FF...A Blooming Flower...sulbala

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A BLOOMING FLOWER

"What ur telling me sis?" madhu asked her sister. I am talking about ur future oly madhu , its for ur goodness oly. Ter is no future for me, tis is my house i going to live here life long. I am...i am happy here" wit that a tiny drops of tears fall down from her eyes. "Madhu look at me" by telling that Trishna came close to her lovable sister and touched her hand "its been 1 year madhu, u thought a lesson to RK and he also accepted his mistake and asked forgiveness and u to forgiven him, but refused to accept him, we all respect ur decision madhu". madhu removed the hands of her sister and moved to the window side and wiped her tears, wit the tensed face she turned to her sister "OMG" wat happen Trishna rushed to madhu "i forgot that...that today is ur wedding na" wit those words she smiled little"dont try to change the topic madhu, tis moment is the last moment as ur didu after that i will be wife of Aman. This wish is from Trishna Mallik lovable sister of Madhubala Mallik" wit that Trishna cupped madhu's face in here hand. "ok fine let me ask u one thing didu" by telling that she removed the hands "after u and me went who will take care of Mallik and mom didu?"

"Who has to take care of us"a strong and carrying male voice came and both the sisters turned to see who "mallik" Trishna told "Mam tum" madhu said. "ya we oly there is any doubt in that" mallik asked wit the laughing face. "No...that we are just talking oly simply"madhu nodded the head by looking the answer given by her sister . "we heard the whole matter Trishna dont try to lie"paddo shut-ted her daughters mouth. "madhu we are not forcing u to marry, we are asking u to just thing" madhu can understand the father love in mallik words. Paddo came near madhu and wiped her tears and told "children's duty is to look after the parents in the old age and parents duty is to do the marriage of ter children in the right age".

"Madhu car is ready" sweet little cute voice came and every one turned to see except madhu bcz she know its Aryan, Aryan hate seeing madhu tears so she quickly wiped the tears and had a sweet smile in her face. "OMG see our little hero" Trishna commented and Madhu was shocked to see Aryan bcz he was so so cute in the sherwani which she had choosed for him,she smiled more wider. she moved close to him and kissed him in the foreheadand whispered in the ears "u look like a hero" wit the laughing face he replayed in her ears "wait till u see Sultan,after that u tell me who is the real hero". Mallik and Paddo left to invite sultan by giving the cute comments for the little hero. Madhu and Aryan walked inside the house and were Aryan saw the bride standing to get a comments from the little hero. Aryan looked both the sisters by turning the head from left to right and asked both of them to stand together, tey did the same. Aryan spoke by clearing his throat "now comes our heroin oops sorry bride anyway both are same oly na, if some one telling tis to u means, u shout come one inch forward and stand wat madhu the famous heroin dono tis also huh?" Aryan and Trishna used to fight like tis every time and tey both were frnds. "Today is my wedding day so oly i am leaving u"by telling tis she came one step forward


"ok u look best for Aman i accept it, now my madhu one step forwad pls" Aryan told and folded his hands as he is the director choosing some heroin for the films. "Tis is not fair Aryan" Trishna childishly told both madhu and Aryan cant able to control ter laugh. Aryan spoke again "bcz ur reel life heroin and my madhu is real life heroin,she is always beauty full" and laughed.

some think made modhu to feel the motherhood and small tear were seen in her eyes Aryan came close to her and pulled her to kneel down and reach the face to wipe the tears " I Love u madhu" tey both hugged tightly and then Trishna was also joined to tem. Aryan...all 3 looked up to see sultan.

Madhu has no words to tell she was just in the same kneel downing position were as other two were in ter foot, is he sultan The Don madhu asked her self. U have never seen him in tis type of dress madhu so oly ur asking tis questions madhu. "Madhu Madhu get up" Aryan voice echoed in her mind and till that she was locked by the blue eyed vision. "Ya Aryan tell me"madhu stood up and facing him "i told na to wait till u see Sultan,after that u tell me who is the real hero. now tell me who is the hero madhu" Madhu was speechless by the direct question that too in front of him wit the tensed face she turned her head to look at him but to her shock he was smiling by turning the face, his smile was one of the beauty full think in madhu's favorite list. "Madhu tell me na" aryan asked and madhu came to the reality and blabbered"u r always little hero oly, ok now we can move huh?" Aryan refused to move from the place and spoke wit anger "i asked about big hero not little hero" Trishna and sultan laughed by seeing the madhu helplessness. She turned to see her sister and get her help but trishna was in full enjoying mood and she slowely turned to see sultan and get the help from him, she just tilted her head to the right side and closed her right eyes alone and made a little move of her head to left and right and asked pls. The word pls was not audio-able to madhu itself but to sultan it was audio-able and he acted immediately "Aryan if u were talking and wasting the time like tis means we all will leave u alone here and go, choice is ur's" before sultan finishing the sentence aryan pulled madhu to the door way and told "madhu come soon other wise we will not get the front seat" while going she turned to face sultan and slightly smiled and told thank u. Trishna told to her self "I can see A BLOOMING FLOWER that to love flower in u madhu so oly from morning i am asking u to thing about sultan as ur pair i know sultan also has some feelings for u but he wont tell bcz he respect u a lot. Now i started same feelings in u madhu" Aryan and madhu walking in the steps and aryan asked "Madhu me in maroon color and sultan was also in maroon color then y u alone in white color madhu we are all same family na?"

...to be continued


NOTE: Hi frnds i know i have done lot of spelling and grammer mistakes😳 my kind request is to skip those😆 for me...Tis is my try so dont hate or scold me.

pls frnd if u like tis means tell me or PM me😉

Important Note: i dono Hindi so tell me in English itself 😃


PART 2: next page

LAST PART: pg 4





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one prabha i really love sulbala pair and aryan..since we cannot get sulbala moments nowadays its happy to atleast read your ff..I really enjoyed good job..continue it soon and keep rocking all the best dear...
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wowww awesome ff dear waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: sindhusri

Nice one prabha i really love sulbala pair and aryan..since we cannot get sulbala moments nowadays its happy to atleast read your ff..I really enjoyed good job..continue it soon and keep rocking all the best dear...



surely i will, but it takes time😉
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Nice FF and lovely pictures.
It is great to see a story about Sultan, Aryan and MB.
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LOVED IT UPDATE SOON👏 PLZ PM ME
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Originally posted by: jojo1986

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON👏 PLZ PM ME



thanx sure i will do it
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Originally posted by: Jugliji

Nice FF and lovely pictures.

It is great to see a story about Sultan, Aryan and MB.



thank u😊
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Good update. Ur first try is really good. Continue soon. Thanks 4 d pm.
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PART 2:

Madhu was struck by those words she can't replay anything to Aryan, the word family was ringing in her ear. "Tell me madhu" asked Aryan repeatedly by shaking her hand, Sultan who was coming back was not sure wat happen to her and he rushed and asked his uses well question "Madhu are u all right" this was the sentences which used to bring madhu to the present wen she dwells in the past, the roughed voice and carrying tone made her to come present. "Nothing, I will be in a minute u guys go" by telling this she rushed to her home. "Didu morning u asked me to were one dress na pls give me that" madhu asked in a state of hurry and after lot of teasing and little funny fights Trishna gave that to her sister, she knew it very well the change of the dress is not for her sake but wat ever may be she was happy for her little sister. Roma came to take Trishna to the car and instructed madhu to check everything before closing the door and left. Mallik and Paddo left before to check the arrangement in the temple. After the marriage over there is a party for all at the night and by 2am flight the newly married couple leaving for Australia. Party was the idea by Aman and Trishna to ter family, friends and co-workers. Sultan, Aryan, Trishna, Roma all were waiting for madhu to come. Trishna found some sadness in sultan face and she knew the reason for that becz the dress which was chosen by him for madhu was maroon color and now she is wearing white color which was chosen by Roma.

Sultan was little bit tensed for madhu, so many question aroused in his mind. Is she alright? Is she hurt herself? It seems she didn't like my choice of dress so oly she is not wearing it. He asked question to himself and consoled himself with some answers. He knew that he started loving madhu but he is afraid to tell her, she may deny him by just telling frnds or by telling "afraid to thing about another guy in my life", and he is also not ready to accept the same pain 2nd time. He may have strong body but not strong heart. His wife's death had changed everything, he stated hating himself for the death but after madhu's enter, his life had become normal as like before. Some times wen he was alone his mind thinks about one side love, "I can look at the laughing face daily, the cute smile wen she sees Aryan, the carryingness in her for Aryan, the respect she has for kaka, the playing nature, the way she teaches Aryan new things". It's enough for him to live a life wit it but his heart fails to understand wen it sees her. Sultan's thoughts were distracted by Roma's voice. Roma was restless and shouting madhu's name. The sound of payal made sultan to look up, he was speech less and motions less even he skipped his breath for a mint by looking at her "she looked like a Greek goddess" his heart told him. Trishna looked at sultan face which has a beauty full glow and turned to look at the direction where he was looking. Madhu was coming down from the steps by wearing the dress which was chose by sultan for her.

Aryan gave a cute hug and a kiss in a cheek to welcomed her "madhu u look so beauty full, thanks for hearing my words" by telling that he pulled madhu to the car. The car was beautifully decorated with white and red flowers; it looked like a chariot which takes princess. "It's amazing" madhu commended by touching the red roses and had a cute expression as a small school girl, sultan can give 1000's and 1000's tones of flower to see tis expression on her face. "Madhu, me oly gave this idea to sultan he just arranged the flowers" Aryan told by laughing at the sultan "oh my little hero did tis, ur great I should give u some present" she bent down and gave 3 kisses in Aryan face. Aryan laughed louder, sultan was fuming in anger for telling the lie about the decoration. Sometimes he was jealous by seeing his own child; most of the time Aryan used to get the appreciation and kiss which actually he has to get it.

Sultan driving the car, madhu and aryan were sitting next to him were as Roma and Trishna at the back seat. Madhu was lost in her thoughts; his mother had told at the 1st anniversary celebration of them "sometimes we fail to understand the care and love shown by nearby ppl to us". Those words had deeply affected her from that day onwards she started following sultan eyes, it always pointed her. Madhu wasn't quite sure and she wondered he was just generous and nice and convenient or she was wrong. Was she right for him? Really, really right? She knew that no harm can come to her by him or by others; he won't allow it to come. She is very scared to think about a guy in her life again. Nothing was clear for her becz of her past. She had paid a very high value for it, it was terrifying all over again, by standing in a same place. "What if I was doing the wrong thing? What if he hates me or if RK come in my life again what will I do?" this was the terrific question asked by her to herself. Sometimes wen she looked in to his eye, it tells it's the world for her. One fine day madhu was depressed with the news and media about her and RK issues so sultan had opened his past to her to console her "Marriage is a beautiful relation which two hearts had to undergo a safe and steady feelings about one another". She was impressed by the love which he had for his wife, She had wept for him a whole day for his wife accident. Now Sultan is leading a peaceful life, he had reassigned from his gangster type work and opened a training fitness for men's, which he got the idea from Mallik. At the 1st it was hard for him to live that life but he got through it. The more she came to know him, the more she respected him, the more impressed she was with his mind and his skill and his Soule. Just being with him always made her feel better about the human face, he was one of those rare ppl, great soul.

They reached the temple oly the close friends and colony people were invited for the marriage. Madhu was happy for her sister to get a husband like Aman, she had liked Aman politeness and his broad mind view about Trishna love for her job and he gave permission to continue her carrier after the marriage also. Paddo was cried lot by thinking about missing her daughter. Roma was the happiest person in the world at that time; becz his girl is getting married Roma thought her as like his daughter, a close frnd and she is the student for her. The priest started to chant mantras and the couple started to do the rounds. Madhu face stated to sweat by seeing the fire and remembering her past, she moved back wards slowly without gaining any one attention. "Something wrong madhu?" sultan asked in low tone but wit lot of care. "No'..just'."she tried to sound normal for him, but her heart ached. It was as though every mint she is burning in the fire. Tears welled up in her eyes as she said it to him. "Madhu, I know it is a big deal for u, but we have to try again harder, it takes some people a time to forget it may be a year or two. Just relax. Don't worry so much, and enjoy this big day". She smiled through her tears as he held his hanky in the hand for her. He was such a nice man, and he was so reasonable for madhu to overcome her bitter past. It was hard for him to see her in a sadness it disappointed him each moment, the anguish, the fear, the ache, the emptiness, the terrible longing it's all becz of madhu and its all for her oly. The marriage was over and the couples were getting the blessings from the parents. Madhu looked at ter parents tey were happy for ter children, she wondered if Mallik and Roma didn't come in ter life means wat tey will be doing now. Trishna and Aman approached madhu and sultan who were standing side by side. Sultan hugged Aman and Madhu hugged Trishna, now tey all were happy family.

...to be continued 😳




NOTE: i know most of them didn't like my ff, i don't care about that. Thanx👏 for encouraging me and thanx for discouraging me, i luv tis pair so i will be continuing oly pls spare me😃

Edited by prabha.abha - 12 years ago

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