love hurts (swaron SS) *completed* - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Beautiful SS... Flawlessly written !!!

Loved how swayam demanded her to say that she loves him😛 ...
Liked the flow of this SS..no nonsense kind of flow!
Swayam just went to get cloths and by the time he came back she left again ... Swaron and misunderstanding always go hand in hand ... Again swayam has to find her out to make things straight ...poor guy has gone through lot !!!!
Loved the proposal and a beautiful end to a beautfil SS


thanks a lot i am glad u felt so..
most of loved it though it was chessy...swayam is always chessy isnt he!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie0412

Awesome update saf!!👏 thnks a lot shwetz

The end was beautiful😊
Do write more on swaron👍🏼 hehe i surely will try!!😆
Waiting for ur next story😉 keep waiting ill update pritty sooon!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
I loved the ending.N I m happy that u didn't stretch it.It was just perfect
Loved it


thanks a lot...i am really glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi sorry for extremely late comments...actually first time I got PM for this one, and read thru all episodes together today...must say it was a beautiful concept and u handled the emotions very well - esp teh last chapter was a treat to read...do write more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Would comment as soon as I get a chance to read! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum
just luved it
bt too short
really gr8
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Posted: 12 years ago
read in one gooo... woowwwiee. thnxxx fr pm..

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