~*A Tortured Love*~ {ARSH} (Part 3 - Pg 27) - Page 21

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Amita Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it..

Amazing update...

thanks for the PM..

Continue soon

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swetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww so sad i feel so sad for poor armaan
i wish ArSh be back
thanks for pm
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ssh57

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Posted: 13 years ago

A very peotically written part. the following lines

Wanting her is hard to forget, loving her is hard to regret, losing her is hard to accept, but even with all the hurt I've felt, letting her go is the most painful yet.

could be rearranged thus

Wanting her is hard to forget,

loving her is hard to regret,

losing her is hard to accept,

but even with all the hurt I've felt,

letting her go is the most painful yet.

the long verse in poetic form is also very nice.

the quotes you used were also very apt and beautiful like this one

"You can't wrap love in a box, but you can wrap a person in a hug."

On the whole a very well written part.

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aisha_ranbir8

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey awesome story soo far...loved it ...beautifully described all the emotions n pain n hurt which armaan is going through ... n shilpa being confused n lost about her feelings ...loved it all...pls continue soon ...loved it all... thanks for pm...take care...love aish...

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akshi ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey

gr8 ff

plz plz add me to ur pm list

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing ff:-):-) can u Plz PM me when u update dear???? I love it:-):-)

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Priya kashian

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice FF do cont soon n add me to ur pm list

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

@Kashikidiwani: Awesum n fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Zarish Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

your ff is just too amazing..the concept is new n lovely👏...plx continue super soon n pm me😭

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ojaswi

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey i just read ur ff...

it was just awesome...

poor armaan...

cont soon...

and do add me in ur PM list...:)

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