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I like good stories. With emotions and all but mainly when there is a flow. This soap is like a medley. You hop from one plot to another and come back to the original plot and the viewer shouldn't be able to see the transition. Today, I was disappointed. They showed Ayaan and Zoya and their interaction was so not smooth. When did they meet last? What was the situation. Zoya doesn't know that Humeira is alright. Yes, she was not arrested, so she should be fine - is this the way a viewer is forced to think?
I am no writer, but when I wrote the O.S on these two characters meeting, I had added few sentences for Zoya asking Ayaan how Humeira is. When a simple non - writer viewer can think of it, why not writers who have writing/story telling as their profession? These two fought - for no reason. They had resolved their issue and shaken hands right? then why all this drama?
You can read the O.S if you wish - again, I am not trying to say it is great but definitely the meeting was better in my story than what they showed.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3579480
I am no writer, but when I wrote the O.S on these two characters meeting, I had added few sentences for Zoya asking Ayaan how Humeira is. When a simple non - writer viewer can think of it, why not writers who have writing/story telling as their profession? These two fought - for no reason. They had resolved their issue and shaken hands right? then why all this drama?
You can read the O.S if you wish - again, I am not trying to say it is great but definitely the meeting was better in my story than what they showed.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3579480
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