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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

You're not weird Adya... I had the same confusion in my brain. That's why I made it RanSh...

Thanks a lot!!

Lol and I thought was the only the one with this kind of an imagination. 😆

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Thank you for the pm..
This too is a wonderful piece of work.. feels great to see how a piece barely spanning over half a page can keep the reader intrigued and alert throughout. The inner turmoil of the protagonist is and the ways in which it expresses itself have been penned down brilliantly.. i loved how u dint mention any one character and ppl get to imagine anyone they can relate this too.. my pick would be ranveer.. kd is somewhat rebellious even in his thoughts, as in before reflecting on what exactly he feels he would rather tell himself that he doesn't deserve to feel this way.. but here the protagonist is willing to understand the mess he is in and acknowledges the fact that there is no easy way out.. infact it seems like he has left it to the universe to guide him through, oblivious to the fact that it is yet to deliver the final blow..
It was a pleasurable read. n just like in ur previous os i loved the last lines.. u do a very good job with the endings in ur work.. keep it up! n thanks again for the pm! :)

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful
Thank you for the pm..
This too is a wonderful piece of work.. feels great to see how a piece barely spanning over half a page can keep the reader intrigued and alert throughout. The inner turmoil of the protagonist is and the ways in which it expresses itself have been penned down brilliantly.. i loved how u dint mention any one character and ppl get to imagine anyone they can relate this too.. my pick would be ranveer.. kd is somewhat rebellious even in his thoughts, as in before reflecting on what exactly he feels he would rather tell himself that he doesn't deserve to feel this way.. but here the protagonist is willing to understand the mess he is in and acknowledges the fact that there is no easy way out.. infact it seems like he has left it to the universe to guide him through, oblivious to the fact that it is yet to deliver the final blow..
It was a pleasurable read. n just like in ur previous os i loved the last lines.. u do a very good job with the endings in ur work.. keep it up! n thanks again for the pm! :)

You're welcome.

It was written during a writer's block, so i didn't wish to take the risk of expanding it.

When i wrote it, I flitted between the two and I realized restricting the emotion to one character would be stupid, so i limited myself to using pronouns only.

If it stayed with you even for a few moments, I'm happy.

When KD knows the mess is his creation. He tries not to rebel from the feeling. Well I'm a little aloof from his character nowadays. Haven't seen him in the period that i mentioned. So maybe you're right.

Thank you.

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Sneha

@Mohit_monaya

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

amazingg OS...

loved it alott <3 <3

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