~*A Tortured Love*~ {ARSH} (Part 3 - Pg 27)

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~*A Tortured Love*~


There she was cladded in a beautiful red maroon coloured lengha'' my princess. She was being brought down by her bunch of frnz to the mandap. She was luking like an absolute angel!!!!!!!!


Her cute nose, those big green eyes, that rosy lips, her hands covered wid dark mehendi n lots of bangle, the noise of her payal, that heavy lengha which fitted her so well showing her perfect curves. I couldn't help but to stare at her.

She was shilpa!!!!! MY SHILPA'''' NO now I didn't had the right to call her MY SHILPA, coz now she was going to be sumbody's else shilpa!!!!!!!!!!

My best frnd was getting married to my big brother''. Abhimanyu Rathode. N where was I?????? greeting people in my brother's marriage, whome I didn't even knew, and in the corner of the room I saw my own fate moking at me!!!!!!!!

I always wanted shilpa in my life, I loved her but maybe she never saw my love for her.


But I was happy that she was happy, she was getting married to the love of her life. And I promised myself to go away from her , from her life, coz I knew I would never be able to stop my feelings for her n that too when she will always be in front of me as my BHABHI.

Me ARMAAN RATODE, the youngest of my family n this is my not so happening love story.

I wonder why even m calling it a love story??????? Or is it????

Do comment n hit the like tab'' it means a lot to me ❤️


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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX

Intro - Pg 1

Part 1 - Pg 10

Part 2 - Pg 19

Part 3 - Pg 27

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My other FF's


MISSUNDERSTANDING (COMPLETE)
Edited by Kashkidiwani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow great concept
looks interesting
plz do continue soon
n keep pmin me 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start.
plz counti...
thanks 4 pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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as always im in love with your work first misunderstadning which i read almost 5 times now me wana read this
i love stories having suspence drama not rona dhona wala
loved the concept
thankx for pm
continue it soon
maria
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Wowww...A new story...Love the concept...Shilpa s married to Abhimanyu who is a brother of Armaan🤢...very excited for this...do update soon..Thanks for the PM...Take care...😃

Lots of Love

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Hmmm Interesting concept!!!
I was actually looking for some new good ff to read... coz the ffs i read i don't know where their writer have gone, all are pending to get updated... i hope you will update soon... not to keep me waiting to read something new and interesting!
Thanks For The Pm...
Love,
Sameera
😊 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey aashi di,
nice introduction...
"RATODE" SOUND LIKE GEET'S NANTARA DIALOUGE...
a tortured loved means armaan's tortued...
I loved dis story...
Ud soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyya aashi congo for the new FF 🤗 its really interesting... i hope this marriage stops somehow pls dnt get shilpa married to abhi... anyways waiting to read more... cont soon dear 😊
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Very nice concept! Do cont.soon...

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