta ki tum yeh sab kyu bol rhi ho but I know ki yeh sab bol kar tum mujhse jyada khudko hurt kar rhi ho. Trust me baatcutter.btao mujhe ki problem kya haihum milkar sab dekh lenge. Main tumhe akele sab kuch nhi sehene dunga. Tell me.

He said in the most sweetest loving tone ever.

"Koi kisi se itna pyaar kese kar sakta hai" she thought.

She lost her complete grip on her feelings and pulled him in a passionate kiss. He was shocked at first but soon joined her. Her feelings were free now and know no bounds.

They both were flying in the sky of love from where neither of them wanted to come back.

Kriya's hands twirled around his neck while rey's hands were ma king random designs on her waist.

After a passionate kiss they unwillingly parted away due to the lack of oxygen.

K I LOVE YOUI LOVE YOU REY AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU TILL MY LAST BREATH.

She said with wet eyes drowned in the brown ocean of his eyes.

R I LOVE YOU TOO KRIYA AND EVEN MY LAST BREATH CAN'T DESTROY MY LOVE FOR YOU.

Kriya could see the genuineness in his eyes with no difficulties.

K I am sorry reymaine jo bola who sab wo.

He placed his finger on her lips.

R shhI know ki sab jhooth tha and I am not angry or hurt at all. Main bas yeh janna chahta hu ki yeh jhooth kyu thaaur is baar main bilkul sach sunna chahta hu.

Kriya nodded a yes and rey loosened his grip on her waist. She took a step back and started but this time looking straight in his eyes.

K kal maa ko pata nhi kese sab pata chal gyamere dance ke bare me, aapke aur mere saath hone ke bare mesab kuch. Ma ne kal bina meri koi bhi baat sune room me bandh kar diya aur aaj subhah jab vish, neha aur amar aye the to unho ne mujhe elinms par last time dance karne diya par mujhse yeh promise liya ki

R ki

K ki main aapse sare relation todke unke saath Dehradun wapis chali jaun. Maine yeh sab kha taki aap move on kar jao but I was wrong I know aap sirf mujhse pyaar karte ho and can never love someone else.

She said with easily evident pain in her voice but there was a lot of confidence in her last few words.

K I am sorry.

His oceanic eyes which were resisting back the tears till now freed the streams of water down his cheeks. It was now kriya's turn to rub off the beautiful pearls.

They stared in each other's eyes which seem to be till eternity.

Suddenly doorbell rang once, twice, thricegod knows how many times. This was the first time rey came to reality before kriya and stepped back. This was when kriya realized the situation.

K aap jao reymaa hi hongi door pe.

She said unwillingly. She didn't wanted him to go.not at any cost.

R nhiamain..a..yhi waitummtumhari maa ko nhi pta chalegaaI..umm

He said fumbling with words.

K - ok

Kriya cleaned the tears in her eyes and left for greeting her mother giving rey some time to think which he badly needed.

After around 20 minutes she came back to her room. She locked the door behind her and turned and saw him sitting on the bed with his hands on his face.

K rey maa apne room me jake so gyi he.

Her voice made him realize her presence in the room.

R when are you going?

K tomorrow morning.

R tomorrow???

To this she just nodded while looking down.

Rey stood up and went to her. He lightly placed his thumb down her chin and made her look into his eyes.

R I don't know ki jo maine sacha he wo sahi he ya nhi but I know that its my mistake

She interrupted him.

K no reyits not your mistake

He again placed his finger on her lips.

R shhlet me speak. Maine kabhi bhi tumhari ma par acha impression nhi bnaya isliye shayad mujhe ek chance dena bhi unhone right nhi samjha. Apne hisab se wo bhi galat nhi he and I know it. Ek ma kabhi bhi apni beti ko problem me nhi dekh payegi and unke hisab se main ek problem hu. Main unse abhi baat kar sakta hu but this would create more problems. I wish I could change everything but.i just wishabhi ke liye it would be right if we spend our last night together.

He said with the most painful voice. He hated to say the words "OUR LAST NIGHT". He hated this to his core but had no option.

R I am sorry kriya

K rey

Kriya called out his name in utter pain. She didn't wanted to lose the most precious thing of her life.oh correction she didn't wanted to lose her LIFE. She instantly hugged him tight to which he responded with the same passion and pain.

R maine khi pada tha ki jisse aap sabse jyade pyaar karte ho na use jane dena chahiye aur agar wo sach me aapka hai to god khud aapko us se phir milwayega aur chahe yeh pura universe kitni bhi koshish karle no one can separate them and u know what mujhe pure yakeen hai that we are made for each other aur jo destiny abhi hume alag kar rhi he whi hume ek bhi karegi.

His words had certain genuineness which made kriya assure that one day she will meet him and be with forever and ever.

Rey led kriya towards the bed and both of them laid down in each others arms. Neither of them slept that night nor did they spoke a word. They were just drowned in each others eyes exploring new heights of love and passion enjoying their last night.

--THE END

Phewwfinally finished.

Guys this is my first osplease tell me how it is. I don't know how it turned out.

If it even matches 1% of someone's work then I am really sorry.

Please please do hit the like tab and comment.

Waiting for your review.

Everyone wanted a continuation to this os, so here you go...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3822279/phir-le-aaya-dil-converted-into-ss

Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS 👏
Loved It 😊
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Woww. . . . . .
Its realy an awsome os. . . .
Sweet and super cute. . . .
I totaly lovd it. . . . .
Plz i want 1 more part of it. . . .
In whch kriya mom agree 4 kr relationshp. . .
And our kr becomes 4ver n evr 2gethr. . .
Plz. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os
Luv it
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
it was just awesome ... luved it
amazing, fabulous
yr one request is story ko aage continue kar do please
turn in into a ss or a ff
would love to read further
please
rest depends on you
thanxx for the pm
the os was awesome ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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if you even update 1 or 2 more parts of this os it would be great ...
just want to see KriYansh together and happy ...
please consider this if possible ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os
Like it
Kash ye real mai hota
Mindblowing
Ab 2nd part tho banta hai
Milna jaruri hai unka
Love ko com karne ke liye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
loved it
if only rey found out the truth in real life too...
anyway atleast in this give it a happy ending.. plzzz continue
i would be really interested to read on
thnx 4 da pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... just fabulous...
u have decribed every thing so nicely... their emotions, love , passion everything
awsome dear..
thnks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Manvi... 😲
I just dnt know wat to say... It was sooo beautifulll...
Honestly 1st line padhne k baad i felt kii... Padhu ya na padhu... 😆
But whn i read it...it was like... Worth reading..!!!
My god Manvi...ur writng skills... Haaye me toh totally fida on this OS... *pats ur back* 😃
I toh just simply Loved it... Litrelly enjoyed reading it...
Well done girl... 😳
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago

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