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HawasKePujari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

loved it...aise beech mein chod diya umeed badake...nt fair re...

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL...
PLEASE WRITE NOW..I WANNA KNOW THE COMPLETE STORY...YOU CANT KEEP ME ON COOKER,,,,,PLEASE UPDATE ...PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yahi hogaya complete story! after reading this i left you guys to imagine the baki part!
update nahi karne wali hun 😃
sorry🤢

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -cyndu-

Yahi hogaya complete story! after reading this i left you guys to imagine the baki part!
update nahi karne wali hun 😃
sorry🤢

DIL KE ARMAAN ANSOON ME BEH GAE...😭

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Aphroditefallen
dont b such a tease sweetheart.. plz write more..or else my poor hyperactive brain which has fallen for asya will keep fantasizing.. sooo b gud n write more soon..:) :*

aww aase pyaari pyaari comment 😭 sorry yaar meine yeh baki ka chod diya hai for you guys to imagine! iske baad raat mei apko accha dreams aayega! 😃😆

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI
DIL KE ARMAAN ANSOON ME BEH GAE...😭

aasa mat kaho yaar!
chal koi nahi meine yeh ekk aur likha hai yeh pado >
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3539605

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith
Sensuous...its good to leave certain things to the imagination of the readers ;)

Love you for this comment...agar mei aur likhti toh aur zyaada romance sub likhti deti jisse i am sure app log pak jate!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu
Nice one.

Thanks yaar..jab bhi mei koi os likhun aur tumari reply na ho toh kuch incomplete sa feeling hoti hai!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: rosamale
Please dont tell me that you are not continuing it.😭 wanna read more...😳 i wish this scenee happens in our serial. Asad and Zoya, in candle light, lost in each others...

Yeh mei yaha par hi rok diya sorry par you guys need to imagine what's next!
glad you liked it
aur haan i want something like this to happen too😳😆