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Ok I know what ur thinking...I wrote an OS 🤣A girl who only makes cap post which requires absolutely no writing whatsoever 🤣 But this is what the weekend does guys...and plus I was so annoyed by seeing Asad hug Tanveer so taking all my frustrations out through this 😡😆 Please read and dont throw tamatars at me because of my terrible writing 😆 I mean I'm only...well can't tell my age but as Sanky figured out...between 13-17 so I hope I have an excuse here 😆

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As Asad enters the Khan Residence, he sees an unpleasant sight he could have never imagined nor wished to see. He walks in angrily and breaks the eye lock between Ayaan and HIS Zoya. He sighs as he notices something else that triggered his OCD to activate; a floor full of popcorn.

Asad-Umm Ayaan...what's going on here? I mean...umm why you here all of a sudden? And why is there so much popcorn on the floor????!!!

Zoya-Allah miya!! Whats wrong with u Mr Khan? Its the weekend!!! We're just going to hang out with some popcorn and movie but...it umm fell...Sorry about that.

Asad-Well can you walk more carefully next time? Now clean all this up and Ayaan...can you stop hanging out with Zoya..she's mi..I mean... She's such a musibat...Why would u ever want to hang out with her?!!! *Zoya's opens her mouth wide open; shocked and angry. Asad notices the angry look on Zoya's face*

Zoya-Oh really Mr Khan? And you are such a delight aren't you? *Zoya rolls her eyes* Let's go and watch the movie Ayaan...and don't worry Mr Khan...I'll clean all this before we watch the movie.Happy?

Zoya quickly cleans all the mess and sits on the sofa beside Ayaan. Asad looks at Ayaan and Zoya, burning with jealousy. Asad stomps to his room and slams the door behind him. How dare she even look at another man? He cant bear to see his Zoya with someone else. He gets even more angry when he suddenly sees a flashback of Ayaan and Zoya looking into each other's eyes . He goes to the living room curious to know whats going on between them. He notices Zoya's head resting on Ayaan's shoulder and punches his hand against the wall in anger.

Asad-Zoya!!!!

Ayaan and Zoya quickly get up and see Asad furious. Asad walks over to Zoya and grabs her by her shoulder.Having no idea of whats going on whatsoever, Ayaan stands there still.

Asad-Zoya how dare you?!! How could you even think about resting your shoulders on another man like that let alone actually do something like that in reality?? Don't you get it?!!! Your mine!!!! ONLY mine! *Zoya looks at him stunned but suddenly realises the pain she's experiencing from his tight grip*

Zoya-Stop it Mr Khan!!! I'm a girl not some toy you own and can hurt whenever you feel like it!! Let go of me!!

Asad realises Zoya in pain and lets go of her at that instant. Ayaan observes this from a distance.

Asad-Sorry...but I just can't see you with someone else. It burns me Zoya and I just can't bear the fact that you can even think about looking at someone else when you know how I might feel. *Zoya gives a faint smile*

Zoya-But why Asad? Why can't you see me with someone else?

Asad-*Asad realises what he has just said and mumbles* Woh...actually. *Zoya slaps her forehead with her hands*

Zoya-I get it Mr Khan...I love you too. *She hugs Asad tightly*

Asad-*Asad grins and hugs Zoya back* I love you too Zoya.

Ayaan smiles at the sight of his brother and his best friend so hopelessly in love. Even though he knew that he somewhat had feelings for Zoya, there was no way that he would ever want to see himself with Zoya, for he knew, that Zoya is only made for Asad .

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Ok this is it guys...the end 😆 I know..cheesy right? 🤣 This is probably my first and last OS cause I can see the pain our wonderful writers on the forum go through 😆 Open for all types of comments but please comment and like 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anamika writing an OS? Really really? 😲 *runss off to read*!

I loved it sooo much! It was short and sweet! The jealous Ayaan, confessing only when he sees his girl in another man (read brother's) arms! Awww 😆

Poor Ayaan probably got scared initially! 🤣

Loved it! You HAVE to write more! 😃


-Faiza 😳
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This is sooo cutee 😳

tu likhti kyun nahi hai bee? >.<
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS is what should happen LOL putting all the Zoyaan worries to rest 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jassieg

Awesome os. Loved it.

Thank u so much 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty



This is sooo cutee 😳

tu likhti kyun nahi hai bee? >.<

Awww thank u thank u thank u so much🤗 And I dont write because I get ideas like once in a million years so 🤣
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Thank u 😳
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Originally posted by: mochhug

THIS is what should happen LOL putting all the Zoyaan worries to rest 😃

Egg-jact-lee 😆 Thank u for ur feedback 😃
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LOVELY ADORABLE 😳
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Originally posted by: ACFSHAIKH

LOVELY ADORABLE 😳

Thank u 😳😳😳

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