Black and White; A Random Writing Snippet

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is just a random thing I wrote, and I wanted to share it with all of you. It isn't a fanfiction/one-shot, but you can read it if you want. Let me know what you think! I wrote it all in one go, and I didn't really edit it because it was mostly just what I felt like writing (don't ask why I felt like writing this, I honestly don't know). It isn't really happy. I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this lol! Let me know what you think though!

Black and White

I was living in a world of black and white, I never knew what colours were until I met you. I thought you loved me, loved me a lot, but then you hurt me, you hurt me a lot. You've forgotten the sin you committed, but I will never forget about it. For you, I was only in the realm of yesterday. For me, you're my yesterday, my today, my tomorrow, my eternity.

My love, you are my eternity.
What can I say? You filled colour in my black and white world. I had nobody, not a single person. I was all alone, just me against the world, then I met you. You made me laugh. You made me so happy that I couldn't even begin to describe the immeasurable bliss I felt when I was around you.
Then you ripped my heart out of my chest, literally.
You hurt me, you hurt me love. Darling, we were supposed to get married. I managed to wear that bright red wedding dress, but I never expected that the colour of the dress would fade behind another shade of red. I didn't think you would cut out my heart. I never thought that you would so ruthlessly kill the woman inside of me. I never expected you to make me the happiest person in the world, only to take my life away like this in the end.
Oh sweet darling, I never expected this from you. If you hadn't torn my heart apart, I might have been able to forgive you. Now I'm heartless, but I'm still not as heartless as you.
My bloodstained wedding dress was covered with dirt as you buried me alive. You thought I was dead, but I was very much alive my love. You killed me on my wedding day, on our wedding day. I was the woman you claimed to love. You had a hidden agenda, other intentions, you never loved me. You just loved to use me until you found the opportunity to throw me away in the most brutal way. And you did exactly that, you used me and when you got bored of me, you promised me a wedding before you slashed open my chest and destroyed the only thing that would keep you in my memories; with the demise of my heart and body, my soul was wiped out too.
Thank you my love, after showing me the false colours of the world, I've come to know what black and white truly is.

Edited by ilovepyaar - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's deep, very deep! Good Job! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What the hell was that? Dude, are you in a state of depression or something? LOL!

Now seriously...that was one of the most deep things I have ever read!

I'm gonna ask you, how in the world did this idea come to you!

But, even though it's sad, it was awesome...just amazing!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow dear...u are so goodπŸ‘ continue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are u depressed saffi?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone!

LOL no I'm not Lyra! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I...don't quite know what to say. This is disturbing on quite a few levels, and maybe I'm too exhausted to put things together, but the ambiguity of this piece is chilling. The details that are provided are even more awful, especially if I think of Aarti as the narrator. The transition from "black and white" to "color" to "red" to "black and white" again...Perhaps it's all black now. I would have loved to see more added onto this, because my curiosity has been pricked again. Wow.

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