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Posted: 12 years ago

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Uhh I think I will post something later on this turned out really crap

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow! Another story!

And I'm First!!

And a Paagaall Khushi + British Raizada = Awesome!

"Kamine ullu ke patthe tujhe toh jail me hona chahiye. Mujhe kuch ho jata toh? Baba ka kya hota? Maa toh ro ro ke--"

Khushi's going to seduce him? Wow!!

Loved the Prologue!

Continue soon!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Vaani What the Hell Nahi...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This Is Damn Funny...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

You Must Continue...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Poor Raizada...

Love At First Sight..!!☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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HAHAHAHHAH... WHAT A PROLOGUE VANI...

i was literally laughing out loud in khushi's hindi dialogues...

"Kamine ullu ke patthe tujhe toh jail me hona chahiye." 🤣

awesome... mind blowing prologue...

its gona be fun reading it..

will b waiting for the updates... n all the best for this new work... 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome prologue...

loved it

update soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow a new story from you, you just can't stop writing them, lol

Amazing and brilliant prologue, can't wait to read the sequel.

Loving the concept of the story it is very interesting and I'm excited to read more,

Love the way khushi reacted to Arnav when he hit her car, khushi abusing Arnav in Hindi was so funny and hilarious.

So Khushi is going to fall in love and the only way she can keep Arnav from not leaving is by seduction, fantastic idea.

Eager to read more and can't wait to see how Khushi turns seductress and shows Arnav her passionate side.

Please update soon xx

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Posted: 12 years ago

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simply fabulous
loved it
keep writing
and thnxx for such lovely update..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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HAHAHAHA brilliant Vani..."Kamine ullu ke patthe tujhe toh jail me hona chahiye" haha hilarious...to damn funny yaar...i cant wait for the next updates...update soon

Jenny x

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