MG OS:ZIndagi pt 3,4/15,17 may 30 *COMPLETE* - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
congratulation for new MG FF
awesome nice, lovely
part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hi thanks 4 da pm...read n commented! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Superb Start 😃
They r married then Y seperated 😕
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Start😃
They r married then Y seperated 😕
Continue soon 😊

well that u have to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
MG OS : ZINDAGI

PART 2



those emotions that were crystal clear on his face were making geet to drown in her guilt trip... She was mean and selfish.. Her dreams her wishes always comes first she never thought what he will feel how will he cope up how can she be the stone hearted...

LEAVE ME MAAN THOSE WERE THE WORDS THAT AGAIN PIERCED HIS HEART... THE AGONY THE PAIN THAT EVERYTIME SHE IMPOSE ON HIM WAS NOTHING INFRONT OF THE WOUNDS THAT TIME TO TIME HER MEMORIES HAVE INFLICTED ON HIM...

maan : i never meant anything to you geet.. You never saw me with the person who can hold your aspiratioons your life... My feelings you never counted ... Why do you hate me so much geet...

the battered and weltered self of the great MSK could only be seen infront of her.. She was the only one who meant everything to him yet she meant nothing to him...

geet was having tough time to deal with the countless emotions that he had suddenly opened up for her... Her senses were cursing her for again making him to pay for what she was doing.. He was a superb in hiding his emotions those chocolate brown orbs which were the vision of her life were like deserted sea shore now all blank , absolute hatred she could see in them...

geet tried to leave when his one pull from her wrist made her to fall in the security of his arms... Those crazy locks were now freely flowing on her face... She lifted her eyelids and met the most expressive eyes ... Just like they were always...

maan : cant you see geet that these eyes always crave for your one glimpse... These two years i was dying to see you...
His crystal clear feelings made her to stiffen in her embrace...

geet : maan... L.e.a..v...e

maan : this is what i did geet left you... I left you geet never even tried to interfere in your life... And now also i wont even try to interfere...saying so he left her...

tears made her way to show how much she had lost in her life.. Though she had gotten something atht she wanted but never even got the taste of that feeling that maan could only give her...

you never understood me geet... Geet heard him say as she saw him distancing from her ... He was stumbling... His drunken self was having his remorse that was visible on his face... Maan was about to fall when she hold him…

his sarcastic smile made her to avert her gaze from him….

Geet: let me help you maan…

Maan looked at her , he could see those small hidden feelings that were there in her eyes..she always concealed her sensation , those sentiments…. The passion those hidden desires were know having the life …. The visible words were less than those which were in her eyes…

Maan: you feel for me geet ..

Geet : no.. not this way…

She was holding him… but he didn't need her support instead he need her ..her love..her trust…

Maan: tell me geet .. why are you doing it.. you know I have learnt to live without you.. so there is no need for you..and maan singh khurana never wants any support …..

Geet was numb.. she tried to take him back to the party ..as he was the host and there all must be waiting for him.. suddenly she saw him walking independently… and the next moment she was in his arms.. he was walking very consciously.. she was in his embrace just like the first time..when she was unconious..terrified and numb.. speechless ….

Maan made her sit on the passenger seat and drove her to the place where they were lost in them for the first time….

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the sensitive feelings were know making their way through them . .the softness of her hands the soft caresses of his hands was arousing those feelings that till know she doesnt even know that exist..


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hi..

just came across this story..

loving the storyline...

maaneet are married...but now they are seperate...

geet with some one who thinks her as as his daughter but maan misunderstood..

dev!!!


now maan is taking her with him...

waiting to read more..

cont soon..

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Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: kingofme

hi..


just came across this story..

loving the storyline...

maaneet are married...but now they are seperate...

geet with some one who thinks her as as his daughter but maan misunderstood..

dev!!!


now maan is taking her with him...

waiting to read more..

cont soon..

and pls add me to your pm list...



thanks a lot glad that u like this fiction..add u ..do accept dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Res

Unres

Me second yuppie 🥳
[/:D\]

Wow suhana I loved both of the parts! 🤗

Just lovely! 👏

Maneet are married but not together aww

😭

Maan is taking her with him! Good



Update soon dear


😊

~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
loved the update
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Fabulous
geet denying waiting for next

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