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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww first of fall Welcome Back 😃 I'm happy you didn't stop for some stupid reasons šŸ˜† Secondly im sorry for commenting and reading it so late! I've exams coming so i've got revise and put all my wishes and desire aside 😭 but does it stop me to read my favourite ff? šŸ¤”šŸ¤” euhhh NO šŸ˜†
So coming to the part it was AWSOME!! i just loved it šŸ˜† Najma was hilarious when she said she is feeling like besharam becoz shes the only one nt blushing and Dilshad saying " Asads line" when Zoya was saying woh actualy šŸ˜†šŸ˜†!!! BUT like whts wrong with u šŸ˜• why do u have to do same same like other writer? HOLD ON!! i'm just saying hanging us with suspense nothing else don't worry šŸ˜† whats wrong with shukriya.? why was she screaming? and whts the precap abt? omg larki u have to update fast so we can know more abt all this because its seriously a pain to bear the suspense šŸ˜† continue soon

Love, Laiba

BIG HUG for you seriously for facing ppl and not running away =)
Edited by -Laiba- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear, I had been inactive on da forums for a few days n hence missed ur post abt discontinuing the ff. its a relief dat u've decided against it. u shud know we r all wid u, backing u n dis beautiful story.
the part was really nice. I guess the evil witch is back in action.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Guys! 😃
Thanks so much for the awesome comments!
I have good news! This FF is the FF of the week!
I am so happy Right now! ā¤ļø Thank you all for your support!
enjoy the next chapter!
Chapter 25:
Najma: It was probably a prank call.
Zoya: No it wasn't. Because when I checked the number, it was -
She stopped. She didn't want to continue. She didn't want to believe it.
Asad reached over and rubbed Zoya's hand that was sitting on the table.
Asad: Who was it Zoya?
Zoya: Shukria.
With the one word shocker, no one said a word. It couldn't be true, could it? Asad finally broke the silence.
Asad: Are you sure Zoya? I mean, maybe you read the number wrong
Zoya: Maybe. * She took her phone and checked the recent calls once again.* Nope that's her number for sure.
Dilshad: okay, if you are sure, then we will help you figure out this situation, but first, eat. if you dont eat, then how will you even work probably or think straight. You need energy to do anything.
Najma: Ammi's right. Eat breakfast then we will all figure out the situation together.
They all agreed and began to eat the breakfast. Everyone noticed the silence at the table. Zoya had seem quiet worried, after all it was her best friend. Her hand were quivering in fear. She was thinking of the worst situation possible.
After eating breakfast, Najma and Dilshad volunteered to clean so that Asad and Zoya don't waste any more time in finding out this phone call.
Asad and Zoya went into Asads room and turned on his laptop while sitting on his sofa. They connected her phone and opened the media file.
Zoya: I know how to re open calls. Before coming to India I had programmed a recorder on my phone that records all my calls and saves them for 48 hours.
Asad gave zoya the 'What the h*ll look*
Zoya: What? Why are you looking at me like that?
Asad: no reason.
Zoya: So I wanted to be safe okay! Just in case my pepper spray didn't work, I would use my plan B.
She went through the files and opened the received phone calls and clicked the most recent one. Before playing it, she put in her headphones giving Asad one of them.
She played the file:
Zoya: Hello?
... blank
Zoya: hello? Who is this?
a female screams in the background.
Zoya: Hello?!
*beep beep beep*
Asad: Play it again for me Zoya.
Zoya: Sure.
She played the file once more.
Zoya: Hello?
... blank
Zoya: hello? Who is this?
Asad: Pause it!
Zoya quickly paused the media file.
Zoya: What happened?
Asad: Pass me the laptop for a second.
She gave him the laptop and watched him as he re winded the file 2. 5 seconds and played around with the sounds. He replayed the file in slow motion.
Zoya: hello? Who is this?
*swish*
He paused it again
Asad: Did you hear that?
Zoya: Yeah, but what was it.
Asad: it sounded like a knife.
Zoya: KNIFE? Are you sure?
Asad: Positive.
Zoya looked at him.
Zoya: The more I stay with you, the more I found out about you!
Asad: looked into her eyes.
Asad: Trust me, there is a lot you don't know yet.
Zoya smiled and blushed a bit. Asad turned his head a bit and kissed her cheek. She blushed even more. Becoming shy she got and was about to run out of the room when Asad pulled her back causing her to fall on his lap.
She looked up him again.
*mitwa*
Their cute little 'staring contest' was interupted by Najma and Dilshad.
Najma: Sorry to bother, but did you guys get any clues yet?
Zoya quickly got up while Asad fixed the rinkles on his shirt.
Zoya: Actually we did.
Dilshad: Really?
Asad: Yes, Here take a look.
Asad and Zoya showed them the whole recording and explained the sounds.
5 minutes later.
Dilshad: Maybe you should try going to Shukria's house and asking them .
Asad: Good idea.
Precap: Zoya: That voice.
Her head began to spin and finally causing her to faint right into Asad's Arms.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Hey , I m reading this after so many days. Missed so many chapters. I din't receive any PM's since chapter 13th. Why ? did you discard me from your list?? Hawww!!! But, then I stalked for an update today and read from the entire thing. I loved the turn of events... Would love to read it ahead.. If you could pm me the next that way it becomes much easier.. Or else I'l stalk when I get time.. No issues..


Continue soon!!!

Dee

First off! Im so sorry for not sending a pm! I dont know what happened!
and I hope you got the pm this time!
Thank you so much though! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

read all 24 parts over in one go cause I had stopped reading after a while and I wanna kick myself for ever stopping! I LOVE your story! How they're so in love and have cute moments and the singing and the guitar and the Birthday and the... EVERYTHING! Aww and in New York Zoya is sooo emotional. OMG Please update soon! I hope Shukria is ok :(


You are quite talented dear :)

Aww thanks so much for coming back 😃 Really sweet of you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

AMAZING!!! Loved it! I'm so glad you decided to continue!!! Don't care so much what those fools think! Just write ..because at the end of the day its all about you and what you do ...they shouldn't matter! You have so many fans...those are just nothing! Please continue and loving it more!!! I hope Shukria is ok! I bet its Tanveer...-.- Its always her!! Can't wait for next chapter!!

honestly speaking, I would have given up! but people like you really supported me and thanks soo much for that!
Thanks once again! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo_Ksg

Kawal!!!😲 U dnt need to stop ur FF for anyone!! 😵

Let people say whatever they want to..!!
Its an amazing FF..šŸ‘šŸ¼ I read it for the first time..n got glued to it already..
Please DO NOT stop writing it.. ok? 😳

Hey Thanks so much!
I needed the push!
Love you for your love and support šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

n u decide to continue it! *does a small jig*


lovely part and i always love to see and read najma teasing her bhaijaan n bhabhijaan!

uh-oh Shukriya in danger! go lady sherlock n bond ahmed khan! go find out the raaz!

continue soon

Love,
sadie!

Glad you enjoyed it sadie!
Thanks for the support! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

Aww first of fall Welcome Back 😃 I'm happy you didn't stop for some stupid reasons šŸ˜† Secondly im sorry for commenting and reading it so late! I've exams coming so i've got revise and put all my wishes and desire aside 😭 but does it stop me to read my favourite ff? šŸ¤”šŸ¤” euhhh NO šŸ˜†
So coming to the part it was AWSOME!! i just loved it šŸ˜† Najma was hilarious when she said she is feeling like besharam becoz shes the only one nt blushing and Dilshad saying " Asads line" when Zoya was saying woh actualy šŸ˜†šŸ˜†!!! BUT like whts wrong with u šŸ˜• why do u have to do same same like other writer? HOLD ON!! i'm just saying hanging us with suspense nothing else don't worry šŸ˜† whats wrong with shukriya.? why was she screaming? and whts the precap abt? omg larki u have to update fast so we can know more abt all this because its seriously a pain to bear the suspense šŸ˜† continue soon

Love, Laiba

BIG HUG for you seriously for facing ppl and not running away =)

LAIBA! mere commenter Jaan šŸ˜†
Thanks so much!
aha I know, It seems as though im writiing like the other writers. But just contiue on the story! everything is just going to blow up in your case šŸ˜† *does evil laugh*
hehe anyways thanks againšŸ¤—
Made my day!
AND wouldn't have continued without the support! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad you're continuing this!
Just read the last 2 parts! Nice update!
Wonder what happened to Shukria! šŸ˜•
Update Soon and do pm me!

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