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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice story ...like soft n simple type...luv it pls update soon
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thank you so much for the likes... love ya...



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part-3



both were sitting beside but none talk to each other... geet'a eyes still on the grass , searching her ring in this dark, she again bend and start searching her ring tracing the grass by her finger tips... tears were about to fall down from her eyes... she felt she is useless that time... how can she do this big mistake... she had lost her ring, given by him... how can she so careless... she was cursing herself in her mind and other side maan was watching her continuously...


though he was also searching her ring but the storm getting more by passing each minute... and again he heard the sound of thunder, lightening provided by sky and he was able to see her face...he never felt like this before... so sad for anyone... after lots of struggle , he spoke... "don't worry, aapki ring mil jayegi" like he knew that they will surely find her ring... so confidence in his voice... unknowingly she believed and sat up on the bench again... she doesn't know why she did all this...

the silence prevailed again between them... actually were they talking? no... it was one or two sentence..no..no actually questions that too he was asking only and she was only replying... he again spoke , actually he didn't control on himself for asking, he did not want but still he asked... "how you lost your ring?" she tilted her face and looked at him... they are able to see each other face but not that properly... she clutched her finger tightly and regained how actually she lost her ring...

"before 3 days, my boyfriend, Rahul proposed me... I was waiting for that day so consciously , means our 1 year relationship was going to be on proposal stage and he proposed me... he gave that ring... i was so happy... after that in evening i came here and doesn't know why I remove that ring and watching it so keenly... but suddenly.." she stopped... "it's okay...hum kal fir yaha aayenge and will search your ring together..." she looked at him... how can any stranger help to another stranger...how can anyone do this for a mere strange,... she thought... the person whom we never met before... a meeting that too about half an hour or so... she nodded... "thanks"... "it's okay" he replied...

"can i ask something?" she asked to him... "haan..puchho..." he replied calmly... "agar aapki girlfriend se i mean... aap apni girlfriend ko ring dete aur usne ring kho di hoti to, aap kya karte?"she bit her bottom lip saying so... she was worried if he took this in a wrong way... she asked genuinely... she wants to know his opinion... she wants to know what if she tell everything to rahul what will be his answer... she wants to get the chances of negativity and positivity.,... he took a deep breath and looked at her... "mai... mai kehta ki..." he paused for a second and then again spoke...

"mai kehta ki how can you be so careless? ek ring nahi handle kar sakti tum... mujhe tumse yeh ummeed nahi thi... means tum ring ko kho kaise sakti ho? if you can't handle a ring then how can you handle your love?" she sighed... she knew his answer will be like this but she knew this... but may be he'll understand her... he spoke again... "fir mai kehta ki, sachha pyaar kisi diamond ring mein nahi , sachha pyaar to aankho mein chamakta hai...aur mere liye yeh aankhein hi bahut hai..." hearing this a tear fell down from her eyes...

just then his cell rang and he got to know that his driver came and car parked outside of the park... "i think it's getting late... we should move to our home" he broke the silence again... she nodded and stood up ... both came out of the park and maan sat in his car and geet was standing there and waiting for taxi... just then maan came stopped his car in front of her and slide down the window... "if you have no problem to go with a stranger then come... i'll give you lift till your home" he said genuinely...she looked at him perplexed... "nahi, i'll go by taxi... don't take trouble" she replied back... "don't worry, i'll drop you before a street... mai aapka address nahi puchh raha hu...." he tried to lighten her mood... she looked at him at once... "aisi koi baat nahi hai" she replied to him back... "agar aap yaha aise hi taxi ka wait karti rahi to next birth tak iss route par taxi nahi milne wali..." he told her... that's true... we can't get taxi on this route... she thought in her mind...

she nodded and sat beside her... maan told to his driver to move on... "if you listen me then please tell everything to him tomorrow... how many days you'll hide everything from him... " he tried to give her suggestions... "hmmm" was her reply only... "don't worry, he'll understand you" he said again but this time encouraging words which soothed her... "i hope so"... she said and then her home street came...till now rain had been stopped and chill breeze was still blowing... she stepped out from the car... and maan also... "thanks!" she said... but he was no where to listen... his mind was not there... she was looking so beautiful in the light of street lamp...like she is an actress of old movies... street lamp light was giving her sepia light tone which made her beautiful...

her flicks were touching her face...sometimes her nose, then sometimes, cheeks... why didn't i notice her till yet? her angelic face where the innocent is oozing out... he asked to himself... then he nodded... "tomorrow morning tell everything to him "... she nodded... "tomorrow evening at 5... same place... i want to know everything what all will happen..." he said to her and she smiled at him... it was her first smile that she gave to him... and then she disappeared in the darkness of night...

he came out from his reverie when he felt a drop of rain on his face... he smiled and put that ring in the box and box in his pocket... he went down and what he head by going downside... a sweet melody voice , she is singing a song that too on her engagement... he felt enthusiastic, full with zeal , some kind of energy filled in his mind as well in his body... he went inside and he can see that now yash's wedding rituals are going on...

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara, Ishq Bina Kya Jeena

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara, Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaro

Gud Se Mitha, Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta, Ishq Hai

Vaada Ye Pakka, Ishq Ishq

Dhaaga Ye Kachha, Ishq Hai

his heart fell contended hearing her voice... he can't see her but at least her can hear her melodious voice... cold-drinks are served to them... full glass bottle with a straw in it... he looked at the bottle... and then sipped... he stood up and following the voice , he wants to catch her one glimpse only... he sighed and went inside through the coridoor... and at last he found her... so many girls are present there in one room and she was signing... and other girls were helping her with the song...

he was watching her continuously without blink... and she was so engrossed in her song that she didn't notice... he put his cold drink on the table that is inside the room without making any noise... and hid behind a pillar that is by the side of the room... he was watching her hiding there... he was watching her cute-2 actions while signing the song... the way she was moving her hand and her lips moving simultanously with the words of songs...

Neeche Ishq Hai, Upar Rab Hai

In Dono Ke, Beech Mein Sab Hai

Neeche Ishq Hai, Upar Rab Hai

In Dono Ke, Beech Mein Sab Hai

Ek Nahin, Sau Baatein Kar Lo

Sau Baaton Ka Ek Matlab Hai

Rab Sab Se Sona, Ishq Ishq

Rab Se Bhi Sona, Ishq Hai

Rab Sab Se Sona, Ishq Ishq

Rab Se Bhi Sona, Ishq Hai

suddenly her throat became dry and she wants water asap... she looked here and there and spotted that cold drink bottle there... she grabbed it at once and drank the cold drink using teh same straw till then other girls were singing... his heart was feeling garden-garden after seeing her sipping his jhutha cold drink...

Heera Na Panna, Ishq Ishq

Bas Ek Tamanna, Ishq Ishq

Heera Na Panna, Ishq Ishq

Bas Ek Tamanna, Ishq Ishq

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena…

he felt like he got what he desired... he placed his hand on his heart and acted like typical majnu...

he hid again behind the pillar, he couldn't control on his over flowing emotions and he went along with her in this song...

Ishq Hai Kya, Ye Kisko Pataa

Ye Ishq Hai Kya, Sabko Pataa

Ye Prem Nagar, Anjaan Dagar

Saajan Ka Ghar, Kya Kisko Khabar

Chhoti Si Umar, Ye Lamba Safar

She knew that he is singing, this voice of his, so manly, so sweet, there is a power in his voice, a command, something which she can't explain….. she sighed and enjoyed his words , his emotions…. Other girls were thinking that who is singing but still they love it…..

Ye Ishq Hai Kya, Ye Kisko Pataa

Ye Dard Hai Ya, Dardon Ki Davaa

Ye Koi Sanam, Ya Aap Khuda

Ye Koi Sanam, Ya Aap Khuda, Aap Khuda

Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaara, Ishq Bina Kya Jeena…

Tumne Ishq Ka Naam Suna Hai, Humne Ishq Kiya Hai

he felt calm after singing that too his emotions...when he looked towards her, she glared at him again for spoiling her song but then smiled... he doesn't know why she glared at him first and then smiled but jo bhi ho, he loved every gesture of hers... just then she felt a finger poking his shoulder... he opened his eyes and got to see the naughty glint on the face of annie...

uff not again... he thought... he gave again nervous smile, actually for being caught like this... staring at her and doing things like a roadside majnu... annie grinned inwardly seeing her bhai like this... she thought how can her bhai change like this... he was an angry man when it comes to business, , a little lost when it comes to song but this side she never had seen... she grabbed his hand made her way towards the hall... he was cursing her badly...

Phoolon Ka Gulshan, Ishq Ishq

Kaaton Ka Daaman, Ishq Hai

Phoolon Ka Gulshan, Ishq Ishq

Kaaton Ka Daaman, Ishq Hai

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaron, Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaaron

Ishq Bina Kya Jeena Yaaron, Ishq Bina Kya Marna Yaaron

Gud Se Mitha, Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta, Ishq Ishq

Gud Se Mitha, Ishq Ishq

Imli Se Khatta, Ishq Ishq

finally the songs comes to its end and everyone clapped at her song... actually none knew that who is signing beside of her family members... everyone thought that they heir any singer... after some minutes, he sighed and felt happy that yash's marriage has been over and now his chance came... he'll get engaged... there is no bound of happiness inside his heart... he is feeling like he is the most happiest man on this earth engaging with his love...

later dadi called him on the stage and signaled to bring girl here... he was waiting for her impatiently , he is hearing all kind of music behind him, feeling butterflies in the pit of his stomach, well he is also a human, and he has the right to feel all kind of these emotions...

Annie comes on the stage along with the girl……. The sight of the girl washed away the color of maan's face…. What the hell? Why this girl is doing here instead of geet? Maan thought in his mind just then he heard annie's words which she was telling to him in her teasing mode…… "bhai, here is my would-be Aparna bhabhi"

Ooppss….. was that a wrong place to stop here???




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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

but end me ye kya tha maan is going to be engaged with aparna not geet?????

ye aparna kaun hai re??

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Posted: 12 years ago
ye kya hain...maan engagement with aparna...and who is she...??

aur geet uska kya...???

now eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
but maan is getting engaged to some aparana
nd he too didn't know about that
confusion hi confusion hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update but why such cliff end
and who is this aprana ..Is aprana-maan going to engaged no big wala
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
but ye last mein kya tha
jor ka jhataka bade hi jor se laga
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. update the next part soon. he was suppose to get engaged to geet right then how come aparna came into picture at engagement time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN IS GETTING ENGAGED TO SOME APARNA AND NOT GEET

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