Aarya SS- Tum Hi Ho Part 3 Up, Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay, so this is a short Aarya SS of three parts based on the song Tum Hi Ho...I will be updating very soon as all parts are already written so do enjoy, and don't worry, it's not really depressing!

TUM HI HO...PART 1
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Hum tere bin ab reh nahin sakte
Tere bina kyaa vajood meraa

I can't live without you now,
What's my existence without you..


He closed his eyes in peace knowing that she forgave him. He knew she was innocent, his heart said that, but his pain for his child overcame that but she proved she was right! She was innocent all this time! But none of that mattered anymore, all that matters is that she loves me, and always will. Feeling her two arms encircle him and clutch to him, tears trickled down his cheek. She understood him so easily, she bore all that pain of separation from both her husband and her child, did she love him that much? This killed him'.he could never love her as much as she did! But still, he loved her as much as he could, she deserved happiness in every inch of her life! AND HE WOULD GIVE IT TO HER!


Hum tere bin ab reh nahin sakte
Tere bina kyaa vajood meraa

I can't live without you now,
What's my existence without you..


He quickly moved his hands to her, gripping her tightly, hugging her with all the energy he had in his body. He missed her so much! Just being in her embrace was his life! After then, her tears wouldn't stop!


Tujh se judaa gar ho jaayenge
To khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

If I get separated from you,
I'll be separated from my own self..


He can't see my tears! He won't! Aarti, go! He won't be able to forgive himself if he sees me in tears! Why does he love me that much? She couldn't bear to see him torture himself emotionally! She was loosening her grip on him, ready to run away but he wouldn't let her. He held her too strongly in his arms as if he never meant to let go. She requested for him to leave her, but he wouldn't. She tried to break out of his hold and was successful, but he saw her tears!


Kyonki tum hi ho,

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi, ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, meraa dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Because you alone are,
Now you only are,
life. You're my life.
My peace, and my pain,
you alone are my love..


He couldn't bear seeing those tears, those tears were like a punishment, torture, pain-they were more hurtful than anything. He couldn't see them, he could never see them. It hurt. Unknowingly, tears started rolling down his eyes , he caused her too much pain to hurt her again! She slowly walked up to him and wiped those drops from his cheeks!

"I can't live without you!"

He pulled her in his embrace and found peace in her arms. She was his peace, but was his weakness''but he loved her! And that was all that mattered!

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! So sweet! So entertaining! Awe-inspiring!
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👏Wow Carrie wow 👏 👏

Our sweet young Carrie is such a mature writer 👏 👏 👏

It was so emotional and yet so beautiful. I could feel their pain through your writing and your words 😭 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO SWEET AND TOUCHING 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aarti and Yash are two bodies and one soul. You brought out that essence in your story. Beautiful and very touching story telling. Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully wrritten carissa. very touching, Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh this was just soo beautiful. Loved every bit of it. Fantastic job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its a beautiful song Carissa and you have written the update just as beautifully. Reminded me of the story of the Magi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written...
Luking forward for further parts...
Continue soon...😃
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Carissa...This is perfect. A unique, sensitive, brilliant piece of work. It's different and it's endearing...and it touches the core of the heart.

You must write more often. You have a wonderful flow in your work. God bless you!!

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