Virika SS: Let Me Love You - The Happy Ending p.21

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

An idea popped in my mind and I decided to pen it down. It's going to take some time however because; its going to be a very detailed story, but short... approximately 2-3 parts MAX! Updating a prologue. Will continue if I get a good response ❤️

Index...

chapter 1 = page 8

chapter 2 = page 15

chapter 3 = page 21

Prologue

It was a beautiful morning. Sun out yet a breeze in the air. The perfect summer day! Jeevika woke up in her suite. Not any suite, it was the deluxe suite at the best resort in Napa Valley. Napa Valley was the city. The city where Viren and Jeevika became Virika. Both of them met for the first time there at their close friends wedding. The moment they glanced at each other, their world had changed all of a sudden. A change for the better. A change for a lifetime.

Viren and Jeevika would come to Napa once every year ever since their first meeting. This was their third anniversary and of course they had to celebrate it here. Jeevika rose from her bed listening to her caller tune' my boo. Of course that song was an indication of her love calling her. She picked up his phone call with the brightest and biggest smile on her face.

viren - "Goodmorning beautiful. Before you say anything go open the door to your room. Someone is awaiting you"

Jeevika excitingly ran to the door and opened it to see no one. She heard some little noise though.. a cute noise. She looked down and couldn't believe her eyes.

❤️ Feedback Welcome ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago

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ElmWizard5017

@ElmWizard5017

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Ahhh !!!! *lets out a huge sigh*

Finally! Finally after sooo long i am able to comment first! How much i missed this! plus i was the first one to like the post!!

YAYYY!!!! I cant describe how happy i am and my facial expression is surely showing that ... my lips curved into a huge smile! 😃

Thankyou! 😆

Coming to the new story ...

Lets start with the name ... "Let Me Love You" ... Awww ... the name itself is too cute and i love it ❤️

The prologue was lovely and fantastic ... what should i say ... like it was soo VIRIKISH !! lol ... i dunno how else do decribe it 😛

The puppy ... ADORABLE!!

Girl as much as i love jeevika, ur stories make me envy her ... har baar viren jeevika ka hi kyun hota hai ?? 😡

If i get such a loving, caring, hot, handsome and extraordinary husband i'll surely be going gaga over him my whole life! Gosh i Love this man soo much! 😳 My Hero! ❤️

As for now i'll let viren be jeevika's 😉 Completing Virika 😊

After reading this, m damn sure that either u can read my mind or look through my heart cuz i was desperately wanting to read something on Virika's anniversary on IF after the on going track in the show! BINGO ! 👏

U just updated the prologue and m in love with it, going crazy here ... i dunno what will happen when u'll update the parts ... Hayeee

I can't tell u how much i wanted to kill u when u stopped there ... GRRR!!!!!!!!

This is caled PURE TORTURE !! 😡

But i slept instead! sily me 😛 Now m a bit calm but that doesnt mean m gonna leave spamming until u update ... M going crazy here ...

Leaving that, U r truly a praiseworthy mind blowing writer and u must be knowing that by now!!

i love u more n more for writing this ❤️

Well this makes me a Proud Reader of ur ever so beautiful stories! 😆

U said that'll u'll continue if u get a good response ... well m sure u will !! No Doubt!

But still u r gonna write it for me right ?? plzzz

Plzzz plzzz plzzz u r gonna continue it for me na ... u said about five ... so its gonna be the second one! 😉

Chalo ab i should leave! i already typed a long comment after reading the prologue only! Haha!

Now this is a proof of the affects ur stories have on me!

not to forget ... my victory dance!

Update soon!

Big Hug for writing this! 🤗

Love u like anything! ❤️

Mirah!

P.S : Everyone, plzzz like the post and leave lots of comments so we get an update soon and I GUARANTEE U that the story is going to be way beyond awesome! Well, thats obvious cuz my Nina is the author! 😆

Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 12 years ago

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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unres

A new story...that too by you...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

very happy today!!

The prologue is mind blowing...👏 👏

Really loved it!! ❤️

awww the puppy..too cute..!! 😳

Virika are always awesome <3

waiting to read more..😛

continue soon 😊

Edited by krystu05 - 12 years ago

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Aashima

@Dhoxi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mirah I'm happy you are back but dude 😭

Bdw our battle is on from now, isn't it? 🤣 AHH I missed you 🤗

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I love the prologue 😉

Would love to read more 😛 Not going to bug you because I know you have so much to do atm 🤣

I will act like a good girl 😳

And should I guess what it will be?

A puppy 😆

OMG napa valley here as well 🥱 wasn't my course work enough for it? 🤣

I love the title name 😳 Let me love you reminds me of a song 😉

Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago

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9999P

@9999P

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Posted: 12 years ago

Unres!!!!!
Wooow it was such an amazing , mindblowing I'm falling short of words to say
first of all you have chosen a wonderful title ' let me love you' hayee I'm dead with the name of the title
viren gifted jeevs a puppy so cute

Edited by 9999P - 12 years ago