Chahun Mai Yaa Naa ||KR SS|| *On Hiatus*

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Chahun Mai Yaa Naa



Everyone sitting in rehearsal hall . "Rey and Swayam kab tak sad rahoge tum log" Nicky bro try to make them smile . Everyone standing around Reyam in a circle . But Rey and Swayam are not ready to talk .

"Enough guys i told you i don't want to talk " Swayam shouted in angry tone . Everyone become silent . But for the very first time bharat spoke "Abey hum kab sey tum logo ko manay ki koshish kar rhey or tum hum pey he chadh rha hey " soon he left the reharsal hall .

Nil also agreed with Bharat "He is right man , tum logo sey to baat karna hai bekaar hai " and he left from there followed by Amar and Vicky . Girl silently watched this all .

"I am out " Simmi walked back .
Everyone sadly walked in different directions . Rey walked toward Fire exit and Swayam sat alone in reharsal hall .

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"Welcome back to St Louis" Vp welcomed both new personalities in college .
"Please have a seat" They seated in Vp's office . "So who gonna instruct D3 team" Vp inquired . "Both are girls and tomorrow they will join us" replied by one person among them .
"I am really glad to know that both girls are old student of our college .' Vp tried to continue their talk . "I think we need to take a round of college campus' one person asked another . "Ya , i miss this. lets go " both of them said by to VP and walked toward college campus

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.As soon as they entered in Rh . They found whole gang fighting badly .
"Stop it , what the hell is going on?" Everyone looked toward entrance . with shocking face they spoke together "Nicole mam and RDX sir'
"Yes , i think galti ki wapis aake' Nicole was highly disappointed with their behaviour
"You are right Nicole, I thought these guys were friends guess thats what Vp told us, but I guess he mistook them" said a highly disappointed RDX
"No sir, thats not the thing, this was simply our friendly fight sir" said simmi.
"Nicole !!!" fainted Nilesh
All facepalmed thier heads, but bombarded RDX and Nicole with questions like "Sir, you back? wow" said Rinni. "You joining back sir? " asked Neha. "Sir, How are you? " How was your trip and every possible questions, they could ask.

Taani and Aashi were confused, they did not who these two were and why were everybody so happy and asking them to join? But still they kept num
"Guys guys calm down please" Rdx said trying to calm down their over- excited students
"Yes, we are back and soon joining St. Louis." The Rehearsal hall erupted in cheers with this announcement.

"Guys guys calm down, there is one more announcement" said Rdx trying to calm them. Soon everybody became quite.
"What's it sir?" asked Taani for the first time
"Who are you?" asked a confused Nicole.
"I am Taani, College ki GS and Swayam's cousin" said Taani
"Tum iss college ki GS ho?" asked RDx totally shocked
What happened to Rey?" asked Nicole

"Mam woh ab iss college k GS nahi hai" said Taani with a pinch of attitude
"Oh my god, Taani Aashi you not knowing them na, this Rdx sir yeh humare college k cultural head the before footloose, footloose k baad inki shaadi ho gayi so he left for New york and this is Nicole mam RDX sir ki wife, yeh humei dance fest k time bahut acha dance teaching, she dances very beautiful" said Neha excitedly.

"Sir, what's the announcement you wanted to make?"
Are you throwing a party?" said Vicky rubbing his both hands.
"No, Vicky no party for now" said Nicole making Vicky's plan go in drains.
"So the announcement is as we are back and jahan tak Vp ne humei bataya hai, you guys have taken dance lightly we have arranged some trainers from New York ." said RDX

"WHAT??" was the reaction from Louisans.
"But sir we don't need any trainers" a voice came from behind.
" Yes sir !! Sharon is right" agreed Simmi.
"No, I don't think so, and this is my final decision." said Rdx sternly.
"I hope you all co-operate because they are my students and I don't like anyone playing pranks on them" said Nicole very well aware about the pranks played on different people by louisans.

"Ok, Sir, we are ready." entered Rey with Swayam.
Hello Rey, Hi Swayam" greeted both Rdx and Nicole.
"Hello Sir, Hello Mam." both greeted back
"Happy to see you guys back" said Swayam.
"Ok fine, Sir if you say we agree and we promise "NO PRANKS" on your students mam" said Sharon still not agreeing with the announcements.
"Good' said RDX happily.
"Ok guys,s o they will be here by tomorrow, till then we leave, Bye" They left.

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Next Day all were waiting in Rehearsal hall as Rdx and Nicole were going to join today and they were equally happy, but the news of their trainer , it irked them, but they were Rdx orders and if it helps them to improve they would surely look forward to it.

Finally they were called to the atrium. Vp was present there with RDX and Nicole.
"Welcome guys, we are here to welcome our very own teachers back in St.Louis, that's none other than RDX and Nicole. Yes Rdx and Mrs. Nicole are joining St.Louis back." said Vp happily.
"Thank you" said both Rdx and Nicole
"Ok so guys as we are back, we would be taking our responsibilities like before, but before you all get back especially our to the Louisans dance team, I would like to introduce you guys to your trainers, You know them but still" announced Rdx .

When RDx said you know them everyone looked toward each other . "Relax guys , here they are" Nicole indicated towards entrance . Two girls entered the atrium but their faces are not visible . Because one girl talking to other girl walking backward . means one girl walking back ward to face her friend . Gang assumed that both girls are debating on something.
"Dude kuj b kho she's hot Mahn' Vicky spoke while checking out girls . "Baat to tu sahi keh rha hai ' nilesh joined him dreamingly . Their conversation was heard by Simmi . She smacked Nilesh with her elbow . "Ahh' Nilesh fell down and everyone started laughing hard . This sound of laughing gain attention of both dance trainers .


Second Girl

"Did they heard our conversation " second girl looked toward her "How do I know?, sun b liya hai to kya hoga' both finally joined RDX and Nicole . "Tum' 13 voices echoed in atrium .

"Itni khushi" its only heared by RDX , nicole and second girl .
"Khushi nahi afsos" replied by second girl . Nicole gave both of them shh look .
"Guys , yeh dono hai aap logo ka dance trainers " RDX tried to suppress his smile .
"NO" again 11 voices echoed in atrium . "arey wah kya ekta hey " 1st girl again spoke in teasing tone . "dyaan sey is baar 11 ki awaaz thi do ki to awaz he chali gyi " and time both burst into laugh along with RDX and Nicole .
"Ek ka break up ho gaya issliye bechaara chup hai, but dusre ko kya hua?"" asked the other girl. "Arey shayad usse humei dekhkar Jhatka lagaa, Yaa phir woh apne besti ka saath de raha, you know yeh dosti hum nahi todenge types" said the girl.
"Arey chodo na, humei kya karq padta hai inse, bole yaa na bole" replied the other girl.
"Yeah, you are right"
"Guys, shh..keep quite" said Nicole trying to supress her smile on hearing to the conversation.
"Ok ok, we keep quite but Rdx tell them the schedule for tomorrow, we are off now, Bye !!
said the girl and got down the stage.

Nicole stopped them "But where are you going " both Kriya and Vishakha looked towards each other and gave naughty smile . "Break up party " both shouted together . Gang almost got shocked because of their answer . "Break up party ' they all spoke together

"tum logo ki trha thora ki rone baith jayenge ' Vishakha replied with attitude

"khush rho or rehney do " Kriya spoke in between . Gang try hard to resist the fact when Nicole spoke " do din pehley to Break up party ki thi " RDX completed her sentence "aaj phir sey'

"ha vo to tab ki baat hey aaj he mera phir break up ho gya to Party to banti hey ' Vishu replied with oh-so-sad look

"Ha hatrick ho gyi is week to big party " Kriya hugged Vishakha cheerfully .

"Ha phir to party banti hai " RDX said in confustion

T-H-U-D

everyone look behind and see poor Bharat was on floor crying like baby

"kya hua ?" all asked.

"Abey salo teen ladkey ek hafte me to socho ab tak kitno ki saath ghoomi hogi kaprey dekhey hey iskey" Bharat said and again start crying

VP also start laughing with Nicole and RDX

"Waise party kaha hai? " RDX raised his voice for seeking Bharat's attention . Bharat became silent . "Tryst". "Tryst- To see you name on menu."Both Kriya and Vishaka replied together as soon as Both finished Bharat again started crying .

"Vp sir you too are invited for the party, aapki bhi thodi mauj ho jayegi, pataa nahi aap inn rotlu logon k saath kaise rehte ho?" said kriya making a weird a face.

"I would love to join you guys, but you see I have an important meeting so guys carry on and enjoy, Cya tomorrow in college.

"Okie Dokie, Rdx?" said Vishakha narrowing her eyes. "You girls enjoy, Today I am taking my beautiful wife for dinner" replied Rdx looking at Nicole. "uuhh I see, So its only us vish darls, what do we do now?" said Kriya dramatically.

"Oh you Drama queens" Said Rdx

"Oh by the way these guys can go with you. Won't you go guys?" asked Nicole

"No mam we are not interested " Said Taani eyeing Kriya and Vishakha.

"Ohh I see, but Vicky tum toh kal bahut excited the party k liye kya hua?" said Nicole innocently.

"Mam, we will go, those who want to come can and those does'nt can stay at home" announced Rey for the first time eyening Taani.

Kriya and Vishkha left followed by RDX and Nicole and then VP and Rey. Taani too left

Now, they had to stop Bharat from crying, who was crying worst than a baby and this had become unbearable for them.

"Bharat,chup kar yaar" said Nilesh closing his ears with his hands.

"Tum logon ne dekha nahi woh vishakha break up ki party kar rhi hai, ek hafte mei 3 matlab ek itne time mei kitne honge? ab mera kya hoga? " cried Bharat.

"Tera ab kuch nahi hoga, Bharat " said Vicky only to be smacked by rest of them.

"Aiee, Maine kya kiya yaar." cried Vicky. "Shut up !! everybody shouted in usion.

"Look Bharat hum na tumhe ek dum handsome banaa dengi, then you can go and propose her" said Rinni.

All had the shocked expressions on their face. Nilesh was the first one to recover "wow Rinni, tera dimaag chalta bhi hai, I don't believe this." said Nilesh clapping.Followed by rest of the gang.

"So here starts the mission Breakup Party"

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Finally, it was night and everybody seemed busy getting ready for the party.

Rey was not at all interested in partying and so was Swayam, but they had to go for the sake of their friends. Dressed up they all met near the college and headed towards the party which was to be held at Mumbai's most famous club "Tryst". "Tryst- To see you name on menu." Mumbai's one o the renowned clubs. A night at Tryst is like attending a spectacular light show, where more than a million color-changing LEDs poke out of almost every corner and bright green absinthe potions swirl around in glasses.

They reached the place and entered, all eyes were set on them everybody were dressed to kill.They smirked after seeing everybody' reaction on seeing them, but the smirk did not last long. As gorgeous girls entered the Club, making every head turn. All eyes were fixed on them.

Dj announced "Here is our Two beauties now Break up party gonna be rocking " Gang finally noticed that it is Kriya ans Vishakha . Crowd in club whistlingg , shouting for both of them . Bharat again on verge of crying . Vishakha and Kriya in formal tone say "hi" to gang and proceed toward bar

Kriya.



Vishakha


"Come on Kriya lets hit the dance floor " Vish almost pulled Kriya along with her . But Kriya some how manage her balance "No Vish go have fun .I wanna enjoy my drink "

Vishakha left her hand "Okay m gonna have fun"

"But tell me one thing for how long you gonna be like this" Kriya ordered her drink and turned toward Vishakha "What do yu mean?" Vishakha settled next to Kriya "ban mat tu janti hey na what I mean . Wo Rey terey like nahi hey to better na bhool ja or meri trha masti kar " Kriya take her drink and laugh on Vishakha's statment "Vish Bharat ki halat dekhi hai bichara kitna ro rha tha " said Kriya rolfing.

*Sigh* "vo idiot aaj tak nahi bol paya ki wo mujey pasand karta hai so i this case no comment m going ' Vishakha left ingnoring futhure questions .

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Nicky bros were having fun whereas girls were sitting in one corner of club . Swayam consoling Bharat . Rey he was sitting next to Kriya and Taani she was feeling like hitting some one badly .

Vishakha was totally talli and dancing with any one and everyone in the club . Bharat, he again starts crying . "Yaar, I am bored. Vicky said while sipping his dring . "Ha sab aise baithe hai jaise kissike funeral mei aaye ho '' Nil said "Toh chal na kuch karte hai ?' Vicky called waiter "What?"' Nil questioned him "Jab yeh andar jati hey to dil baat bahar aati hai mere dost " Vicky showed him vodka "Ohh wow ' giving each other a evil grin..


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"Mujhe 2-2 Amar kyun dikh rahe hai? " Rinni points in the air . Simmi held her hand " Why do I see 3-3 Nil's?'' both girls start laughing and try to catch those shadows which standing infront of them .

"R u blind? " Bharat held his cheek . because a girl slapped him hard . "Maine kya kiya main to Vishakha ko pakar raha tha " by mistake he again held wrong hand as a result one more slap .

Sharon with confused expression walked toward one Boy "Tum Swayam ho right? " he looked at her with shock "Sharon main Swayam nahi ho. " He tried to convince her " Tum Swayam hi ho I know but double dikh rhe ho " and she tried to kiss him "Sharon main Rey hoon. " Rey walked backward but the sad thing is that there is no space left as behind him was the wall . "Swayam tum mazak bhi kar lete ho? Giggled Sharon " and she again tried to kiss him when sharon pulled rey his shirt and it got torn "Swayam help me warna aaj mera rape ho jayega meri best friend k hato '' Rey he litterally cried .

"Huh Rey are you okay? " Swayam came at right time because Sharon almost kissed Rey on his cheek "Swayam meri to izzat lutney wali thi aaj bcha liya tuney mujhe''

Swayam hold Sharon wrist with another hand he tapped on Reys shoulder "Bach gya to warna sach met teri izzat lut jati j ley jacket pehn ley kisi ney dekh liya na ' he left the sentence uncompleted . Rey wore the jacket .

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"Swayam sabne pee rakhi hai ' said Rey looking around he noticed that Vicky and Ashi romancing and Neha had vase in her hand . She almost Smacked Vicky's head with the Vase when Vicky and Aashi moved ahead Neha feel down but again she stood up and this time almost hit Vicky when Amar came in betwen them .

T-H-U-D amar was on floor . "Neha maine tya tiya? " Amar looked toward Neha . "Tuney mere Amar ko mara " Rinni start pulling nehas hair . Both of them started fighting . Other hand Simmi found Nil dancing with other girl and the very next moment Nil was on floor and Simmi beating him to death . Whole gang was fighting . Vishakha, she was drinking . Bharat taking slap back to back as he was always catching wrong hand .

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Taani she was running in whole club while singing "Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli ho gyi" in short she was jumping here and there

Swayam with great difficuly Sharon made Sharon sleep and he walked in club when he found Tanni ruunning and singing . Swayam tried to hold her but she escaped . "Bhai app police or main theaf' chalo khelte hai " and she again starts running . Swayam was completey exhausted . He was sweating badly . finally swayam shouted "I said sit' next moment Tanni was sitting next to Swayam "Bandar ki ttrha uchalna band kro samzo or chup chap betho"

Rey he tried to stop Rinni and neha but both girls start hiting Rey . Rinni tried to hit him with broken bottle but some one snatch that from her hand. Rey looked towards the person and found Kriya .

"Thankx ' Rey said weakly .

"In logo ko sambhale? " And Trio start their work .

In 30 mins whole club became a big mess all thanks to D3 gang .

Neha , Rinni and Simmi singing loud "main preshaan preshaan preshaan'"

Bharat he was shouting "mujhe vishu dila do koi " Vicky and Vishu " Pyaar huya ikrrar huya hai" as soon as neha heared this neha jumped from her seat and catch Vicky's hair "Neha ko dhokha diya tumhey baby i will kill' Nil he become silent itni maar jo pari.

there is again loud noise in car and jis ki wajha se saara fuss hua Vishakha, she was sleeping on Kriya's shoulder

Kriya stopped car with a jolt . "Shut up" She shouted everyone become silent . "Car sey abhi utro ' She ordered . "But Kriya " Swayam tried to queston her but she stopped him . Now everyone standing in line on one side on road .

Kriya handed them lemon water . "finish it"

Like good children everyone finished their drinks , in some time boys ka hangover to utar gya but girls start vometing .

"Kya huya guys hum yaha?" Vicky said innocently . "Saley mujey kaise pataa?" Nil replied . "Yeh sab tum logo ki wajah se hua hai '' Swayam glanced at them . "Mujhe vishakha chahiye "

"Shut Up "boys shouted together . "What do u mean hamari wajah se? "' and they start figthing . "Babu tum ney neha ko dhokha diya" Neha shouted from other side . "Tum chup krao abhi main in se baat kar rha hoo ". Neha started crying "Mujh pe shouting ''

"Yeh boys hote he aise hai" and girls and boys again start fighting .

Kriya tried to stop them but some one pushed her and she fell down from the bridge

"KRIYA" Everyone shouted together . At hearing Kriya's name Vishakha woke up with alarm "Kha hey Kriya'' Rey also jumped in water . Vishakha starts figthing . "Rey gya hai na usse bachane " Vicky said . "Ha to girya b to na usne hi na"' they all start fighting . As sharon also wake up so Swayam again stucked . the whole scene looking like Ramlela

Here Kriya is drowning in water . Rey finally found her . He was crying . Rey hold her tightly to save her .

"Kriya wake up ' Rey tapped her cheek but their is no response .



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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

okay guys yeh tha 1st part
and then 2nd part coming soon

hope tum logo ko 1st part acha laga ho

but we want at leas 60 likes then
we will update this

luv u all
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Hehehehe tum log kya laga tum log devils ho toh bhi choti devil hu chota packet bada damaka

Samjhe ya SamjhaunšŸ˜›


Awesome os

Loved kriya & vish's entry

Break up party šŸ˜‰

Drunk OMG 😲

Hope kriya ok.

Waiting for next part

Luv u. Both

Bye

Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os
Loved it a lot
The hangover part was hilarious šŸ˜†
Love the way u hv included the entire gang
And Kria drowning!! Rey to the rescue! šŸ˜‰
Update the next part soon
Edited by Arshalicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great concept. Please update asap
And pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING
loved the concept
nice one
update soon

waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres




Wah beta kya update tha!!!!

I loved it

Amazing concept just mind blowing

LOL break up party and their excitement towards its like unbeliveable hehe just superb


Lol all drunk hehe
Loved the Naani part she is a right bandariya šŸ˜†


Beta... Last mein kya tha
*Me crying*
😭


Overall loved all of it!!!! šŸ‘
It's written beautifully 😃


😊
~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wah beta kya update tha!!!! šŸ¤—

I loved it šŸ˜‰

Amazing concept just mind blowing šŸ‘

LOL break up party and their excitement towards its like unbeliveable hehe just superb šŸ˜†

Update soon can't wait to read the next part!!!!


😊

~Anu~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

amazing start

loved it

Ahaan! Kriya and Vishakha in a changed avtar...nice..

hahahaha lol bharat ko vishakha chahiye 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

omg like really neha and rinni pulling each others hairs./...rofl...🤣🤣🤣

Oh gosh, I hope kriya is fine...update sooon!!
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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seriously that was like mind blowing and superb... 😊😊😊😊😊
let see what all happen in the party...
eagerly wait for the next part... continue soon and pm me...

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