If Only You Saw Me (9) - Page 56

Originally posted by: AKSashadow

Meri Bardaasht ki intehaa ho gayi,
Ab main aur nahi sah sakta,
Partner mere siwa mere dildaar ka,
Koi aur nahi rah sakta.

Wrote Few lines which would be running in Maan's mind in present scenario.

Thank you for the picture! And your words were kind of bang on but they made me laugh! 😆 No offence intended, though.

Now for update-

Geet mind wandering over date again and again . Still telling herself it's normal dinner and suppresing all her feelings. Now, I want to see how long she can run away from her own heart which is jumping to love maan.😃
Let's just see how long she can run away and how successful she is...

He's your brother and he's proved it. Never
mind that he's done it after three years.' 😆

'Don't tell me she slapped you after that.' 🤣

She is telling everywhere that she agreed on date but when other person says the same. She says its only casual dinner.🤣

Yes, but the latter is meant to be her feelings towards the date.

I cut the call myself, not wanting to hear any more of their conversation with me as the subject. That's wierd, people often eavesdrop to litsen about themself and she cut the call.

Well, people like Geet do exist because I personally know someone who doesn't like to eavesdrop on something being discussed about themselves. After all, there's a reason that they say, 'eavesdroppers never hear well of themselves'.

'And and and, whatever these kids have planned, dancing and all,(I was thinking dating is also planned) it'll also be practiced before dinner.'🤣

I come to the
conclusion that all those movies are stupid where the heroine turns and
looks at the hero when he wills,
without him having to say a word. -This also happen but when love reaches extreme level which is yet to come where one person sight does not leave other person and vice versa. As restless consume heart when the loved ones is not in front of eyes for even single moment.

Now that's something you believe, but my opinion is that there's only a very few cases when such things happen.

Ranbir 😡 maneet ko alag kiya. Maana ki jealous karke wo Maan ki love story ko push dena chahta hoga, lekin jealousy ke alawa bhi kai aur tarike hai love birds ko milane ka.
Just one wish, I want maan to prove that he is Ranbir brother once again. The taste of jealousy which Maan is tasting, I want Maan to repay it to the bridegroom in much worse way(If not alone then he can also pair up with ayush for proper payback).

Well, that's Ranbir's way of pulling his brother's leg. We can just hope that it's only for the better. 😆

Your request is noted and I'll pass it on to Maan. 😆

And at last,Maan ki hone wali gharwali aur aadhi gharwali uske ghar me aane wale hai😃 , tab to kafi maza aane wala hai , aakhir hasi mazaak aur shararat jo badh jaayega.

Let's see what happens when the two girls come over...

Awesome update😃. Waiting for next.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

First of all I wanted to say about Choti's reaction to Geet's hair. Younger sisters are always like this. Aren't they? We always concentrate on more pressing issues like talking and all, while they go off the tangent making us pull our hair. Once na skype was giving me some trouble and after half an hour I successfully logged in to video chat with my choti and the first thing she asks was not what the problem was. Instead she says "Oye hoye Di loose hair and all huh?"

I wanted to bang my head. Literally.

Younger sisters, I tell you.

@Bold: Ek dum sach! At least in my case! 😆

I hadn't known I was actually going to pull out a memory of yours again with the video chat, and that too, the one where you wanted to bang your head. 😆

Anyway so you see I lub Raya already and I forgot to ask you what does the name mean? You know when it slipped from Geet's mouth about the date and Raya was grinning, I knew it that it would be fun to have her at the Khurana's for a week! I certainly am someone who couldn't wait for it.

The name Raya has two pronunciations and two different meanings. One is pronounced as 'Raa-ya' and it means 'the girl who loves' but the second one - which is the one intended here - is pronounced as 'Ray-ah' and it means 'friend'.

Let's see how much of a fun Raya can be when she 's at the Khuranas. 😃

You know when these people were studying so much in the update, I myself felt guilty for abandoning studies for so long and went back to studying and completed a major portion of the syllabus can you believe it? LOL. I ain't kidding. Really, but I find it amusing that even after I come to IF certain things would be in the back of your head reminding you of your duties rofl.

Now that was something I didn't expect! You really did study after reading the chapter? 😆

Anaya's reaction was quite'expected. I lub her. You always have one friend like her haina? 😆 I have no idea why am I drawing similarities of these characters to people in my life. I lost a screw I think 😆

Most people do have such a friend. 😊

Here, I found your screw. Fix it back in place. 😆

Oh yes this isn't going to be nice, but who wants it nice baby? 😆 I don't know why but I wasn't disappointed at Ranbir's change of couples move rather am overjoyed. If it is left for these two they would take it slow and snail paced so it is right for Neil to make an appearance.

We like it bad baby, huh Shika? 😆

You're probably the only one who's overjoyed at Ranbir's 'kabadda' as Onir has called it. 😆

And oh, I have noticed something.

I decide to keep my friendship with him and not let him think the other way. I don't want him to believe that we can actually be more than friends when I'll just be going away within some time, not knowing if I'll ever be able to come back to this place.

So does that mean she would have no problem had the situation be otherwise that if she stayed at the same place, had she given the idea a shot? Meaning, she had no problem with the concept of having a future with him but only wants to keep her distance because she thinks it isn't possible in given circumstances?

That is a very keen observation. Not something I'd have otherwise brought up. But since you have already pointed it out, you'll get the answer in the next few chapters.

Okay now after putting this up I feel more joyous. And oh by the way when is the next update? According to our old tradition, I update my comment so late that by the time I do, you come with a new chapter. Haina? I updated my comment. Where's the new chapter? 😆

I was trying to keep up with the tradition but I failed. 😆 The new chapter is still in my iPod's notes in a very basic form.

Originally posted by: heytal

Superb update Maari

Tying so many loops together

Enjoyed reading it

😃

Thanks Heytal! 😳

The great plan of not exactly a date goes down the drain

Grrr😡 tests and assignments always play villians to our plans

Maaneet ans Anaya missing Ayush

Ofcourse his electrifying presence is contagious😳

Good to have him back and how😊

Our plans don't always go smoothly, especially when tests and assignments stand there like a hurdle. 😆

Ayush speaking up about his loss made me too emotional

I guess its the harshest truth but a fact which can never be denied😒

Life moves on...

🤗

Yes, life moves on...

Ayush-Anaya sneaking out and Maaneet remembering the not so pleasant encounter😆

The small moment in library was so cute

followed by their Algebra problem convo and finally the Date😉

They couldn't help but be reminded of that enoc**ter. 😆

Ayush challenges Maan😳

Haaye would love Ayush to give them a much needed push

Ayush is trying to play cupid because he knows that this slow-mo Maan won't do anything otherwise. 😆

Ranbir and Maan's mom teasing the loverboy😆

They love to this him! 😆

The Date I guess the wait truly paid

No kabab mein haddi😉

YEp, no kabab mein haddi. 😳

Loved the small instances that You incorporated

the pepper spray, his possessive hold in the tower or the most informal yet serious Proposal...

Glad you liked it Heytal! 😊

Maari just awesome

Tu itne bade updates likhti kaise ho yaar

But we are lucky to have them😳

Bade toh hote hain lekin itne irregular hote hain. 🤔 I think it's better to have shorter regular chapters.

Thoroughly liked it

😃

Thanks Heytal! 🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

What filler it was a total dhamaal update yaar

👏 👏 👏

Thank you! 😳

Bechaare Maaneet sab unpe toot pade😕

Their date has become a talk of the town😉

Maaneet should have written an essay on

An eventful Saturday

and circulated over😆

Essay se zyaada tezi se toh aise hi baat phail gayi. 😆

Geet's mom not very ok with the date agreement😔

Maari no hurdles pweez

But she didn't say anything, did she? She didn't limit her daughter on going for the 'dinner'. 😉

Anaya got to know the boys top secret🤢

Hope even she helps Geet to make a much needed breakthrough😊

Chalo Geet's look finalized for the date😎

Anaya ko toh pata chalna hi tha. 😃

The family lunch was total paisa vasool

Maan ki bajaai 🥳😆

Bechara Maan! Sab uski bajate hain aur hum haste hain! 😆

Geet going to sasuraal for dinner😳

And Maan's mom inviting her family was so thoughtful and touching

Maybe now Geet's mom will acknowledge her and Maan's relation

Uhh... Geet's mother has already acknowledged the kind of relationship her daughter shares with Maan. Not the one Maan has in his heart though. 😊

Gharwaali and aadhi gharwali gonna stay at Khurana House

Maan ki toh nikal padi☺️

Ab iss bande ko koi aqal de ke ye time zaaya na karey! 😆

Ranbir😡

Maaneet ko alag kar diya🥺

Maari yeh kya kiya

Main toh khush ho rahi thi

KH bhi imagine kar rahi thi

Ranbir had to have his fun, you see. 😆

But dont' worry, it's going to be for the better, and who knows you might still get KH or something like that. The third dance is still undecided, remember? 😉 BUT!! Don't keep high hopes just yet. 😆

Maaneet Date bhi kha gaye😒

Maari you better make amends and fast🤢

Amends I will make for sure. 😳

Loved the masal update

And waiting for the shaadi special update🤓

Shaadi special update will come soon too!

Thanks Heytal! 🤗

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Awesome update

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Mindblowing update.
Sad Maan's two plans r spoiled Wednesday date with geet and pairing with her for dance 😆
Loving this shaddi environment looking forwards to see lots of masti's 😃

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

nice update

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Ranbir's so dushta..😈 He spoiled Maan's plan to dance with Geet.. 😆 Amazing update.😊

Originally posted by: saf24

Superb update. Really liked the background to the exam preparations and Ranbir's wedding activities. You've mixed the Maan and Geet sections pretty well. Fab job as always

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

fabulous dear

thanx for the pm

cont soon