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Posted: 12 years ago


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Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN KNOWS GEET SO WELL RIGHT FROM THE BEGINING



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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Heyyy Neha .. me here 😛😛


Me started now this FF ... Will comment after completing all parts 😃



me glad that u r here...
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
nice part...
lovely...
cont soon...



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updating now dear...
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(A big thanks to Dazzling Divz for this wonderful banner... thank u so much dear...😊)


i know this one chhotu update... but yesterday i typed this much only... but yes this update is past revealing update so pls don't throw anything on me... making baby face...


@ritzy di- for clearing ur confusion'. I have added the dates here'. and ur reply at page-115


Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love


part-9




19th December 2012

"Thank you so much" he heard thanking him but he didn't know that why she is thanking him''? He gave her confusing look and she understood that he is confused''

Before he ask something to her, she replied him back'.. "because of you I am able to tell him everything" he looked at her knowing that what would be his reply'.. he can understand her situation'.. no' nothing like that is happened with him but he is a human also, and he can feel other's pain'.

He was quite all the while' he didn't know what to reply? How to console her? That's'y he thought to keep mum himself''. "you said right'.. pyaar kisi anguthi me nahi, pyaar to aankho mein chamakta hai, aur aaj wo pyaar maine uski aankho mein dekha hi nahi'."'''. she closed her eyes for a moment and opened again gulping hard her pain'..

"you tried to made him understand your perspective?" asked maan finally'. Somewhere he had the institution that he'll understand her because they love each other but alas, nothing like that happened'.. she nodded silently'' and then tried to speak up her pain, his wordings, those harsh words which pricked her heart,,,,,


she doesn't know that why she wanted to speak up her pain to this stranger whose name she doesn't know still? What an irony'.. whom she loved he accused her and that person whom she doesn't know, not even his name and he understood her'..

"when I met with him , he asked to me did I like the ring? but mai kya jawab deti' somehow I gather all my strength and tried to tell my stand, , how I came here and when I was watching the ring lovingly just then a doggy came and started barking at me'. He knows that I am so afraid from doggies but still he didn't listen me'.. when that dog barking at me, I got scared and I jumped back'. In that fear, my grip around the ring loosened up and I fell down somewhere in the park but I was sure that it was near the bench' I ran away saving my life from the dog and when'' when (she sobbed a little') I came back, , and tried to search from that day but nothing got in my hand'.. " she covered her face and sobbed hard'.. his heart flinch seeing her like this'. He doesn't why and how his arms went her shoulder and tried to console her'' "sshh, , nothing is in our hands " he told her'..

She nodded'.. "he' he told me that'' I am so irresponsible , when I can't save a ring properly then how will I manage our relation? How will I proceed in our relation when I am so irresponsible? He said he doesn't love me anymore, he said he doesn't to being with me..he said he doesn't want me anymore, he said I am so downmarket girl, he was just passing time with me'.. I know that my family won't approve all that but still I was with him and I gave me all this just because I lost a ring'. "'..

She looked to his face''. "tumne sahi kaha tha, pyaar to uski aankho mein tha hi nahi toh chamkega kaise'.. uske liye to pyaar sirf uss ring mein tha aaknho mein nahi'.." saying so she doesn't when she hide her face in his broad chest and sobbed, '.

"but,,,,, why'..why he did all this to me? Why he told me that he doesn't love me? Why he used me?" she asked to him looking in his eyes'' he felt bad for her but what could he do beside of console her''

"whatever happens, happens for the best..!!" he said to her'.. she knew that he is saying correct'. Whatever happens, happens for the best'.. he rubbed her arm little consoling her more'' when she realized where she is, she became little stiff and came out at once from his arms'.. "sorry!" both said together to each other'.. both looked at each other with same expression, and then a smile crept on their face'..

"actually he is at lose not you'. He doesn't deserve you that's y he didn't understand you''''." she nodded and wiped her tears , , "btw I am maan'" he introduced himself after 3-4 days'' she smiled "and am geet'.. thanks maan for everything'''" both shook hands''.. after some time he forwarded his hand in front of her, , seeing that her eyes widen and her jaws dropped open'' she looked at his hand first and then at his face'.. where he is having no expressions on his face''



"ye'.. ye tumhare paas kaise? I mean how it can be possible?" she asked to him'.. she was looking at his face where he smiled a little'' "how this ring came to me? You are thinking right'. " he said to her''. "yeah, how?" she asked to him''.

"woh that day when you lost your ring, , I came here and sat on this bench, , just then my sight fell on this ring, I took it in my hand, I knew it is so costly ring and I can't give this to anyone'.. I wanted to see that whether the person is really deserve this ring or not? Then I thought if that person didn't deserve the ring then I'll made wear this ring to my future fiance " he speak in one go while she was looking at him without blink''''.

"you mean, from the first day, you knew that,,,,,that ring is mine?" she asked to him''. "yes, that ring was with me, and I really wanted to see whether you deserve it or not?"'''''

"thank you so much" she again thanked him'. Now he is confused that why she is thanking him now? His expressions told her that again he is confuse'. She smiled and replied'.. "because of you, I came to know the true color of his face and you can keep this ring with you and made wear this to your future fiance" she replied him back'..


"so, did i deserve this ring?" asked geet gazing at his face expecting the answer in positive but alas her face fell when he replied... "nope, this ring deserve my future fiance..."



Both smiled again and maan kept this ring with him'.. now he is not going to give back this ring to her'''' "but didn't he asked for the money of this ring?" asked concerned maan''.. she nodded her head in yes...

31st May 2013

She opened her eyes when a ray of sun fell on her face'.. the sun has been already risen and she was late, though she was early riser but the event roaming in her dreams at night, that didn't let her sleep properly'.. she was sniffing in her sleep but then went back in her deep sleep'' she adjusted her eyes according to the sunlight and looked here & there and remembered that she is in Maan's house now'..

She went near the window and looked outside , the view of the garden just breathtaking, the greenery and the chirping sound of the birds, , and the fountain giving the awesome view of her eyes'.. while maan woke up early and went to his daily routine, , his tai-chi session where a sweet & serene smile was playing on his lips''






so here is the part-9... hope you like it... geet and rahul's relationship was normal... no physical relation,,,okay... i thought to tell you before you ask me.....

pls ...pls... like the update and do comments... getting very less likes...
thanks a lot for liking and commenting




Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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lol ji hum update par first aa gaye ...😃...😃...😃...😃...😃...




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koi nahi hai sab ka sab mera ... first second & third mera ...
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thanku...
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