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Check out this OS by meh!! my very first work in IF. hope u guyss like it...n yah all typs of critisisms are welcomed whole heartedly... 😛😉
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Asad proposes zoya!
Dilshad: zoya tumse kuch bat karni thi
zoya:.boliyeh na phupi ..
dilshad:darasal aaja asad ka dost ka marriage aniversary hai aaur woh muje sath jane ko keheraha hai..aab mein kaha baccho k bich mein jau..isiliye sochrahi thi agar tum aur asad... zoya thinking(beta man mein laddu futa) :p
dilshad:haa..Agar nahi jana chati toh its ok..
zoya: No no no phupi i will definately go..
dilshad:superb... so wait tumhare liye maine dress choose kiya hai...
zoya:phupi aap sure thi ki mai jaungi :>
..woh...dilshad speechless.. :/ she goes n comes wid a beautiful black saree..imagine how zoya wud luk...damn gorgeous!
At night...asad returns n sees dilshad is nt yet rdy.
asad:aami aap aab tak tayar nahi hui??
dilshad:Tumhare liye koi aaur tayar ho raha hai asad.zoya cums. Evry1 luks nd can't take off their eyes frm her..asad, my goodness 🤗..he continuosly watches her n keeps on throwin his deadly smile..
Dilshad notices dis n whispers asad to cum out of drm n go,u r gettin late.
asad: Aami aap v nah..dey bth sit on d car..bth r speecless.asad turns d radio on n a song plays..d same..bol na halke halke. Bth look at each otha..mitwa-ishq pe zor nahi 😳
zoya:uus din aapne kya bola tha mr. Khan yad hai.
asad:kuch yad nahi..asad was preety sure dat he cud nt control his emotions today so he made flat excuse..dey reacd d place
.Asad introduces zoya wid his frnds. Dey tease him sayin 'girlfriend'.. Bt he says no jus a guest at our house, whn c was his fiance he didnt even said she's a frnd. Zoya is sad n angry..c moves out of there.she was stopped by a handsome guy! He was flirting wid her n she was nt unknown bout dat..bt she thought she cud teach asad a lesson.so she goes close to the guy n dances with him.. Asad gets jeleous at all dis n warns zoya dat d guy is nt gud...
zoya:mr. Khan, r u jelous?
Asad: Wat, nonsense..bt stay away frm him! Asad leaves.
Zoya was happy dat her plan was working! N goes even closer to d guy..he says her to cum outside along wid him, zoya was bout to refuse bt finds asad lukin at dem so says yes n goes outside..d guy tries to misbehave wid zoya n she slaps him..
d guy gets angry n turns wild.he turns her blouse..c screams MR. KHAN!!!..
asad rushes out n starts throwin kicks at d guy n says stay away frm her she is my fiance. Zoya shockd, dey look at each other..mitwa..asad wraps her wid his coat n asks y c was doing so...she hugs him tightly...mitwa...ishq peh zor nahi...asad gently binds her within his arms...dey get lost in each oters arm...zoya opens her eyes n says, aapse qubool karwana tha ki mai aapke liye sirf guest nahi hu. I matter a lot in ur life.aap v mere liye wahi feel karte ho jo mein aapke liye feel karti hu.. Hai na?? Boliye na mr.khan..asad tries to ignore n says we sud go back home..she holds asad's hand...kab tak mr.khan?? ...agar mujse .pyar nahi karte hai toh bataiye na... maine toh aapna sap kuch aapko dediya hai... agar aap muje nikah nahi karenge toh kon karega??? jis ladki ki sagai aur sabi rituals kisi aur k sath puri ho chuki hai uushe nikah kaun karega?? asad luks at her lovingly..aur agar ho v gaya toh kya aap bardast karpaoge...cud u see ur zoya getting married to sum1 else?? kya aap mere sibaye kisi aaur k sath nikah karpaoge?? zoya's eye full of tears.. keheneko toh yeh sab rashme jhute the hamare liye..par aapni dil se puchiye..kya aapko sach mein yeh sab galat lag raha tha?? boliye na mr khan kyu chup ho aap?? she holds his color n asks him to answer n finally kneels down!!! asad brusts into emotion...he kneels down...his both hand on zoya's face wiping her tears.. n sweetly says, yah, zoya u matter a lot in my life...tum mere liye sirf guest nahi ho, u r my life... tumhe datne ka, tumse jhagadneka, tumhe pyar karneka hak sirf mujhe hai...aur tumpar v sirf mera hak hai...tumhare siwa kisi aaur k sath sadhi karneka soch v nahi sakta hu mai...aaur agar tumhari nikah kisi aur k sath hogaya toh ji nai paunga...marjaunga...zoya stops him with her hand in his mouth... n says.. I LOVE YOU asad...both look at each other emotionally...he hugs her tightly...I LOVEYOU TOO zoya... mujhe tum qubool ho... aapni sari zindagi tumhare sath bitana chata hu... wada karo ki kabhi muje chodke nahi jaogi...i promise mr.khan...zoya kisses asad in his cheeks and asad in her forehead... aur apni nayi zindagi ki surwat karne ke liye aaghe bade yeh dono!!! couple made in heaven Asad-Zoya (AsYa)... <3 <3
***** praz-eenA*****
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I WUD REALLY APPRICIATE YOUR PATIENCE IF YOU GUYS REACHED THE BOTTOM OF IT! I KNOW ITS ALL RUBBISH! ACTUALLY IT WAS POST NO. 1 IN I-F BY ME...BT NOW SINCE I AM POSTING MY ANOTHER FF... I THUT TO WARN YOU GUYS ABOUT MY WRITING SKILLS...