~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
hai valli di how ru wow at last aap ki like and comment di thanks a ton di who wil saves geet wait and watch di

Originally posted by: valli22

Nice part

FIrst congrats for your first attempt.
Loved the start

Interesting
Geet is living a painful life besides being a big actress
She is drugged.. n threatened
Poor girl.
Will maan rescue her

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Posted: 12 years ago
hai neha thanks for ur like and comment be with me in this journey

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

Interesting start..congrates for new FF..

thanx for pm.. update next part soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for ur valuable comment and like be with me in this journey
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Then the prologue was Geet's dream.But why did she dreamt smthng like that???

The lady seemed Geet's stepmom (may be) who drugged her.That means she drugs geet to make her work according to her.This is inhuman.


And Maan does he already know or love Geet??
Or they yet to meet??

Too many Qs,ans pls while updating next part.

Thanx for d pm buddy.


hai my curious cherry kise ho tum
ahhaa sooo many questions running in ur mind
i wont ans now 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

👏 nice start . come soon


haiii mansee dear did u rember at one of thread
but i forget where
thanks for ur like and comment cherry
ha i will update soon
i wont leave all of u this easily
so be with me in this journey
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Posted: 12 years ago

hai mish thanks for ur like and comment
its my 1st attempet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayamaan

sound interesting


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haiii mish
thanks for ur like and comment
its my 1st attempt be with me in this journey
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for ur like and comment
its my 1st attempt be with me in this journey

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditimaan

congo dear 4 this beautiful ff.keep it up.awsm ud.waiting 4 next


hai adithi
ur comment is just too good
its my 1st attempt
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Posted: 12 years ago

ADHOORI ZINDAGI



Banner credits goes to my drakulla aks aka "kingof me"
arey yaar tuje thanku wanku nahi kahogi dont expect that😆


Banner credits goes to my praff aks aka "reachsky 2011"
thanks u sooo much praff
A Big thanks for warm welcome cherries i am soo happy here is next part Do let me know ur views. Critisicm also welcome it was very important for me as it was my ist work.


PART 2

In the same mean time a man in his deep slumber jerked open his eyes. He was swetting badly in that air cooled room unknowingly a tear escaped from his eyes. He was thinking what happened so suddenly all these were happening. He came back to reality with the announcement, then he realized he was in his private cube of aero plane, in just few minutes he was at lost reaching his home town Delhi.
He was happy to meet his family after soo many years , but deep in his heart he was fearing for memories that was hunting him that was cause of his departure.Putting all his fears and pain aside, He was enjoying the view of the land by seeing through window. It was his fav time pass in the journey from his childhood, forgetting about the cause of disturbance of his peaceful sleep.

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The plane landed in Delhi international airport, the whole airport was shivering with his arrival everyone was trying hard to give their best because no one wants to be in his bad books. A man in his late twenties, with official attire makes his way out. , In his every step the royalty and attitude was oozing out. As he expected the reporters were asking him about cause of his sudden arrival the body guards clears the crowd without his one look. He was very happy, excited that atlast he was coming to his home, but as always hides his every emotion with his mask. He missed his family in these years soo much, but It was his decision to live away from his beloved one's except because of one man who was the sole reason of his existence. A part of his heart was happy to meet his family, but the other part was clouded with fear due to his past memories. It was really difficult for him to forget all those beautiful memories, but he is trying his best to live in his present life. He loves to live the life the way he plans, faith in god for him was long lasted who snatched his life from him Now he hates the mere word itself. He chided himself for thinking about all these now searched for his family in the airport.
He gets shock as his family members didn't came to receive him, as He is coming after very long time. Now he gives a thought to his restlessness in the plane, is that was any sign for all these. Did anything happen to anyone, why all it was happening around him why only him???. If anything happen to his beloved ones he will destroy the reason of the destruction. With determination he came to his lavished car, the driver who knows him from his child hood gives a warm smile to him. With gratitude he gives him a look that filled with love and respect. The driver just realized that his sahib didn't change in these years, he was the man of few words. The man silently takes his seat driver ignited the engine making his way to sahib's home. He was just hoping that everything will be fine at home, he didn't want to ask diver as he don't likes interference of others in his life.
His chain of thoughts was disturbed by the sounds of horns, he realized that he was at the gate of his palace. The palace which was looking like heaven, was filled with dead silent, his heart was filled with thoughts expecting the worst by watching the condition of palace. Without wasting any sec he straight away goes towards the house. Every passing minute was like hell for him. He waiting impatiently for the door get opened after buzzing the calling bell several times. He got revealed after watching his chandini fit and fine with a glint of naughty smile standing at the door

he just hugged her with love and affection. She reciprocated the hug with warm smile, but instantly parted him from the hug says
"Welcome to the hell Mr. Maan singh khurana"
Maan was not at revealed as he has to meet all his family members, but gives a toothy smile to his chandini.


He very well knows his "dadima" was way too naughty every one cont expect at her age. He has to monify his chandini any ways, he loves to call her as chandini as she was a great dancer when she was a teenager. Whatever the situations of he is facing, the life he is heading he wants to live the present life that was filled with laughs and full of love of family. He don't want see anyone in his suffers because of his silence so to go with the flow he looked at his nautanki dadimaa

chandini kise ho app aur aap ki tabbiyat?
(chandini how are u and your health)

Maan asked very lovingly. But his chandini was not at ready to live him easily.
Maan tum fir se shuru mat karo. Hum tume vaha chod kar aake sirf do mahine hogaye do saal nahi. Tum ise sawal puchogi kya. Tum kab suderogi maan????
(Maan don't start it again. We left you there only for two months not for two years that you are asking about my health. When you will get change)
Maan was enjoying this drama, it was true after his decision dadima was the only one who supported him, even lives with him at London in the pretext of taking care of him. That's why he tolerates everything that she will do, no one has the guts to make fun of him, and he won't tolerate that anything happen to her especially.

Dadima muje andar aanedo pehle.
( Dadimaa can you let me get in first)

Maan said with slight glint of seriousness hoping that his chandini will understands his plight. Dadimaa didn't want to live him as it is her favourite time pass but seeing his plight she realized that he was bothering about something. When he hugged at first place she realized he was bothering about something, instead of asking straight what's the matter she is trying make him relax with her nautanki idea. She gives her approval to enter in to palace as per maan to hell as per dadimaa


When he entered he watches his chutki was sitting on sofa with grumpy face.

She was his baby sister, it was true he was away from home in these years but without talking to his baby sister his day won't get end she is his weakness. Maan babu there is a lot to be faced get ready maan says to himself while eyeing aniee. She was crying making faces, when she sees him jumped on him with happiness saying

I miss u sooo much bhai'.

How are u chutki????

Maan asked mufling her hair. She again begins her soo called crying section. Maan gives her look that what now

Maan don't ask anything she was creating this palace like hell. That's why I said welcome to hell.

Dadi said with an irritating look. maan was not understanding anything. He gives a confusing look a dadimaa.

Maan javo jake aap ki chutki se pucho
(go and ask your chutki maan)

saying soo dadimaa leaves from there.Maan first checks aniee top to
bottom thinking now what else reminded for himHe silently watched at her some time giving her time to speak up. But his chutki is nowhere to stop with no option he handed over her favourite chocolate. Aniee's face lightened up seeing her favourite chocolate, but she wants to do her task first and she very well knows that only his bhai can do that. She refused to take it. Maan wondered what is bothering her that she was behaving like this.
Mean while he heared the discussion that was going on at the stairs. He knows it was because of his chutki, she is the apple of family no wonder that's why his family members didn't came to receive him because of his chutki. He gives a mean look asking aniee so is that all because of you??
Aniee gives him a cheeky smile nodding her head in yes. Aniee was the baby sister of him then how come he won't save her in that situation that was created because of his sitani chutki.

Ok I will help you. First tell me whats wrong.

Maan asked very patiently. aniee places her head on maan's shoulder said
Bhai dekho wo fir se mera phone nahi utaya????
(see bro she again not lifting my call)
Kya karu uso mai (what will I do now). She very well knows that I will call her dialy But see again she is doing this
aniee went on telling him what bothering her. Maan listened to her chutki carefully. But he didn't get anything about whom she is talking. He didn't get anything may be friend he thought.

Aniee tell me who is that she. Not taking your call???

He asked. Aniee gathered all her courage just tell him
"GK bhai" as she knows his bhai don't like all these he is Xerox copy of her dad.
Maan wants to bang his head somewhere when his sister will get changed he thought. She was still behaving like that 5years girl who cries for favorite toy. He don't know who is that soo called GK but in her every call from last six months aniee was telling him every do's and don'ts of her but he know one thinh GK was a heroine. He didn't give any attention to her bal barring while he will do his office works. She was very innocent that she believes the outer presence on every ones not bothering about their intensions. That's why his family was very protective towards her. In all these she became soo suborn and like the way she was now. What to wonder she was khurana's blood after all he thought. He decided to give her some piece of mind

Aniee don't be kid now you were college girl so behave meturly.

He scolded her with slight anger. This time aniee cried with loud sound and all the family members gathered around her except one none onther than her dad.
Maan with no other option monified her and promised her that he will sort out this. Aniee's face was bloomed with happiness as she gets what she wanted. But her face colour faded as man entered to the hall she know's he will again scolds her for creating this fiasco. Maan gives him a dis approval look and gets up to leave from there.
Maan beta that voice makes him halt and he ran to her takes her blessings just hugged her tightly seeing in that man direction.





Maan u forget me.It was soo bad.i won't talk to you go back to London now itself.
She said with pouting face
Maa ise mat kaho. Hum is bar yahase kahi nahi yayengi. Hum yaha aap sab ki sath jeena chathe hai.
(maa don't say like that. This time I won't go from here. I came here to live with you all)

Naina maan's mother was shocked to listen to him. naina was very loving and caring but she was unable to stop him when he leaves the palace. She knows the every word that she was telling now was preceding his heart like needles. But she doesn't want to give up. She wants her maan back in there lifes. The memories that he was running away, she wants to stop him and hold him at their place.

Bhai so you are planning to get a bahu of this palace??

Aniee asked naughtly to lighten the situation.

Ha veeri ji ise koi idea hua tho hame batha dejiye hum dono aap ko help karogi. Aap ko manjoor haina dev
( yes bro if you have any idea of this sort just tell us we will help you. You agreed for this dev)

Said meera the loving choti bahu of the khurana's.

Ha ji jise aap kahe said dev he was gulam of his innocent at beautiful wife.




Dev and meera got married three months back only, but due to her soft going nature she got clicked with every one quickly Especially to naina. Naina wants maan to get married but maan was nowhere to listen to her nonstop cribbing. Her wish came true with meera arrival but there is still some emptiness is there it will be fillied with khurana's badi bahu only.

Bahu wo nahi hum layengi wo bhi humari decision se aayegi. This time no one will say no to that its final. Did u all get that clear?
(I will get the first DIL of this palace not him that too with my approval. This time no one will say no to this it's final. Did u all get that clear?)

Aniee I am expecting good behavior from you so better change yours soo called stubbornness







Maan's father Rnajith singh khurana said with firm voice fearing every one with his announcement. Saying soo he leaves to office not giving any importance to any one's reaction including maan. Maan's father was very loving and caring father when it comes to family but when it comes there career and all he won't allow anyone to take decision's. He himself will take all decisions but when it comes to maan he know's very well he won't obey his orders but he don't want to take a risk when it regards to family respect. He lives in traditions and respects customs way too much that's why he wants khurana's badi bahu (first daughter in law) to be from traditional family only.
Naina expected maan to get angry on this sudden announcement, but maan was not even giving any interest to his dad decision as his dad expected. He was very calmly chatting with aniee. After left ever one gathered around maan.

Bhai sorry meri waje se koi aap ko receive karne ko nahi aaya aap ko patha haina mai GK ko kitna importance dethi hu.
(Sorry this all because of me that no one came to receive you but you know na how much importance I will give to GK)

Said aniee to his bhai who was sitting with calm face

Ji bhai aap ko patha haina dad ko ye sab mai itna gussa atha hai per ye aniee bhina
(yes bro you know na how much angry will dad get and this aniee also) dev said with serious tone)

Subah se aap ki dad bahut naraz hai hum sab use calm down karne ko kya nahi kiya pucho mat veer ji mat
( from morning your dad was angry and bro don't ask we did what not to calm him) said meera with glare to aniee
aniee tries to say something but stopped when his bhai said with smiling face

I know chutki koi nahi ab chodo ye sab bathavo kya chal raha hai
( I know chutki leave it all tell me whats going on) said maan smiling at his baby sister)

Bahi mai aako itna dino ka baad dekh raha hu.kyun bahi aap chali gaya hume chod ke.
(Bro I am seeing you after soo many days why you left all of us)

Aniee asked maan while tears rolling down her cheeks. Maan can see in her eyes how much she missed him. Maan nodes his head in no saying this is not time for think about past.
Exactly my point Mr.MSK ab hume batadijeye hume ki aap ko kise ladki chahiye
( exactly my point Mr.MSK tell us now what type of girl you want)

Dadimaa said with excitement. Maan was not interested in all these matters but his family was not leaving him when he was calm and smiling they were utilizing the opportunity. Maan smiled at his chandini not wanting to spoil the mood of them, Marriage is not in his thoughts at all.

Dadimaa mai bathadethi hu aap ko maan bhai Sharma raheho
( dadimaa I will tell you bro is shying)
said aniee with teasing tone and winked at dev and meera.
She has to be like an angel drawn from heaven said aniee
She has to fill my bhai life with happiness said dev
She has to draw colors in my veer ji's life said meera
At last her eyes has to be like our little angel ge''''
Aniee's words were halted by dadimaa's glare. But it was enough for him to go into his beautiful memory that he was trying to forget.
At the same time aniee's mobile rang with the name "GK" flashing on the screen aniiee flew away saying will meet later bhai.





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