Love Struck 2 A SwaRon Love Journey - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome bak
n 40 likes toh Done hai
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awesome...update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dude,its double Well come becoz u are here again with u'r amazing writing talent and with u'r previous blockbuster "Love Struck"'s part 2...Thanx for giving Love Struck part second..So moving on with prolouge..

The characters as usual..SwaRon..And new characters Shanaya and Tanya..Just a treat to read..Well,i always appreciate u'r narration way...The way u narrate story is unique...Now,in this FF i think Shanaya will going to narrate swaron Love journey..So,its really interesting ahead..

So prolouge seems beautifull concept...Tanya is Daughter of SwaRon..and Shanaya is younger sister of Sharon..Character sketch is perfect...Shanaya and tanya covo was amazing..I like the curiosity of tanya to know about her parents first meet...Now,shanaya mausi will going to tell tanya about SwaRon love journey..So its really interesting ahead...

Well this time swayam is the big treat for me to read...His character is looking different and curious for me..So dude..I really loved the concept of Love Struck part 2..Keep updating..Now u are free..
And last thanx for PM..

Prateek
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice to see u back in writing
Loved the prologue
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Hi Guys thank you very much for this amazing response to the prologue. It was really beyond my expectations. I am so glad that so many people are looking for part 1. So here goes your first part of Love Struck 2.

Part 1- The Virtual Meeting

The story starts from The Universal Recording Studio where everybody was gathered to plan out the strategies to promote new recorded album of the shining star Swayam Shekhawat. It was much tensed situation for Universal Music group because it was the last album of Swayam's contract with them. It was a situation where Swayam was no more new talent or a star, Swayam was Icon now and expectations from the album were sky high.

The main issue with them was casting for video of the songs because all the songs were high pitch dance songs and Swayam was too good dancer so somebody who can match his energy was required, and also the condition of something new from Swayam was in place. Yes Swayam wanted a new dancer with him who is new for the whole audience.

Castings were to start but the main problem was female lead who can match Swayam. Auditions were announced and they had received plenty of CD's for auditions but Swayam had already disapproved everybody.

You know Swayam had this work habit where he would reject anything if it didn't meet 0.5% of his criteria and now that he was this humongous star nobody would dare to oppose him in his decisions so the situation was getting very much out of control for the music company because Swayam was not ready to compromise anything.

The album was ready songs were recorded but video was needed to launch the album which was not available and would not be possible to make video in the conditions that were prevailing then.

So now everybody was gathered here and I was accompanying Swayam in that meeting. I went to meeting just because Swayam wanted me to join. And I really don't know why he forced me to come; I guess he needed somebody to spend time in that boring meeting.

"Well Swayam look every top notch dancer is ready to appear with you in the video and we have got requests from some famous names to add them in your video then why are you having problems in working with them" said the CEO of Universal Studios

"Mr. CEO this is my business as far as I know who I want in my video, and I have already told you I want a dancer not a model/showpiece to sell my video" Swayam replied

"But they are good dancers don't you think Neha Singh is good dancer she is ready to work with you at any time and place" MD of Universal studios spoke finally

"ha-ha-ha Neha Singh are you kidding me, you call her dancer just because she can do some hip hop moves that doesn't make her dancer Mr. MD" Swayam replied

"Who do you want then you are free bring the one you want to bring" MD said angrily

"It's your work Mr. MD not mine, I am just fixing my criterions for work and calm down you know very well you cannot afford to lose me now" Swayam said

"Ok look we have tried our level best there is one dancer who can match you but she is not interested in working in a video" CEO said

"What a dancer suitable for me? I will decide that Mr. CEO she is suitable or not and who is that girl who said no to me?" Swayam asked

"Sharon is her name, Sharon Rai Prakash the female lead of Shaimak's institute of performing arts troupe" CEO said

And trust me I was like hell shocked to know my sister said no and they were talking about my sister.

Swayam was just looking at me asking me "Is she your sister?"

I didn't had any choice to lie so I had to nod in yes to Swayam and the moment I said yes a smile crept on his face.

"Ok Mr. MD now I will personally contact this Miss Sharon and take her dates ok you are free now" Swayam said

And we got off from the meeting.

Swayam was walking like he had convinced Di to work in his video and I knew if Di said no that means nobody in this whole can change her answer now.

"What the hell Swayam did I say I will convince Di to work with you then why did you commit them" I said to Swayam

"You don't have to say Sweetheart it is implied that you have to convince your Di work with me" Swayam replied

"No way Swayam I am not doing that, if you think you are the only self centered creature in this whole world then back off dude because Sharon Di even bigger one" I said

"Sweetheart you won't do a small favor to your best friend" Swayam said pouting

"Swayam stop doing that you know I am too soft to handle this one, Di will kill me even if I say anything to her" I said

"Sweetheart you have two days" Swayam said and left

I was feeling like killing Swayam at that time. Why the hell me?

Sharon Di and revert her decision was next to impossible and now I was stuck in between this two gigantic stole ward ego people.

I would have prayed to God at list thousand times before reaching home.

You know actually when you are in deep problem god listens to you.

I reached home and what I saw everybody was running with juice and ice creams and chocolates in the house. I could make out Sharon Di is home but what was all that I couldn't understand that.

I went in the house and in the hall itself I saw Di was sitting on Sofa sitting crying and eating Ice-cream. God my heart stopped for a second to see Di crying because it was first time I saw her crying.

"Gosh what happened Di why are you crying so badly?" I asked

"Shani you know what happened today" she said and started crying

"What Di? I don't know" I said

"You know Shani you know that bloody jerk A**W*** Raj he said" she said and started crying again

"What did he say? I will kill him I swear to God" I said

"He said that I am not the type of girl whom anybody can love. I am just good for bed and broke up with me" she said whole thing finally

"What did he just say that to you? I will screw him, Raj you son of B**** I am gone hunt you and beat you up like hell" I said

"I have already done that Shani, he is in city hospital now I have broken his ribs" Sharon Di said

"What then why are you crying?" I asked

"I lost my love Shani, this much crying should be acceptable Na" she said

"Gosh Di it is not your first break up so please stop harassing yourself now" I said

"I need a change in environment for some days take off from your work and we will go on a trip" Sharon Di said

Oh gosh why didn't I get it first? This is the best chance to convince Di to work in Swayam's video. But how will I convince her? She won't say yes straight away. I have to do some drama.

"Di actually I am going out in some days for work" I said

"What? Where? Am I not important to you? You will go for work leaving me behind" she said

"No Di you also can come there it would be fun for you also" I said

"Really where are you going?" She asked

"Well we are going to Gujarat to shoot in White Desert" I said

"Gosh White Desert I so wanted to see it from very long" she said

Wow that means half of job is easy now she wants to see white desert. Now I am Shanaya I can handle her very well. God thank you so much for making situation easy and giving me enough brains to utilize the situation.

"Then come along, I will arrange the accommodations for both of us and you can work as assistant choreographer there if you want" I said

"For what type of shooting are you going?" she asked finally

"Well actually Di it is video shoot for Swayam's new album" I said

"But they don't have any female lead then how will you all shoot?" she asked

"Well actually Swayam said if nobody comes forward then he will train me and use me as lead" I said

I knew this had to work because she was offered the job and I wasn't even dancer.

There was all of sudden change in her expressions. I could make out she will shout at me. God she is getting normal now.

"Shani actually I forgot to tell you that I was offered that assignment but I rejected it, do you think I made a mistake by rejecting it?" she asked

"Well actually Di it is something that will earn lot of fame because they have put in some seriously big investments in this album and they are promoting as a short story through songs and costumes are also never before seen I have given my best shot till date. I guess it could have earned you loads if you could have taken up" I said

I knew this had to work because Di was looking for an opportunity to get to her own and leave Shaimak's troupe, not that she was being paid less or something in that troupe but she wanted to be known on her.

There she was recognized as Shaimak's lead and Shaimak's find. So she was totally irritated with that now and one big opportunity and she would leave all this, and now that opportunity was knocking the door I just had to make her realize that and today I guess she realized that.

"Shani do you think it will earn me fame besides Swayam?" she asked

"Ya Di it will because the lead will feature on cover with her name on cover" I said

"Wow awesome then I should call them and say yes" she said

"No" I just blurred out

"Why you only said that it is good na" she said

"Ya I said but now the situation is different it is Swayam who will cast the dancer now so we have to convince him" I said

"Ok then call Swayam, we can talk to him he is your friend right?" she said

"Ya good idea he is my friend" I said

Finally Di was convinced with this and now I can call Swayam to give good news. I was so happy that I did it very easily.

I called up Swayam and put the phone on speaker on Di's request

"Hey Swayam Shanaya here" I said

"Ya Sweetheart I know you, say what makes you call me at this hour" he said

"Swayam actually my sister she is dancer and she has free dates so she can take part in your video" I said

"Oh cool that's nice, I can arrange for her audition tomorrow and then if she passes it we will talk about the job and contract and other details" he said

"What he will take my audition? What the hell he thinks of himself? I am Sharon Rai Prakash, I am not any of those street dancers tell him if he wants me then he has to talk about contract directly" she spoke it so loud that Swayam heard that

"Sweetheart I am Swayam Shekhawat I cannot take anybody without seeing it, it is about my image I am gone put up the leading on lady on my album cover" Swayam said

"But Swayam your recording studio people have seen her and she was offered for this she is just accepting it" I said

"Sweetheart did I say yes to any of the girls they selected without seeing then it applies to your sister also she is no different" Swayam said

"What the hell? Go find someone else" Di said loudly

"Ok fine it's your loss only I will find some other girl for my video and give her all the fame" Swayam said

"Ya fine give her that" Sharon Di said and stormed off to her room

"What the hell Swayam? What did you do?" I said putting the phone from speaker to normal and went in the balcony

"What did I do?" he replied

"Don't be so innocent, you rejected my Di and she is really best dancer you can have for you video do you get it?" I said

"She was the one who rejected me first and wait I didn't reject her I just want to see her dancing and then sign the contract I can do that much after all it will be my efforts which will bring her fame" he said

"You jerk I didn't thought you will do that but you have big ego Swayam and trust me one day you will regret it due" I said

"Calm down Sweetheart, your sister will come tomorrow and give auditions and will only be the one for the video" he said

"And how do you know that she will come?" I asked

"You know sweetheart there are very few opportunities to raise to fame come to dancers here in India so she will realize it very soon" he said

"You jerk I will remember this Swayam you are my best friend and you only are playing smart game with my sister" I said

"She was the one who started and you know I am better with who are good with me and I am worst for the ones who challenge me. Your Di has started now I will end it" he said and put the phone down

God why you had to send both this Egoistic strong headed persons in my life only. Don't you feel pity for this small child of yours God?

I really didn't know what I would do next if Di gives auditions and comes face to face to Swayam for contract negotiations. God please save me.

"Wow it was really sandwich position for you between the two strong ego holders" Tanya said

"Ya I was literally pushed from both sides" I replied

"Then what happened next" she said

"wait- wait let me have some water then I will tell you what happened next" I replied

That is it for this part. You all know what you all required to do. Hit like button and leave your comments. Next update will be after 40 likes and comments. Enjoy the update.

Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mr CA...😊

Finally i am editing my comments here...well u dont have any idea..how much I love ur write ups...ur style of writing is so unique...its real..as if its happening with me...and the King Of Detailing Is BACK...I MISSED U SO MUCH 😳


AMAZING concept ...mindblowing flow in the story...they met..they fought ...they patched up...they fell in LOVE...simple story ...yet so lovable...and trust me ...u take me to another Swaron world...its not cheesy ..its not flowery ...its not heavenly ...its real...as real as one can get...ur characters have their own flaws...their own strengths ...WOAH ...m loving the characterization here...

Tanya...the combination of Sharon's attitude...and Swayam's cuteness...ahaaa...

Shanaya...the one and only link between SwaRon...loving her characterization...

Sharon...the arrogant diva..with her own perceptions

Swayam...the sweet yet full of attitude Rockstar...

The love story of a Rockastar and the Diva ...wow...couldn't get better thn this ..

Loved the introduction and the 2nd chapter ..their 1st meeting...

Sparks r bound to fly..when its about Swaron...ahaaa

I just LOVED the update...


The fight was hilarious ...again i will repeat myself...the king of detailing is back😉

Luv
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Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow what a start of the story
now eagerly waiting for the next chapter ab jaldi jaldi update kar dena zyada wait mat karwana
thanks for the pm
Edited by zk456789 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update 😊
Shanaya in b/w Swaron's ego😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
yes finally an update...!!!!
i was waiting like anything to read the first update..
as you know ki maine recently LOVE SRTUCK padha tha...
😆

so coming to update..
thank you for the big se bhi bada wala update...
me very happy
😃 (32 teeth wali smile)

apke writing ki main toh hun hi deewani
loved the way you wrote the chapter
amazing
👏👏👏

loved swayam's attitude
bilkul jhakkas wala attitude hain
and singer/dancer swayam
😳

sharon ka break up...
me crying no way accha hua... ab swaron milenge...
😆😆😆
im so mean.. 😉😉
im so happy that sharon said yes..
but that swayam...
ughh!!!!
in dono ka ego 😡😡

my god is is true jab FiRE & ICE milte hain toh definitely dhamka hota hain...
dono ka attitude.. maar hi dala
👏

"Wow it was really sandwich position for you between the two strong ego holders" Tanya said

🤣
🤣
hilarious...
love tanya
amzing update...


P.S. hope this comment is up to ur expectations... 😊😊
update soon
and dont forget to pm me
and water pilana zaruri tha 😡😡 🤢🤢
kitne aache moment pain rok diya...

i know sharon audition degi and swayam select kar lega but then also...

HOW RUDE!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...the story is really interesting..and seems like its gonna be just as hilarious if not more than the previous one..

Ur way of story telling is fab..simple and efficient..loved the 1st ss and i m loving the 1st chapter of this one..

Waiting to read more..plz update soon and continue sending me pm's..might not be able to comment for a while but will surely do if i can

-One of ur silent readers

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