NEW FF :- I WILL BE WITH YOU pt5, pg14

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INDEX PART:-1-PAGE 1 PART:-2-PAGE 3 PART:-3-PAGE 6 PART:-4-PAGE 10 pART:-5-PAGE 14 HELLO GUYS TODAY I POSTED MY 1ST OS WHICH ON ASYA IN THE MORNING. AND I GET SUCH A GUD RESPONSE WHICH I NEVER EXPECT. THANK U SO MUCH FOR U SUPPORT. YOUR SUPPORT AND APPRICIATION STRIKE ANOTHER STORY IN MY HEAD WHICH I WANT TO BE A FF. I WILL POST IT SORTLY HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT 😊CHECK MY BELOW POST FOR THE PART-1
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PART 1 :- A beautiful morning starts the sun come with new hope and lighted everywhere. Here in the khan menson as per daily routine everyone sat on the breakfast table at sharp 8 o'clock. Dilshad serve food to asad and najma is busy in eating her breakfast. But asad's eye is searchng for one person 'ZOYA'. His love and life he new it perfetly that he loved zoya unconditionaly but didnt admit yet. After what tanver did with zoya he is so afraid that he cant take away zoya frm hs eyes for a second. Its have been passed 7 month since their marraige and the accident happen. He cant remove those day frm his mind when zoya only sleep like a statue and didnt respond anythng. Still he thought zoya was goning through with so much pain that coz of him, because taver wants asad and thats why she harm zoya. He suddenly break his thought and ask dilshad "ammi zoya kahan hai? Kal rat ko wo apke ya najma ke room main soye the kya kal rat ko room main nei aye the". Dilshad smiled and said teasingly "acha ji ab apne dulhan ke bina ek rat vi guzara nei hota , bese asad tm tb kya karoge jb zoya apne mayke jayege ab meri bahu ka mayka toh koe as pas nei hai newyork main hai toh 4 5 mahine rehke ye ayege". Then dilsha and najma smile and asad look at both of them and they stop smiling. Asad said"ammi aisi koe bat nei hai main bs janna chahta tha ki wo properly rest le rahe hai ya nei kyn ki doctor ne bola hai unko rest ki sakt jarurat hai avi tak she isnt cured. Bese ammi wo hai kahan avi tak toh ajati hai. Then dilshad said "tmhari ladli zara wo kal rat ko to mere pas bilkul vi nei soye par jaise he zoya ne usko pakda ek dum chup ho gaye wo ladki usko toh sirf apne maa ke pas he nind ata hai". Then dilshad smile. Asad get tense and said"toh kal rat var zoya , zara ke pas the tb toh wo bilkul vi nei soye hoge ammi, zara rat ke har 2 hour main fir se uthjati hai. Yeh zoya vi na pata nei uska bachpana kb jayega, khud bimar hai par health ki care nei karti, zara ko mere pas vi toh la sakti the". Then asad get up frm there immideatly and rushed to the guest room. Dilshad look at his direction and said "tanver ne kya kuch nei kia in dono ke sath par zara toh indono ke ankho ka tara hai . Tanver ne zoya ko marne ki kausis ki par zoya ne zara ko bachaya. Najma smiled and said"ammi ap dekhna zara bilkul zoya ki tarah hoge infact wo toh avi se zoya ki ek quality le gaye Hai sbko apna bana lene ka". Then dilshad nod. Here asad open the guest room's door and the infrnt scene make a small on her face. Zoya held zara on her arm and she herself sleep improperly when asad saw ths he took zara and slept her carefuly. Then he took zoya in her arm and start to leave the room. At that time zoya open her eyes and said" mr.khan ap kya kar rahe hai mujhe zara ke pas sona hai" then asad said in a orderly tone "wo aram se so hogaye hai nd nw u have to sleep properly". Zoya open her mouth to say smthng bt interputed by asad "no argue ms.faruqi rest means rest". Finaly they reached their room he laid zoya on the bed and covered her. Zoya murmured " dekhlunge mr.akdu ahmad khan". Then she sleep like a obidient baby. [SO GUYS HERE IS THE PART ONE DO LIKE AND COMMENT. ALL TYPES OF COMPLIMENT,CRITISIE,ANDE,TAMATAR ARE EXCPETED]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh wow dat was awsum... pls regularly update it n if u can pm me it wud b gr8...
btw can u gve me d link of ur os?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was awesome. Aaawww they kept Zara!!!!! Please on me.
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Originally posted by: ar-n-only-ar

oh wow dat was awsum... pls regularly update it n if u can pm me it wud b gr8...
btw can u gve me d link of ur os?

thank u so much dear. I will try to give update regularly but nw i update through phone toh i cant pm u sorry :-(. R u on twitter or fb ? Tell me ur user name then i'll add u and gve u the lnk
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Originally posted by: kandygrover

That was awesome. Aaawww they kept Zara!!!!! Please on me.

thank u :-)
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Originally posted by: akap

Very good..update soon..pm me.

thank u :-). I'll try :-)
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Thank you dear :-)

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