ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146

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Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#871

ooh!! that was some update!

The action sequence was well written!

Gosh! why is there trouble always waiting for them! *sigh*

Well since it is related to political situation prevailing in our country ... such things not expected to dies out! if there was a clear cut solution for it! we could have used that long time ago!and India would have been much less corrupted a country!

Thanks a lot for the update Anu! :)

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Sidda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

Anu, I've caught up with the updates. Pursuit is getting more intriguing. I'm happy to see Maan back. Arshi and he are my favorite characters and it's great to see them together. It's cute that Arnav is looking forward to have a family with Khushi as well. Anyways, the last chapter was horrifying. It reminded me of the sequence where Arshi and Maan were severly injured as Arnav's life was threatened. It's seems that Bhairav might have hired these hit men and luckily Khushi had both Arnav and Maan to defend her. Both of them love her greatly and they are willing to go to any extent to ensure her protection. It was frightening to see men get into the car and tie up Khushi as Arnav fought with another attacker. Maan and Arnav are once again injured while protecting their lady love. I'm proud that both men cooperate when it comes to Khushi and they want her to give care to each other. Arnav might be possessive but he is aware of Maan's loyalty and affection towards Khushi and Maan is also aware of Arnav's commitment. I hope all of them are safe and sound and that Khushi doesn't push either of them away due to fear.

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Dr. Anupama Ramakrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#873

THE PURSUIT-34

THE MIRAGE-II

..."Aur yeh kahaan liya tha usney?" Bhairav enquired.

( And where was this?)

"Raajgadh key meley mein!"( Rajgadh mela) Shikhar said.

"Aur thu?" ( and you?)

"My wahee tha aur bahut majaa aaya per woh Rathode neh sab kharaab kiya!#$%^!!! Humesha ooke hi peechey rehthaa tha! Sasuraa!" Shikhar said with a wicked glint in his eye!

( I was there too! we had fun! But that rathode chap was there too! He spoilt all the fun!He was always there trailing her!)

"Per yaa sab kaisey!" ( But how come all this...?) Bhairav egged on...his son...for an explanation)

"Wahee tho! Tab woh tha ab jaakey yeh shehar ka @#$% "he spat thinking of Arnav!

( Then that fellow was there! And now! This Cityslicker)

"Ab tho koyi nahi hoga!" Bhairav said smiling visciously!

( Now! There will be neither!)

"Ab Rani saa ko bahut mehengaa padney waala hain!Kyun Bapu!" Shikhar gloated.

( Now Her Majesty is going to pay the price! A big one!)

"Dhat! Thoo chup kar! Bada aaya kyun Bapu bolney waala! Dekhthey jaa bus thoo!" Bhairav said stroking his moustache!

( You keep quiet! and... keep watching!)

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#874

wow first time khushi confession

so perfect and beautiful

it was a magical update

update soon

Edited by salooni - 12 years ago

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jtammareddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Awesome updates. Sorry couldn't comment early for the last 2 updates too. A lot has changed since bombing. Khushi realized her feelings towards Arnav. Now the attack on the car has sent her to a hysterical mode and she confessed her feelings to Arnav. What are the photos about that bhirav is talking about.

Eager for more.

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Shru9ti

@Shru9ti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

Loved it

Finally Khushi accepted she cnt live without ASR😳

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sridivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Superb update khushi is so cute n sweet update it soon

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meow999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#878

wow khushi is so cute...

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manusmithcl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#879

loved it.. wonder how much effort u put for each and every chapter...excellent..

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aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#880

Seriously Anu, this is the best chapter so far. Loved how Arnav controlled himself from breaking his own head and was patient enough to understand what is going on in her pea size brain.
Atleast she erbalized her feelings for him and recognized their marriage.

Enough of crap now, make Arnav switch on the ASR mode and take care of bhariav and his useless son.
Deep (poor chap) is hopeless in love and his loyalty towards Arnav.

Great job!
Keep writing:)