Saras - 10/5 - The Date Shate :) - Page 4

Ha at last a fellow member whom I can torture with 'parallelism'! The book, serial and 'Purism'! Srushti JI!

And What? You skipped first 15 chapters before revisiting?? How would you have understand 'mess' that he created?😕 For here in serial, it's already crafted majorly transferred to other 'causes'. Did you see, the tweaked timing of rejection letter - before his visit to RN? There it was AFTER the love forging RN visit. Did you read that letter there? Indeed a piece de resistance!🤢 How 'poetically' noncommittal one can get! In serious note, I will have someone to share some actual 'purism' based grouses here perhaps; Faded Manchatur and Guniyal giving way to Dukh baa, are two examples of changed adaption. see again, how this prop-Dukhbaa the second mother invented to mellow down/ reason away unacceptable rampaging act of our hero. (I would surely liked to see your view here, for I understand need for this circumspection- 'reasoning away'). Now don't get engrossed in book only. Try this out. I have halted on Gunsundari book 2 and will wait till story moves forward from here...till than 'parallels'. Speaking on them, did you identify, opening pond scene for Saras?!😆