Weekend Treat: VIRIKA SS:Unsought Love (End Pg 34) - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow totally fabulous 👏
amazing
loved it
jeevs missing viren's presence at time of delivery, she didn't notice that he got hurt but still he stood there listen her complains n how she wanted him to b there with her
finally she accepted his love n realised that his presence really matters to her, that was a good gesture on viren's behalf to gift the baby with a unisex bracelet as he had prepared himself for both a girl or a boy.
viren is truly a gem in person even though being engaged to her, he respected her privacy
jeevs in turn surprised viren on his birthday by taking the first step n propose him to marry her

u r right, if u gonna continue it , it will lose its charm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful writing...this update has to be the best...sad that its over but i loved the way it ended...looking forward to another SS soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful ending amii awww virika are just amazing going to miss it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superbbb amazing awesome update.each and every part ws beautifully written.u gv a bestest ending.loved the whole ss.thank uu for such a beautiful virika ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
A amazing update...
Jeevika's emotions as the day approached nd manvi and viren helping her...written so so gud...
manvi and virat by her side and she wanting viren nd then her emotions nd when she her her princess were so nicely written ...❤️⭐️
then when viren entered she said those things but then her guilt when she found out the reason of his delay and her sorry ...viren desire to raise the baby together ...awww...⭐️
the small teasing by Viren ...awww and the bracelet part was so sweet ...❤️
Jeevika's proposal on his birthday...awww
the last part ...
Viren playing with Jiya and encouraging her ...awww❤️
Such a sweet and nice update
A Brilliant and perfect SS...
Luved it...❤️ Hats off to u !!!!
And And Have an amazing Vacation ...:D Enjoy

Edited by shine123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i didnt expected u wil end d story so soon
loved d story allot
do come up wth d new one
wil mised it

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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update👏...loved it to core
beautifully written
jeevika wanting viren by her side
n viren wanting to raise the baby...aww he holded the baby
just loved hw u portrayed virika's emotions
sad that this amazing story came to an end
bt must say what a perfect ending
This is one of my favorite stories
thanx for pm n plz do write more stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just cant see one of my favouritest stories ending..!!
how i just wished you continued it..!!
But the ending could not get much better..it was just PERFECT with whatever it had!!
This update has really made me speechless
Thank you so much for bringing in such a masterpiece..!!
Still a lot more to say but i have got to go!!
This was seriously the best ever on IF and will remain..!!
Do write more of this

Thank you for taking out time to give us such treats!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant Job, Amii!!!
I really enjoyed reading this SS! It was a perfect depiction of Viren and Jeevika and Virat and Manvi introduction was really very good.
I really liked the diary format of this whole SS. I could not stop smiling when Viren told Jeevika about his feelings. He was so understanding!
Great job! Another amazing piece written by you which I enjoyed reading a lot!!!
I apologize for the late reply! Exams were happening in April! But now I am all done :)
How was your end of term? Hope it went well!
Thank you for the PM's!
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is really an unsought love

amii u did all this great ur work
is truely amazing
never ever in my life i read a beautiful story like this one👏

thiss all was more than perfect
a fabulous end

although i was sad inside seeing the word 'the end'

love u alot and thanks for maing our past time memorible

continue ur work soon😊

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