~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

mindblowing part

who that lady giving injection to geet

maan come fast to save geet

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Ishita Irani

@IshitaIrani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Nice concept dear

Pro was fab

part 1

update was very nice

geet is in pain

hope maan come soon and save her

who is that witch lady and what was she doing with geet

where is her mom

would like to read more cont soon

thnx for the pm

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

awesome update ...y that lady injected geet ...

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sridevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

nice concept. new storyline. waiting for the story to unfold. how geet handa is now geet kappor.

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

nice story...

loved the first part...

geet is heroien ...

and that lady step mom kya..??

waiting for next part

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satana

@satana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

nice prologue...gud strt...hope soo thr is interesting stry behing

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satana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

congrats th new ff...as i said its reali interesting...feel reali sas fr geet...nd hope thr is lot more to cum out...waiting...plz do pm me while updating

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

lovely..thanks for the pm...

lovely update!!!!!!!!!

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Congrats for new phase as a writer.now iam on vacation comments only after i return back june 10

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lena

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

gud attempt dear😃

entirely diff one

waiting for d nxt part

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