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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

really like it

awesome work done

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

OMG Darling... 🤗!! This is so very beautiful writings!! 👏👏👏

I read all the three parts in one go.. My god!! You are such a talented writer... I can feel every moments and the lyrics.. Haila.. U connect them with the scenes well... ❤️ !!

Just Beautiful and Well Done, Carissa!! 👍🏼 !! Waiting for your upcoming story... 😳

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@kratzyfan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

carissa , i have no words...u r superb dear👏...yash's feelings are aptly described😊😊😊..well done...come soon with a new story..i'll be waiting

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Jayu

@jy11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

wonderful 👏 .can feel the pain and love in them through your words.wonderfully written.

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

oh carissa my baby you really have frown n out done yourself n me here sitting can do 👏👏👏👏🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗love you n this one aww man loved it to the core

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palbhar

@palbhar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

OMG!!!!! You are 12!!!!!!!!!!!!! and you wrote this?!!!!👏👏👏👏👏

I had tears in my eyes as I was reading it...so beautiful...the way you connected the lyrics to Yash's feeling and POV!!!!! Loved the fact that you looked at it from Yash's POV and not Aarti as he has difficulty voicing and putting down his thoughts into words...the song was so well-suited!!!!

Truly wish CVs should read this...they'll be astounded!!!! BRAVO👏👏👏👏👏👏