taarey lost love part3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taarey lost love part 3

hey guys sry fr d late update bt nw here it is

😉 so everyone was damn excited n all in all they were tensed too as if how will they find taani n swayam...bt as v knoe d3 guys jo ek baar soch lete hain use poora krke h rehte hain

rey main soch raha hun kyu na hum pehle kuch kha le coz hmein mumbai se nikle kaafi time ho gya h n we dnt even know k hmein jana kahan hai?? 'said confused vicky

haar rey hum bi yahi soch rhe the' said others

guys hmein abhi nhi pata to kya hm mil ke soch lenge k vo kahan ho skte h pehle hm jodhpur to pohonche unke ghar' said sharon in irritated voice

rey's inner voice"ye main kya kar rha hun ye sab meri vajah se suffer kyu krein pata nhi mjhe aur kitne din aise h ghoomna pade main in sbko suffer kyu krvaun"

he stops the car suddenly n says 'guys main...matlab tum...mtlb i feel ki main...

kya main main rey bol na...kya khaege hm abhi bht bhook lgi h yaar..ye kaha roka tune ye to sirf road aur jungle hai yahan...aur vo bi itni rat ho gyi h...'said vicky

haan aur bohot darr bi lg rha h 'said rinny n holds vicky's hand to which neha says'kyu isme darne ki kya baat hai' and takes rinny's hand 'main hun na mere sath raho'

but its scarry really...rey hum by car kyu chale by plane chalte h jaldi phnchege ...'said sharon

nahi guys itni jaldi by car h ja paege cz abi kuch aur available nhi h aur pta nhi hum vahan se kaise manage karenge to i think yahi sahi hai,,,,,and i feel tum logon ko...i mean main..mere sath...ttum sab...I mean

come on rey...no chance hum tumhare sath h chalenge...'sharon said

ya rey coz vaise bhi jo kuch bhi hua usme hm sb responsible hain...agar hmne taani se thik se as a freind behave kia hota aur tujhe taani k against poke nhi kia hota to aaj taani tere saath hoti...'said vicky

aur swayam bhi' nil said

abe tu chal na ab...'bharat said

aul laaste mein lok dena kinii bhook ladi hai na (raaste m rok dena kitni bhook lagi hai) 'said amar

haan baatein types to raaste m bhi ho jaegi' said aashi

hmmm...okk lets go...yeeeiiieee'all in chorus

rey's inner voice 'but i still feel ki kahin koi gadbad na ho jae'

nywaz lets go...

they were all on there way then they started wondering ki why swayam left

ya mujhe bhi ye samajh types nhi aaya...sharon aapko kuch idea hai???'said aashi

nahi but I wonder ki usne ye step kisi reason ki vajah se lia hai ya may be vo apni behen ko hurt nhi dekh pa rha ho...said sharon

aur may be vo sach m khud bhi hurt hua ho...said simmi

aur ya fir...

suddenly rey n sharon said '' kahin vo sirf taani k liye to nahi gaya...''

matlab????'' all in chorus

matlab kahin aisa hua ho k swayam k dad taani ko yahan se le jana chahte ho aur swayam taani k saath agar jaata to swayam k dad taani ko bhi usse door rakh dete but as of now agar swayam ne ye bola h ki 'vo haar gya hai' that means isse swayam k dad ko ye trust ho gya hoga ki swayam unki side hai tabhi to swayam taani se mil paega na...😕😕

waaaooowww...ye sab aise bhi ho sakta h ye to humne socha h ni tha...

but agar aisa h to swayam ko hmein batana to chaie tha...

but guys agar vo apne dad k sath hua to????tab vo kaise batayega...

pta nhi sharon actually hua kya but ye bhi to ho sakta hai aisa kuch na ho aur swayam sach m vahan gaya ho khud se...

haan rey hone ko to kuch bhi ho skta hai main sirf itna keh rhi hu ki ye ek probability hai...

hmmm...🤢 said all in chorus

but guys hmein pata kaise chalega actually situation kya hai...hum mein se koi to taani k ghar entry le nahi paega fir kaise?????? 'said confused nil😕😕

eeeccchhh...traaashhh!!!!!!!!!!!!


woooaaahhh🤢
sharon- ouch...what the hell rey dhyan kahan hai tumhara...

bharat- abe thok di na gaadiii

aashi- vo bhi ped pe...

rinny- vo bhi itni raat ko...

neha- vi bhi is bhayanak jungle mein..

simmi- come on guys bahar to niklo lets see kitna damage hai and thank God kisi ko kuch hua nhi...

sharon- Rey r u ok tum kuch bol kyu nhi rahe...😕

😲 omg rey...rey ...rey

rey was bleeding heavily...his forhead was bruised...😲😲



REY...REY...aap thik ho na,,,,,
it was taani who came out of her dream shouting rey's name...

swayam enters opening the door'Taani tum thik to ho na...???

bhai...bhai rey...aap poochiye na vo thik to hain...please bhai...please...ek baar poochiye na...thik h aap unse nahi to sharon se poochiye na...pls bhai pls...

taani...taanii...taaaniii...hosh m aao...hosh m aao...its all over tumhe aage badhna hai...islie hum yahan itni door aaye hain...

but bhaii...

no taani...pls...relax...vo jahan hoga thik hoga dnt wry...

nahi bhai pls aap ek baar ek baar cal kijiye...acha aap kisi aur number se cal kijiye aur mat btaega ki aap haiin...pls bhai...said taani with tear in her eyes

swayam k paas apni behen ki baat manne k alawa koi option nahi tha...
he calls rey...but no one picks up the phone so he calls at his home

ring*
kaka- hello
swayam- hello main...main prayag bol raha hun rey se baat karvaega pls...
kaka- rey baba...reay baba to ghar per hai h nahi
swayam- acha to kahan gaye h kab tak aege????
kaka- nahi vo to hmein nahi pata vo to unke sabhi dost aaye the unke sath vo chale gye kahin...pata nahi kab tak lautenge
swayam😲he cuts d call

kya hua bhai...rey thik to hai na...???

haan...haan rey thik hai...vo so raha hai,,..

thanku Krishna ji,,,,

chalo taani ab so jao kal tumhare liye bohot bada din hai...

haan bhai jaanti hun...kal hee decide hogi meri destiny...

haan chalo gud nite...

gud nite bhai...but aap pareshan lag rhe hai...sb thik h na...

swayam sees taani n says...life tumhari change hone vaali h...aur tum mjhse pooch rahi ho ki main pareshan kyun hun...

but bhai aao bhi vahan se sab chod k aagye kyu bhai aur aapne ab tak mjhe nahi bataya kyu...????

he smiles n says...jo bhi hua uske liye main bhi responsible tha taani...

nahi bhai kisi bhi baat k liye koi bhi responsible nahi tha...sirf main thi,,,vapas aana sirf mera decision tha aur kisi vajah se maine ye decision nhi lia...and she hides her face...

come on...come on taani ab to bata do..say it...tumne kabhi mjhe apna real bhai nhi maana...aur apne so called tauji k ek baar kehne per...

nahi bhai...nahi...aap aur is parivaar ne jo bhi mere liye kia hai na...uske liye to main...

haan bas yahi...tum ye sb krke sirf karz chukaana chahti ho...aur tumhari life???tumhara pyaar uska kya????

nahi bhai aisa kuch nhi hai,,,aap sab h mere liye sab kuch ho...aur pyaar...she stops for a sec n says smiling at swayam 'pyaar to dobara bhi ho skta hai na bhai...aur shayad rey aur m ek doosre k liye bane h nhi the...islie to hum aaj alag hain...aur pls bhai aap h to keh rhe the na ki kal mere liye bohot bada din hai...to main poorana sb bhool k aage badhna chahti hu...but main ye bhi chahti hu ki aap laut jao...

nahi taani...nahi...tumhe jo sahi lage vo tum karo aur mjhe jo sahi lagega vo main karunga'says angry swayam and leaves slamming the door at the back

😭taani starts crying...cherishing her old moments...rey main jaanti hu ki aapko thoda time lagega but aap aage badh jaoge...pls rey aap jahan bhi ho khush rehna...n she kisses rey's forehead in a photograph and drops a tear at his forehead...

Taani...mat jaoo...taanii...
sharon- rey...rey its ok...

rey- nahi...nahi taani ko meri zaroorat haii...
and then his phone rings and sharon takes the cal
sharon-hello
swayam-ohh...to main galat tha,,,mjhe laga tha rey ko taani k jaane ka thoda to afsos hoga but nhi u guys r too much..
sharon-helo??hello swayam???kahan ho tum..
swayam--oopps dont worry taani vaaps nahi aaegi aur jab tak main uske sath hun na use bilkul bhi rone nhi dunga
all are shouting in background
swayam- m so sorry main aap logo ko disturb kia,,,u guys pls carry on...
and he cuts d cal

swayam...swayam..hello swayam????

swayam this side...main to ye soch ker aaya tha ki shayad taani k doora jaane k baad rey ko ehsaas hoga ki vo kya galat kr rha hai..but nahi vo sab to ghoom rhe hain...nw I think taani k saath kal jo hone vaala hai vo h best hai shayad taani sahi kehti hai ki vo dono ek doosre k liye nahi bane hain...n he goes to sleep frustrated n hurt

swayam...swyam...sharo shouts seeing d disconnected cal
rey says...swayam ka phone tha..kahan h vo...aur taani kahan hai??? kuch to bolo sharon

sh- rey use laga ki hum sb party krne bahar aaye hai aur un logon k jaane se hmein koi farak nhi pada😭😭islie...isliee

rey- islie kya sharon

sh- islie usne phone kaat dia aur ab vo dobara baat bhi nhi krega...she cries after ths

and all are shocked seeing sharon crying...
simi consoles sharon n says dont worry all will be fine

rey-fine...kaise...swayam aise kaise soch sakta hai...sharon kya..kis number se call tha dikhao mjhe...

sh- private number se tha rey

aashi- but itni raat ko swayam ne aapko call types kia kyu 2.30 bje vo bhi raat k

rey-he thinks something and says zaroor use taani ne kaha hoga and smiles...

aashi n sharon- rey..rey tum smile kyu kr rhe ho???

rey- he smiles n smiles n says...
pyaar ki koi limit nhi hoti ... na h koi duration ... islie ab main araam se keh sakta hun...nhi tootega ye relation...

all 4 boys😉
waaah...but kaise???

ye dil ki baat h bachon tum nahi samjhoge ab m sure hun ki taani mjhse breakup krke nhi kisi majboori m yahan se gayi hai aur vo mjhe nahi bhoola paegi aur na h door reh paaegi...ab sb thik hoga...

bharat- kaise be???is gaadi ko banne mein kum se kum 1 din lag jaega...

rey- hmmm😊😊 dnt wry we will take lift...

all 4 boys- iski satak gayi h lagta h..tere dimaag pe chot lagi h na islie tu aise baat kr rha h pehle hase ja rha tha ab khush bhi h aur keh rha h lift lenge...😕😕

rey- haan kyunki mjhe aisa ehsaas hua ki taani mere sath hai aisa lga jaise usne mjhe yaad kia aur usne mjhe...he touches his forehead n feels as of taani kissed him...

bharat- usne kya be???

rey- he smiles again n says tum sb yahi ruko m dekhta hu hum aage kaise jaege...

sharon- rey tumhari tabiyat thik nhi h thoda rest kr lo better feel karoge

rey- isse better to maine aaj se pehle feel h nhi kia sharon..dont wry sb thik hoga...acha hoga...n...n i cnt wait to see taani now

sharon feels the same about swayam and wonders...usne ek baar bhi na jaate tym mjhse bye bola...naa aaj mjhse thik se baat ki...i wonder swyam mjhe itni jaldi bhool gya h😔


here rey feels ab sb thik hoga,,,,n he turns n sees he is front of truck...

and suddenly d trick stops...

oye marna hai kya tereko...'said d truck vala

o na ji na...ab to m poori tarah se jeena chahta hun...bas aapki thodi si madad chaie...'said excited rey

ki matlab???? ki chahnde ho...???

mera pyaar mjhse dooor ho gya h bas m chahta hun ki aap mjhe meri manzil takpohoncga do...vo mjhse rooth gyi h bas manana h use,,,m usse dooor nhi reh sakta aur ye duniya vaale hmare dushman ban gaye hain...pls madad kr do meri please sardaar ji...

sardar ji maan jao na...chadd do na munde nu...(sardar ji ki biwi boli)...hmne bhi to zamaane se bhaag k hee apne pyaar ki manzil paayi thi...

sardarji thinks n says...oye aaja putar per tenu jaana kithe hai???(tereko jaana kahan hai?)

jodhpur...???

arey wah oye wah aaja aaja...hm vahin pe shaadi ka samaan chodne jaa rhe hain...😆😆

heehee...ji dar ji...per...

per ki???

per mere sath mere dost bhi hain...

oye tu mjhe ullu to nhi bana raha...apne dosto k sath tafri maarne ja rha hoga aur beech m mjhe rok lia...hatt pare jaane de menu...

and he starts d truck

and then everyne enters n stand in front of the truck pleading sardarji and then bend on their knees with folded hands...please sardarji maan jaaoo...pyaar ka sawaal hai...

awww...maan jaie na...sardarni ji says

ohho...acha chalo aao sb baitho peeche...jahan jagah mile fit ho jaana...

yeeeahhh...'all cheer each other n 😆enters inside

thankyou God ab bas main taani ko kisi bhi situation se nikaal ke apne sath le jaunga...bs mujhe himmat dena ki m taani aur uske tauji ko face kr saku...aur thanku aise frns k liye jinhone mjhe support kia...😉😉

taani...main aarha hun...hmara pyaar adhoora nahi rahega,,,,,,😃



yeahhh so this was the update hope u guys njoed it...i vl b back soon with another new update...😆😆

now what will happen???
will swayam help rey to meet taani or he will be a big speed-breaker???
kya taani rey se milegi??
aur kya hai next day jo taani ka big day hai??
swayam-sharon ki kahani badegi ya rahega yahi scene???

stay tuned for more updates😉😉😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update... loved the way rey said "rey-he thinks something and says zaroor use taani ne kaha hoga and smiles...

aashi n sharon- rey..rey tum smile kyu kr rhe ho???

rey- he smiles n smiles n says...
pyaar ki koi limit nhi hoti ... na h koi duration ... islie ab main araam se keh sakta hun...nhi tootega ye relation..."

plzzz continue soon... waiting for swayams reaction...😊😊

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