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Lone she stands , holding to the lone ray... as the dark clouds close on her....

Of the lone ray , she was sure, would lead her through the dark lanes....

Of a world , she dreamt of... shattering afore... she watches... helpless... for all she ever hoped and sought...and gave her all for... remains unrequited....

Yet she walks.... guided by the unrequited... as his companion... to leave no stone unturned to never leave his emotions .... unrequited....for the pain... she endures... searing pain... tearing her.....very being...

A sad personification she stands of ..... Unrequited Love....

-Sareeta

-For Ipshita..... who loved Shiv, but now stands helpeless as she sees , her dream shatter, yet she walks with Shiv... as a friend.... so as to never leave his emotions , unrequited...

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Me still thinks, Ipshi aint bad, but jus a sad , woman , totally in love, knowing she will never get it... and unable to love a man, who loves her... instead! 😊

Ab please logon, belan leke mat aana.... I know , a lot of ppl hate Ippy here... for she follows shiv everywhere.. par dost ki tarah bhi toh kar sakti hai.. haan apna pyaar chupa nahin paati at times.....hmmm....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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So sweat of you to write a poem for Ipshi, di. 👏

You know most of us here hates her or dislikes her, coz no one know what her intentions are, I am sure she is definitely in love with Shiv, a one-sided. Whatever she feels, I hope she never cross her line. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: meli

So sweat of you to write a poem for Ipshi, di. 👏

You know most of us here hates her or dislikes her, coz no one know what her intentions are, I am sure she is definitely in love with Shiv, a one-sided. Whatever she feels, I hope she never cross her line. 😉

Awww, thank you so much meli! Yeah I hope she never crosses the line....😊

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Even I would feel sorry for ipshi..........If her love was true.But if she was a part of the raaz and agreed for shiv and gauri's marriage ,then I don't think that it is love.Because in love you should be willing to sacrifice for
one another which gauri did today for shiv after knowing the truth.

But onething I must admit ,that you are very kind hearted to write a poem on Ipshi.If she is really good Then she deserves 👏 👏 👏 Otherwise 😡 😡 😡 .
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Originally posted by: ismita

Even I would feel sorry for ipshi..........If her love was true.But if she was a part of the raaz and agreed for shiv and gauri's marriage ,then I don't think that it is love.Because in love you should be willing to sacrifice for
one another which gauri did today for shiv after knowing the truth.

But onething I must admit ,that you are very kind hearted to write a poem on Ipshi.If she is really good Then she deserves 👏 👏 👏 Otherwise 😡 😡 😡 .

very well said

i agree wid u dear

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ismita

Even I would feel sorry for ipshi..........If her love was true.But if she was a part of the raaz and agreed for shiv and gauri's marriage ,then I don't think that it is love.Because in love you should be willing to sacrifice for
one another which gauri did today for shiv after knowing the truth.

But onething I must admit ,that you are very kind hearted to write a poem on Ipshi.If she is really good Then she deserves 👏 👏 👏 Otherwise 😡 😡 😡 .

THank you sooooooooo much Ismita! That is very kind of you to say so!!! I jus saw it froma different perspective, for I could never get myself to hate Ipshi, but yeah I always suspected Nikhila though! She was too good to be true!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you sooooooooo much Nikki! Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well said sareeta ji... but are you sure ipshita shares a one-sided love with shiv.. I still hope they are just good friends... 😛
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Originally posted by: sareeta

<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"
color=#000099>Lone she stands , holding to the lone ray... as the dark
clouds close on her....


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>Of
the lone ray , she was sure, would lead her through the dark lanes.... [/
FONT]


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>Of a
world , she dreamt of... shattering afore... she watches... helpless... for all
she ever hoped and sought...and gave her all for... remains unrequited....


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>Yet
she walks.... guided by the unrequited... as his companion... to leave no
stone unturned to never leave his emotions .... unrequited....for the
pain... she endures... searing pain... tearing her.....very being... [/
I]


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>A
sad personification she stands of ..... Unrequited Love....


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>-
Sareeta


<FONT face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color=#000099>-For
Ipshita..... who loved Shiv, but now stands helpeless as she sees , her
dream shatter, yet she walks with Shiv... as a friend.... so as to never
leave his emotions , unrequited...




di.. as always i am speechless... now you make me feel bad for not
really like ipshita.. but at the same time you make me want to feel for
her.. which while reading your work, makes me change my perspective of
her, i am starting to feel that yes she is alone without the love she wants..
and she still tries to go on at least as a friend with the man she loves!

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