ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread Four*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

LOL If We Guess The Whole Story Will Turn Into Stale Khichadi.
God Damn Don't Make Us Wait Plz Hurry Up ?

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Nids

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I am so sorry about the late unreserve!! I can't believe it's been over a week. I thought I had updated this already.

Well needless to say, I absolutely loved this story. It was different but had the IPK touch to it.

I love how drawn they are to each other even after the separation.

It was a great read!

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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LooneyLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Dancing dancing dancing to this res?

oh what a tale you weave...what a perfect AU. The irony of all things IPK cant be missed..from the title of the film, to the dance sequence, second actress, lavanya, dying from an accident..Then the passion to match it all. It is hard to recreate something that epic, and yet here we are..your watching that scene 50times has worked wonders here. I love how sound and plausible you make it all sound, the first time director..and things about the film industry.

I am not going to hazard a guess on their relationship status or what went wrong. Because it is bound to be wrong by a long shot. But oh man the angst sure helps, when writing a tale based on this song..it gave the perfect fire which they needed to make this work. And obviously an excuse for arnav to know the lyrics.

The location was perfect, IWANTTOGOTHERE. bas.

I cannot wait to read how you take this forward..

Luna

ps. I think I am going to have to come back and expand a little..

Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago

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preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

🥳res

For the first time ever I made it to the first page! Yayy !!

There were a lot of scenes and situations where the CV's didn't do justice to the story, but I never thought that the Teri Meri dance sequence could be done like this. Only you could come up with something this beautiful. Spectacular. 👏

I thought they were dating or even a live-in relationship but divorce!😲

PS: I read "A tale of constants and variables" some 5-6 to six times the day before my exam and the question was to design a circuit which detects a prime numbers between 1 and 100!😆

Now I really doubt that my C programming paper will include something like teri meri or acrophobia but who knows I may as well have a question to calculate the Grand Canyon's height!!!🤣

Edited by preethi28 - 12 years ago

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meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Dancing makes me think Teri Meri

Edge makes me think of the suicide scene just before Arnav tells her he knows about Shyam and her.

And because it is you, I think I am completely off the mark

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

*EDITED**

Juhiji what a great rendition to the lovely 'Teri Meri' scene...We fell in love with that magical imperfect Teri Meri then how can we not be affected by this...😊

Tussi to chagaye ho...👏

Wish teri meri had a background as lovely as this...

Wish your brains had made inroads into the stupid heads of CVs then IPK would have been this perfect show with no glitches...or error.

The ever green Arnav and khushi and the different make up that you put on them everytime in all these tales and as always we are blown over...

I seriously don't know which arnav aur khushi is better in this entire series...😕

And the ending was such awesome 'shocker'

Can't wait now to read what is in store. And no i am not going to guess hence forth...😆

Liza

P.S: **knock knock** any production house out there please take these 2 fantastic girls and their tales and produce this as a weekly 'Love Story'.

You really don't know what you are loosing...😊

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Res
Unres

Lost for words...so much was said in just one single chapter that only one word comes to mind after reading such amazingly beautiful piece 'unbelievable'.

So they are married and she is on a run from his all consuming physical presence as he was obviously had possessed her mind ,body and soul that she felt suffocated to the extend of leaving his physical presence but could she manage to leave him mentally or spiritually I don't think so and none of them are not even capable of moving forward then why did he not go after her when she left and why the hell did he sent the divorce papers of all things...to get a rise out of her, to get any reaction ? But he did't get that did he ? and now he is asking her why she did't sign them, what if she says that she has signed them and he will get them soon, what will he do then...as he is definitely not ready to let her go not by the long shot...oh well wil just have to wait for Monday to come to get all answers.

Thank you for the update.

Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago