RomCom OS: Asad's Proposal For Wedding

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At Night in Asad's room:
Asad is standing near the semi lunar grand window, stressed and full of guiltiness. He has realized what he has done to his very own Zoya. He has been so rude to her without giving a chance to explain.

"Why do I do this to her every time? I've hurt her so much when I should console her! Why? Why can't I control myself when I see her fault? And this time she was completely innocent, rather feared of her past experience."

He shook his head, puzzled.

"Now I think I should say sorry to Zoya. But will she forgive me so easily?"
His Ammi entered his room.

Dilshad: Asad, if you will try to say sorry with heartiness, I think she'll forgive you.
Asad: No Ammi, this time I've talked to her very rudely. She must be very upset.
Dilshad: Look, you did it unknowingly. And she's not a fool like you who waits to burst on anyone.
Asad: But don't you think that it is too late to knock at her room? I'll talk to her in the morning.
Dilshad: Yes, I think you need to be prepared for one more sentence to be told to her.
Asad: One more?
Dilshad: Did you say her about your feelings yet?
Asad[stammered]: I..I..
Dilshad: Goodnight.[And she went to her room]

Asad shook his head again in nervousness.

"Someday I'll be crazy for this girl. But is Ammi right? Do I need to prepare for it? I think yes, because every time I try to talk to her, I cannot complete due to hesitation. Tomorrow I'll surely say it to her, by hook or by crook. C'mon Asad, let's go for it."
"Miss Farooqui, I..I..I.. "
[No yaar, not like this. Okay this time it will be perfect,]
Miss Farooqui, I love..I love..cricket'so will you go to watch the IPL final with me?
[What rubbish, I should ask her to go to Honeymoon, not in a cricket match? Okay, Okay, chill]
Miss Farooqui, kya aap mere bacche ki ammi banna chahengi?? [What??!!! Asad focus on Nikah first, Bacche toh hote rahenge. Aur vaise bhi use yeh kehne ki baad nikah ki umid bahut hi kum hogi. Let's try once again]
Miss Farooqui, Ammi likes you very much and wants me to marry you, so will you'[Stop Asad, it is your feelings, not your Ammi's feelings. Be a man. But unfortunately I've not learnt the tricks to woo girls. I think I need help.
Idea,Ayan. He is much experienced in this field. Let's call him]
Asad: Hello, Ayan?
Ayan[in a sleepy voice]: Yes Bhai, what happened? Is everything okay?? You are calling me in midnight!
Asad: No Ayan, all is not well with me.
Ayan: Is your Ammi alright?
Asad; Ya, Ammi is alright by god's grace. But I think I'm not.
Ayan: What? I'm reaching there by 15 minutes.
Asad: Ayan, Listen to me first'

But Ayan had already cut the phone and after about 20 minutes he jumped into Asad's room through the window.

Ayan: Bhai, thank god that you are all right. So can you please explain me what's not right?
Asad: Ayan, I don't know how to say it you.
Ayan: Bhai, you are hesitating to say it to me? Interesting'[He smirked]
Asad's cheeks and ears went red. He stammered again and at last became successful in saying the matter in a single breath.
Asad: I think'I mean I don't think, I know that I like, no, I don't like, rather I love Miss Farooqui. But I don't know how to propose her. Please help me in it Ayan.

Asad's confession left Ayan render speechless. He could not even imagine his elder brother to fall for the girl whom he usually calls 'Mushibat'[Problem].

Ayan: Bhaijan, are you kidding me? Mona? Are you sure?
Asad: Yaar, when I myself became so shocked realizing the truth, you should be surprised. But whatever Zoya and my past relation had been, it is the ultimate truth that I've hid from all except Ammi.
Ayan: Oh ho, so from now no Miss Farooqui, only Zoya. You turned out to be so fast.[He winked]
Asad[pretended to be serious]: Ayan you are not so old to taunt me on such matters, understand?
Ayan: Okay, then ask solutions from your shadow. I'm going back. Good night.
He acted like he was really going back. Asad held his hand tightly and implored him,
Asad: How can you leave your brother in such problem?
Ayan: Then what to do Bhaijan. Aap toh Mushibat yani ki Zoya bhabi ki saath hi zeena chahte hai. You have chosen the path.
Asad: Please stop kidding Ayan. Let's come to the point.
Ayan: So what's your query? Ask me fast, I need to go home soon.
Asad: Okay, okay, so tell me what a girl wants from her man?
Ayan: Generally girls wants many many many things from their man, but their principle need is love and the confession of it in front of the world.
Asad: What?? I'm not being able to say it to her alone, how I will manage to say it in front of the world?
Ayan: Bhaijan, I said that generally girls want it. It doesn't mean that a confession in solitude will not be appreciated by them.
Asad: Then tell me what should I tell?
Ayan: You can start with praising her beauty, her hairs, eyes, cheeks, lips and the other things you admire.
Asad: Really?
Ayan: Sure. But take care that it should not turn vulgar.
Asad: That means I can't admire everything I like in her. Like her'
Ayan: Bhaijan, what are you talking about? She will rather slap you if you will try it.
Asad: What's the problem if I'll praise her'
Ayan: Shhh, bhai, anyone can hear it.
Asad: Ayan, can you please keep mum and let me talk for a minute?
Ayan: Okay,[put his index finger on his lips]
Asad: I was talking about her cooking. She cooks well.
Ayan: Cooking?? I thought'whatever..So are you interested in the rest part of my funda of proposing?
Asad: Okay, you proceed.
Ayan: Then slowly you hold her hand and pull her toward you. Gradually you put your another hand in her waist and feel her softness.
Asad: Then?
Ayan: Then pull her more near and whisper in her ears about your feelings.
Asad: That's it??
Ayan: Yes bhaijan, but now I have to go. Keep practicing.

Ayan went for his house.

Here Asad started practicing for the next morning. He went before the huge dressing table of his room and when he was just about to say "I love you Zoya" he saw something in the mirror and was shocked.

Asad: Zoya, what are you doing in my room at this time?
Zoya[came near to him]: You can knock in my room at any time, so why can't I?
Asad: No, actually I thought that you must be upset with me.
Zoya: I can't be upset with you for a long time Mr. Khan. By the time you unknowingly hurt me. So I'm forgiving you for the last time. But please don't hurt me like this. Don't you know how it feels when one keeps hurting you though you are innocent?

Asad held Zoya's hand and pulls her toward him.

Zoya: Mr. Khan aap yeh..

Asad put his index finger on her pouty lips and held her waist tightly. Zoya was shivering in fear and excitement. Asad cupped her face softly and whispers in her left ear,

Asad: Zoya, I've tried to say it to you a number of times but could not express my feelings. As you know that I'm a bit emotionally challenged. But now I want to confess it without any prologue.

After a few seconds of silence he let the tidal waves of his heart to flow.

Asad: I love you Zoya, I love you more than anything, anyone in the world. So will you marry me??
Zoya: Don't you know the answer Mr. Khan?
Asad: Yes I know, but I want to hear it from you once.
Zoya: Yes Mr. Khan. I will marry you.
Asad: Toh phir aaj bhi Mr. Khan hi kahogi? Mera ek naam bhi hai.
Zoya: Okay Asad.

Asad gifted her a sweet smile and pulled her face closer to taste the divine sweetness of her lips but then Zoya started to make sounds like that.."Tick tick tick tick'"

Asad: What's wrong with you Zoya?
Zoya: Tick tick tick tick

And she made herself free from his strong arms and tried to run and Asad tried to stop her but running behind her.

Asad: Zoya rukoo'.and ah'Ya allah, what's wrong with me??
Asad found himself on the floor with a pillow in his left arm.

He was actually dreaming of proposing Zoya and in the morning his alarm clock spoiled his very first kiss. However, he smiled at his silly dream and wished the same to happen in his real life too.
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Sabarnee_25 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 likes..but no comments!! why yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE; In these troubled times you guys can come up with such nice stories; I have struck a dead end

QH is killing me but the works on the forum is what keeps me going

Why can't the CVs read our work and give us what we want instead of that Kaali Billi; humesha raasta kaatti hai

thode dino mein sapno mein bhi nahi bolne degi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww dreamz unlimited... cute one 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww that was sooo cutttee
Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -cyndu-

Aww that was sooo cutttee
Loved it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really good! Last part was hilarious! Ahahahahaha!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic os...very well written...n best part no billi n meaw bg hre to interrupt...

thnx fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab os..very well written..thnkfully no billi n hr meaw,bg z hre to interrupt...

thnx fr pm
Edited by shreya11mehra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb sabarnee,ayan ka gutter mind activate ho gaya tha🤣

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