Os:Barish Part 2 page 13 ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Switch your speakers on

Asad had a smirk on his face cause it was he and zoya in the whole khan house.He felt a cool breeze which indicated that its gonna rain.And as it indicted its Started raining.

Asad went and stood near the window and he had a flashback of their 'Bol na halke halke moment.He felt few water drops on his face so he though of closing the window.

ZOYA:Rehene deejiye na Mr.khan!

Asad turned to give her the answer but he was completely lost watching her. He found zoya in the saree which he gifted. she was standing in front of him with a smile!

ZOYA:Kaise lag rahi hun mei?

ASAD:B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

Asad took few steps to reach her.She saw him coming towards her with strong passion..that passion which made both asad and zoya to skip their heartbeat! Then there was a power-cut

ASAD:Zoya?!?
Asad didn't get a reply

ASAD:Zoya?!?!? kaha chali gayi iss andhere mei kuch dikhayi nahi deraha.

Asad turned back as he felt a presence..he found zoya with a candle..Asad was lost in her,everything around was dark he only saw zoya..her eyes which were shining and her tempting lips! Zoya was few steps away from Asad..There was a loud thunder and zoya got scared so she left the grip with which she held the candle and hugged Asad! Asad closed his eyes and felt her close to her.His hand was around her waist and other moved her hair strands which were on the side of her neck. He kissed her neck and zoya clenched his collar with a tight grip while the other held him tightly around his neck and made sure the hug doesn't break!

ZOYA:Mr.khan

ASAD:Ssshhh

Zoya got a smile on her face seeing asad like that..she heard a other thunder which made her hug him more tightly.She dug her face in asad's shoulder! Asad took all the hair which were on her back and brought it front. He moved his fingers teasingly on her back!Asad again bent to give a kiss on her neck and felt zoya couldn't balance as she was standing on her toes.So he got a smile and he lifted her with his arms which were around her waist and made her stand on his legs! Zoya was happy as asad got what she wanted so she hugged him more tightly! Asad could feel zoya's curves..he could feel her heartbeats and her heavy breath!

ASAD:Zo.o.oo.yaa?

ZOYA:Ssshh!

Asad moved his hands on her bare back and then caught her dori and pulled and opened it...There was a thunder again and he felt zoya's shiver so he made his step towards his room...he went a slept on his bed still not breaking the hug.

After this asya knew that rains really lucky for them!

How was it? do comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUEEE plz karna
aise kaise chod diya
and now coming to the view
this is just AWESOME
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihamrm

CONTINUEEE plz karna
aise kaise chod diya
and now coming to the view
this is just AWESOME



Sirf tu hi hai jo meri chinta karti hai dekho kuch 60 people saw it aur aase hi chale gaye! kitna bura laga!
par tu😳 love you niharika!
aur mei continue nahi kar rahi hi!
and glad tujhe pasand aaya aur mei thanks nahi bolungi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: paris-delhi

Continue and pm me plz


Glad you liked it aur mei continue nahi kar rahi hun 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -cyndu-



Sirf tu hi hai jo meri chinta karti hai dekho kuch 60 people saw it aur aase hi chale gaye! kitna bura laga!
par tu😳 love you niharika!
aur mei continue nahi kar rahi hi!
and glad tujhe pasand aaya aur mei thanks nahi bolungi 😆


acha hua thanx nahi boli bach gayi ho tum
aur continue kyun nahi kar rahi ? plz karo ab mera face aisha hai


plzz update karo na plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihamrm


acha hua thanx nahi boli bach gayi ho tum
aur continue kyun nahi kar rahi ? plz karo ab mera face aisha hai


plzz update karo na plzzz


Nahi karungi yaar! agar yeh likhna shuru karungi toh darmiyaan os ka kya karungi...yeh dono baki rehe jayega!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -cyndu-


Nahi karungi yaar! agar yeh likhna shuru karungi toh darmiyaan os ka kya karungi...yeh dono baki rehe jayega!


acha theek hai use complete karne ke baad tho karlo
aur agar isse comments mile tho karna hi padega :P
aur mein bolna bhul gayi
I love you tooo 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!!😃
This forum is going pre-monsoon romance ☺️
AsYa dream dance sequence ka kamal lagta hai.
And yeah your OS was intense and romantic😳
I wish you could continue this.
But its okay if you promise us another work from you. Please, pretty please?😳 *flattering my eyelids, pleading you*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihamrm


acha theek hai use complete karne ke baad tho karlo
aur agar isse comments mile tho karna hi padega :P
aur mein bolna bhul gayi
I love you tooo 🤗


Agar logon ko pasand aaya toh karungi varna sirf tere liye likhna hai toh tumhe Pm kar dungi or vo extra choice tumhe PM kardiya meine pada? vo secret hai! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaforlife

WOW!!😃

This forum is going pre-monsoon romance ☺️
AsYa dream dance sequence ka kamal lagta hai.
And yeah your OS was intense and romantic😳
I wish you could continue this.
But its okay if you promise us another work from you. Please, pretty please?😳 *flattering my eyelids, pleading you*


haan its inspired by that HAWT dance!
and glad you liked it and sorry yeh continue nahi kar rahi par tumhe mera writing utna pasand aaya toh Do read my os:darmiyaan.
and i'll be writing other os's mei kaha jane wali hun batao zara! 😃

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