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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW i'm beginning to love this FF more and more each chapter...i hope there is nothing wrong with Shukria 😔
the AsYa scenes were so cute when he kissed her cheek and pulled her back...i can't wait for more AsYa scenes
you're doing am amazing job, carry on and don't let useless people get to you, they aren't worth the time...you're FF is amazing and congrats on it being the FF of the week...i knew you could do it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IIdewaaneII

First off! Im so sorry for not sending a pm! I dont know what happened!
and I hope you got the pm this time!
Thank you so much though! 😃

Na dear.. No need to say sorry.. Its okay it happens.. Pming so many ppl is a difficult task you may miss someone sometime by mistake.. And, yeah got the pm Thanks..

And, the update was superb.. Do continue soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooow!wooow!wooow! Amaaazn ! I dn actly hv corct words to describe ur SS! It ws beynd execlnc! I read ol d parts in a go frm 1 -25 n it ws lik heaven! I cldnt stop bt cn clap a 100 times 4 u! Hw cn u rite sooo well? U knw wt iv bcm ur SUPER FAN!!! It ws fab man! Fantastic ! These r nthn infrnt of ur SS! It ws out of ths world! I ws stickd to it lik nythn els! OMG! Sch a breath takng precap! Plz plz plz cntinue infct if u cn i wld beg u to do it jst now! Please! N plz PM me vneva u updt it! Wid luv ALISHA :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 26:
Asad and Zoya left the house and went into the car. Asad started the car and left the driveway of the Khan Mansion.
Asad drove quite fast and had the windows open. As he was driving, he turned to his right to see Zoya looking out the window, while her blew behind her. Her hair danced with the breeze, like waves moving in the ocean. He heard cars beeping, bringing him back into reality. He continued to drive his way to Hussain and Shukria's house.
After 40 minutes of driving, they had finally reached their house. Asad got out first, walked around, and opened the door for Zoya. She got out of the car and they both made their way to the door. Zoya went to go ring the door bell when Asad noticed Zoya's hand shaking. Once she brought her hand back down beside her hips, Asad held it. Zoya turned to look at him as he a gave a protected smile. Seeing this, a bit of her nervous-ness went down.
Finally someone came to open the door.
It was hussain. He looked exahuasted. It seemed as though he was restless.
Hussain: Zoya, Asad? You guys here? Come in.
He moved to the side letting them enter the house. They all made their way to the couches in the living room. Asad and Zoya sat next to each other still holding hands while Hussain sat across from them.
Asad: Sorry to bother you Hussain, but something was really bothering Zoya.
Zoya: Actually Hussain, I think that Shukria is in danger.
Hussain shot right up.
Hussain: Who told you that?
Asad: Actually no one. But we got a phone call and --
Hussain: Zoya is right. Shukria has gone MISSING.
Zoya froze. She knew that this was going to happen, yet she still couldn't take the conformation
Hussain: It was the next day after our wedding and Shukria and I went to the bazaar before going to visit her family. She told me she had to take a call and went aside. I was looking at some stuff when I noticed that she had been gone for a while. I looked everywhere, but could not find her.
Hussain had some tears in his eyes, ready to fall down.
Zoya pulled herself together and held back the tears.
Zoya: Did you call the police?
Hussain: *shaky voice* I did, but you know Zoya, Police here don't do much.
Zoya: But hussain, I got a phone call.
She explained the whole phone call to him and the editing that asad had done on his Laptop.
Hussain: So my guess was right. She is kidnapped.
Asad: Well we can't say that for sure.
Zoya: Asad and I will be going to the police again to show the phone call soon.
Hussain: Thanks Zoya.
She smiled as they all got up.
Asad: We should get going, but we will keep you updated if we find anything.
Zoya: And make sure you call us if you find anything.
Hussain: Alright, thanks once again.
Hussain went to walk them outside to their car.
* Ring Ring*
Zoya looked down to her phone.
PRIVATE CALLER
She picked up the phone call.
Zoya: Hello?
Man's voice: Zoya baby. I hope you remember me.
Zoya: Who the hell are you?
Man: Maybe you don't remember me, but I remember you. Your beautiful face and eyes.
Zoya: Excuse ME!
Man: Don't excuse yourself. Anyways, maybe you may not be interested in me, but I can make you interested.
The man moved the phone a bit.
Shukria: HELLO? ZOYA!HELLPPP ZOYAA!
Zoya: SHUKRIA!
Hussain and Asad looked at Zoya
Hussain: Shukria?
Man: I told you, you will be interested now!
Zoya: Don't hurt her!
Man: I'll call you again. Until then, keep waiting.
Zoya: Wait! Hello, Hello? *beep beep* Shit!
Asad: What happened?
Zoya: That man!
Asad: Who was it.
The voice was running through her head constantly.
Zoya: I don't know. But I've heard it somewhere.
Hussain: C'mon Zoya, Try remembering.
The voice was getting louder and louder in her head. She covered her ears. Random sounds were going through her head *beep... CRASH*
She couldn't take it any longer and crashed.
Before hitting the floor Asad caught her.
Asad: Zoya!?!!? Zoya!
Hussain: Asad! Quickly take her to the doctors.
Asad: No way. The doctors is too far.
Hussain: Okay. How about bring her inside and I'll call the doctor.
Asad Nodded and brought her back inside Hussain's house.
(NO PRECAP- Sorry)
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Posted: 12 years ago
res- reading!
edited******

Nice update!
Wondering who called? I have a suspect in my mind...; but don't want to say names yet.🤔
Poor Shukria! Hope she's safe!
Thanks for the pm and continue soon, eagerly waiting to know who called.
Edited by sophie420 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg! How can you stop there!? Why do i get the feeling it might be someone from new york... Whoo could it beee?? LOVED IT as always :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update

Who is the caller?

I hope Zoe may remember soon

Awesome update dear..

continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing! Really suspenseful! Can't wait for next update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update.<3

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update but who is the caller. no precap is not fare.plzz update soon

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