New OS: Khalsi ka paani...

Hello!!!
I'm new to SaraswatiChandra forums...
I write mostly at Arjun Forums...

I thought of writing this while watching the old epi's on youtube...
This is mostly part of an episode,
but with my special touches.


So pls tell me how it was,
and like if you want Pms for more of my works.

Sumaya <3

(if interested in Arjun, pls view my Index.)

"Matki le lijiye,
Gharha lelijiye"

He stood there under the Banyan tree,
trying desperately to sell the pots.
but Alas...
No one would buy...
Behind him he heard a giggle.
He turned around and glared at her.
Trying very hard to control her laugh,
she asked,

"um...
Kuch Madad Karu??"
"Apni Madad mai khud kar sakta hu..."
"Ok!! As you wish."
she shrugged an joyfully went away.

'How mean'
he thought,
'But she offered to help na'

He was busy in his thoughts when a woman came to his theyla .
"Ey Chhora, achi matki dikha,
tujhse to naahi Leve ham, par udharka wo chhori bolgayi ek gharhe pe ik moovat mile hai."
"Haa Taayiji ye dekhiye..."
He started showing her the pots...
she bought one and got one free...

15rupees...
The great businessman, SaraswatiChandra Vyas...
stared at it in awe,

'Well when u work too hard, even 15 rupees are 150000' he thought to himself...

something struck him,
'Free pots?'

before he could think a lot more customers arrived,
He got busy...

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On learning about free pots,
more n more customers came,
and in an a hour or so...
All his pots were sold...
except one.

Now! No one wanted to buy it for they wouldnt get another free.
well nothing to do!
He kept it aside & sat under the shade to count the money,
when out of thin air appeared Ms. Mischief.

Saras- "Kaha thi tum? Mere saare Matki bikhgaye,"

Kumud- "Ooh!! Nice."
faking surprise she clapped.

He scowled and counted,
on total 500rs.

He squealed & jumped like a little kid,
which automaticaly made her smile.
In excitement he grabbed in tight hug;
Forgeting all about their whereabouts...
They stayed like that for a moment,
when the whispering of people brought them back to reality.

They drew apart & an awkward silence pursued.

Saras pushed the 'theyla' ahead with kumud beside him...
she broke the silence.

"Umm... Kitne hue?"
"500"
"Uh.. Wow!! Thats.. Nice!"

she spluttered & walked ahead,
when Saras called her back.

"Umm... Realy Sory Kumud, wo khushi k mare... dhyaan..."

"um.. Its Ok"