MG OS:ZIndagi pt 3,4/15,17 may 30 *COMPLETE*

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hi dear..congrats on the new story! Interesting prologue n awesum update! Well written! update soon

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awesome update

maan still loves geet

but both are seperated

wonder what went wrong between them

maan gets angry on dev who was misbehaving with geet

waiting for the next part

please update soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

why maan n geet not together...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely starting...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice start. so both maan and geet were married but not staying with each other.

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Su_hana

@Su_hana

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sridevi_n
nice start. so both maan and geet were married but not staying with each other.

thx yup they r parted

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missmishty

@missmishty

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

sounds intresting will b surely waitin 4 d next update

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow
quite an interesting start
looking forward to more
continue soon dear

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

TEASER

the sensitive feelings were know making their way through them . .the softness of her hands the soft caresses of his hands was arousing those feelings that till know she doesnt even knw that exist..

maan was having no intention to let her go ..
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Maan : why do u always want to leave me geet cant u c me these eyes always crave for your one glimpse..
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the soft whimper of her heart was now visible .. The warm embrace of him made her to forget what all she wanted just one thing was there in her heart that was to always remain in his protective LOVE...

ANY1 WANTS UPDATE ??